"Bring the kits to me!"

The Fire Lord drew his tail straight and curved it around the Great Rock. the Shadows of Fireclan were bringing the kit to him.

"This kit will be known as Night, and slink forever in the shadows with her 'friends' he will have"

he took the kit and dipped her into the stream, as the ceremony was supposed to go.

"From this day forward, the kit is under the total control of the Fire Lord, and since she hunts with the shadows she will do as follows:

give her prey to thunders, then rivers, and then winds, only until she catches her fourth prey will she finally eat

will answer me when I speak, and cannot talk when i am talking, or a thunder

will adress those who rank above her with outmost respect, and do the correct posture of submission.

will obey."

the kit mewled softly and crawled back to her mother, Shade.

she was weeping.

"Now, a Thunder's kit!"

the Fire Lord yowled and a kit, the color of Autumm leaves.

"this kit will be known as Lightning, for he is a descendant of Thunder, the best leuteinant of the first Fire Lord!

he will be the glory of this clan! all he has to do is obey me, and the Rivers, Winds, and Shadows will bring him his feast!

for he deserves the best, and this kit will acheive greatness...!"

the mother couldn't watch anymore.

she turned around, and yowls of approval rang out, for Lightning.

nothing will change. thought the mother cuddling her kit as she walked to her den.

Nothing.


thanks everyone! i thought i'd start at the naming ceremony, and by the way, the don't beleive in starclan.

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