Alrighty, here is chapter two of the edit. I kinda don't have anything to say at the moment, other than thank you for looking at my story and giving it another chance, hopefully it has improved a lot.
Disclaimer: oh how I wish I owned Avatar, but I just don't.
My eyes shot open and immediately, I regretted it, so I snapped them shut once again. I could see the light protruding my eyelids, and slowly this time; I opened my eyes, adjusting to the light as I scanned the room. I couldn't see anything out of the span of light that I was sitting under.
"Ah, so you're finally awake," said a man, the same voice that I heard beforeā¦I was sucked into the television. It startled me as I recalled what had happened. So many impossible things happened to me in such a short span
I noticed three figures standing just outside the light, I could only see the dark shadows of their bodies, but I was sure there were only three of them. It was then I finally noticed that I was strapped to the chair I was sitting in. "Uh, why am I tied to a chair," my voice somehow remained steady as I asked them. I did my best to appear calm, though I sure as heck didn't feel that way. The palms of my hands were hot with sweat, and I took slow, deep breaths to keep myself calm. Who are these guys? What do they want with me?
The same man chuckled, "so you wouldn't fall."
I knew that I would have fallen out of the chair while I was out, because I'm clumsy like that, apparently he knew too. I shyly smiled, "I thank you for that."
The man stepped out into the light, finally revealing himself. His wavy brown hair barely touched his broad shoulders, and his exotic sea blue eyes were focused on me, a playful flame dwelling within them. He wore a light blue robe of the classic Greek or Roman fashion. I don't know what it was about him, but his appearance caught me by surprise, and the words slipped out of my mouth before I could stop them, "are you an angel?"
The corner of his lip pulled up, "Something of the sort." He kneeled down by the chair and untied me, "but I am much older than I appear to be." He looked to be in his mid-twenties, maybe even early twenties, "we work with maintaining different dimensions, or universes, whatever you want to call it. We aren't necessarily dead, nor are we alive- it's complicated. On the other hand, you are needed elsewhere."
When the ropes dropped, I moved my arms around, allowing the blood to flow. It felt good to be able to move them again, being restrained is not my thing. Then again, is it anyone's? I looked up at the man, or whatever he is, and said, "I'm confused, could you elaborate as to why I am here?"
He smirked knowingly; I hate it when people smirk like that, "what I mean is that your talents could be used where it is currently needed."
I stared at him, even more confused than I was a minute ago, "What talents? It's not like I have any."
He barked out in laughter, it wasn't the genuine kind, it was more like 'you're an idiot and I'll laugh at you for it' kind. It made me feel extremely stupid, and he replied, "You will see eventually, some talents you have already discovered and others will be revealed throughout your journey. But your current traits, such as your clumsiness and all those other fun things will still be the same. You will be you." Great, he likes making fun of me, and he also knew my upcoming question, "and your appearance will remain with you, but your clothing will change as you enter the other dimension. Also, you will have a new set of memories, but you will not completely forget the world in which you were born."
I nodded, somewhat understanding the bit that he just told me, but I didn't say anything, I was trying to comprehend the different dimension part.
A black vortex appeared rather violently on the wall in front of me. "Now if you step through here, you will enter your new life," he told me, "and what will happen right after you enter, I am deeply sorry."
I stood up and stared at him, "okay, now why do I want to go through that vortex thing if you say you're sorry for what is about to happen to me?"
He smirked, "because you're being pulled through."
I sighed, not this again. I felt the air around me pulling me in, there was nothing I could do, so I didn't resist the tug. The three men looked at me, as if they were watching a movie. What do they do to occupy their time?
I was finally pulled through and the surroundings vanished, I was in nothingness, then I fell through another opening, and I was high up in the sky. "Oh, so that's what they meant," I muttered, staring wide-eyed at the ground far below me as it rapidly came closer and closer. If I wasn't falling, I would have enjoyed the view, everything was so green and fresh-looking, even the smell that clogged my nose was nice.
I was high above the trees when a small clearing finally entered my vision. I outstretched my arms and legs, so I would fall slower than if I was huddled. I was too shocked to scream, and if I tried, my mouth would have quickly run dry. In a few quick seconds, I crashed into the ground.
And we are now in the Avatar world! Yay! Now I'll put up the next chapter up in the next few days.
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