Ok 2 chapter Metro meeting
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Oh I love you go and get yourselves a cookie! And here is my next chapter I will be introducing a few states! Now tell me if you see a Mary sue or Marty sue! Ok! A few things 1 I can handle critiques! Heck most reviews Said work on the character or had ideas for the story and I jumped and squealed. You can out right say it sucked, and I will say ok but expect a pm saying how can I make it better? Tell me what is wrong, I want to make this the best story, cause my dream I want to be a novelist, grammar check me, spell check me! I am not a wimp to those critiques! I love it when people review!
Also clearing up something this is not an Oc/America it is an Oc/state :} sorry if you were confused.
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New Yorks POV
I sighed at my fighting siblings, we had gathered for a meeting in a few weeks, some were still excepting that they have had a new president through the past almost month. We will never get anything done! I am one of the oldest, Hell I am one of the 13 original! It is Deli as the oldest and little D.C. as the youngest.
"SAMMY!"
"YORKIE!" I flinched at the two loud voices. My name is Samuel Jones aka New York.
"What is it Jen and Abby?" Jennifer Jones is Massachusetts, Her hair was shoulder length, straight, light golden hair and blue eyes, she had tight jeans and a 'Harvard' jacket; she was smiling with Pennsylvania, Abigail Jones…. Has had a thing for being an absolute Prussian since the revolution, So her hair is white and she has red contacts, He white shirt hung of her shoulder and said 'I am awesome! And you are not!' her jeans were like Jen's they both had red converse on. Both looked around 14.
"Take us out to do stuff!" Jen smiled
"Yes! Awesome me, needs to shop!" Abby smirked, sure she said awesome but she dropped it sometimes and they both have a thing for shopping.
"Why?" I sighed
"Cause!" they smiled and grabbed my hands and dragged me out of the D.C. house. It was big enough to where EVERYBODY had a room with 5 guest rooms! Yes 55 rooms and 10 bathrooms… I am glad we have our own houses.
They dragged me to the metro and we went to Virginia.
"So we left the capitol just so you can shop?"
"YES!" They yelled at me, scaring half of the passengers.
"Couldn't you ask Lizzy to go with you?"
"We did." Jen said sighing
"But she said 'No you twits! I have to stay and make sure we don't have another war!'" Abby said in a horrible British accent. They both sighed.
I sat down next to a… Boy, I believe, the person had tight jeans that flared and practically covered their shoes and a big navy blue jacket that said 'Camp Pali' with 2 pine trees. Their head was down so he couldn't see their face. The frame looked quite small, The person was next to a girl who was pretty she had a nice smile and a book in hand, he did not know the name, she had dark brown hair with light brown bangs, her jean were skinny, she had black flats, her shirt was thigh showing off her curves. It ruffled like a pirate shirt she had black beaded jewelry. Her forest green eyes scanned the book. I will admit I was staring. She must have felt because she locked her eyes with mine and waved with a small smile I waved back.
"My name is Jeslyn, what is your name?"
"Samuel, why talk to a stranger though?"
"Why reply? Because you wanted to, and I wanted to start a conversation! Sleeping beauty here is not much of company." She said pointing a thumb over to the apparently sleeping person.
"They're sleeping? That is not safe?" not with strange people on the metro.
"Andrew is tough, only I can wake this one, anyone else will get flipped." She shrugged, and then smirked.
"Ah, where are you going?"
"Arlington, Virginia! There aren't any good malls in D.C.!" She sighed annoyed
"And you tell me this?" She was too trusting. She giggled and put a hand on the Person in-between us.
"Oh if you are a creeper and fallow, Andrew here is a ninth degree black belt." She smiled charmingly.
"Oh… well I am going to the same place my sisters dragged me out of the house so they could go to the mall." I pointed to my 2 sister giggling to each other. She giggled.
"Well maybe we could go together! Stronger in numbers you know."
"Yeah sure let me introduce you to my sisters. Jen! Abby! Come here and meet Jeslyn and Andrew…." Jen and Abby walked over they introduced themselves and made quick friends. I glanced to the sleeping person next to me, well his name is Andrew.
"Hey Jeslyn, How do you know him?" she went in to a giggle fit.
"What?" I said trying to figure out what I said. She shook her head and pulled off Andrew's hood to….
"Oh god… I am sorry." Andrew was a she; she actually looked identical to Jeslyn except her hair was curly, like in big curls.
"Wow, Sammy you screwed up." Abby said, looking at the girl.
"But I thought she was a boy, too. You two twins?" Jen said looking closely to the girls face. She nodded with a smile.
"It is ok. I bet it was a little hard to tell. No matter how much I tell her to embrace her female side, but she never listens." She glared at the sleeping girl.
"NEXT STOP: ARLINGTON, VIRGINIA!" The intercom stated Jeslyn poked Andrew in the temple and causing the sleeping girl to whimper and try to wake up.
"Jess! We don't have school today! It is Saturday!" She whined rubbing her eyes.
"Yes, but we are on a Metro to Virginia!" She shot up and looked around, then turned to Jeslyn.
"How the HELL did you get me on a Metro and to VIRGINIA no less!"
"Oh it was quite easy I told you to get dressed as soon as you came down for breakfast, and you complied!" she smiled, Andrew opened her mouth but shut it and let on a glare,
"Conniving little!" she grumbled and rubbed her stomach. "No wonder I am hungry." Jeslyn just rolled her eyes.
"And when are you not?" Andrew actually looked like she was thinking about it.
"Point, but still you know how I am in the morning." She said yawning.
"I know like a mindless zombie, Oh! Andy! We have friends accompany us!" She said happily.
"….. What?" I glanced to Abby and Jen they looked amused. These girls were something else.
"Andy this is Samuel, Abigail, and Jenifer!" She said pointing to each of us. Andrew looked horrified.
"What?" She said again shocked, she glared at us mostly me though. I glared back.
"What?" I asked ticked off a bit. I mean we met for what 10 seconds and she already hates me! Wow she is the opposite of her sister.
"What you? Some type creeper?" Abby burst in to laughter, I only glared more, though she seemed unfazed.
"You have known me for what 10 seconds and you are already accuse me of something I am not?" I stood up to realize I towered over her. Still she stood her ground.
"No, not accuse I stated a fact, you are trying to pick up my sister by following her out here, and say-!"
"ANDREW!" Jeslyn shot up and glared at her sister
"What!" She shouted back.
"I am really, I mean, really sorry! She is really overprotective and really untrusting." She said to me sheepishly … I guess Andrew would be a bit overprotective. I mean I would do the same if my sisters and I were human, we are states, the United States, We are strong, but I am still over protective.
"I am not untrusting! I trust you!" She said, with a small hurtful look.
"Then trust me when I put out my trust!" she said almost pleadingly. Andrew rolled her eyes and sighed fine.
"I love you!" Jeslyn hugged her mirror opposite.
"Hey my name is Andrew nice to meet you!" She said with a small smile.
"WE ARE NOW IN ARLINGTON, VIRGINIA"
"Oh! That is our stop!" I sighed as the girls pulled Andrew and I out and dragged us to the mall.
"Ok! First stop!" Jeslyn started
"Amber Crombie and Fitch!" We were then dragged again. Andrew and I soon found ourselves on two chairs near the dressing room.
"That Abby girl… Are those her natural eye and hair colors?"
"No, but our uncle knows a guy whose is naturally albino."
"Ok… was Jess the first to start the conversation?" She asked glancing to me.
"Yeah."
"Oh… God Jess… She is too… trusting… sorry for snapping, Jess and dad are all I have, mom passed and my… friends are on the other side of the country… Sorry I tend to let things slip out." She said a bit sheepishly and sad.
"Oh it is ok, let's start over," I said with a bit of a smile "Samuel."
"Andrew… You, Sam, you wouldn't have happened to know a kid named D.C.?"
"Yeah he is my little brother… how do you know him?" How did she know him? Wait!
"You are the Amazing Andrew he keeps going on and on about?" I said he kept going on about "this amazing girl named Andrew and how she is his Lois Lane and how she will be his girlfriend when he is a superhero. But he said she was sweet and nice… this is the exact opposite
"Oh, D.C. talks about me how cute! Tell him I said hi!" She smiled, and giggled. I blinked, she is different from this morning, and given every time her sister said something to me she would glare.
"Sam, I am hungry! Our sisters are busy, you want to go and grab a bite?" Andrew asked me. I blinked.
"Why ask me, you are a black belt can't you go alone?" She smirked and chuckled.
"Yeah, but I can't leave you alone so close to my sister, I will take a while to earn my trust and respect so I say use every moment you have with me to gain my trust if you want to be close to my sister." I sighed, scratch everything before about different, also she would probably drag me out if I said no, so I nodded we stood up and walked out of the store.
"Good god that place reeked!" She said rubbing her nose. I laughed one thing to agree on.
"There was enough cologne sprayed in there to cover Texas!" She laughed at that.
"How do they keep all of that in one place you would think it would linger?" She said throwing her arms behind her head. I glanced to her it was a head, she was a head shorter. I noticed her face lit up with a bright smile, I like that look.
"FOOD!" She ran right to a Mongolian bar, before turning around and stopping in front of me.
"What?" She crossed her arms over her chest.
"Are you coming?"
"Oh. I was thinking on going to the McDonalds." Ok dad has us ALL hooked on the stuff.
"Ok… Where will we meet?" She looked up to me and tilted her head.
"Ummm… I will come and get you." I said it wouldn't take that long right?
"Ok." And she walked to the Mongolian place.
Andrew's POV
Sam… well he looked like D.C. in 11 years but his fly away was on was by his right ear, D.C.'s was on his left… So Sam was D.C.'s brother? But Mr. Jones looked so….young. I piled my noodles, vegetables and meat, at least 3 feet up. People just stared as I poured my sauce, I like to eat and I like to work out. Jeslyn is a careful Junky food eater (cause she wants to keep her "perfect figure"), sure I like my chocolate, and it is the answer to ALL girls' problems! I am still trying to figure out Mister Jones job! ... And age, I mean that Sam is like what 16? I glanced towards the McDonalds, yep he was still there.
"Thank you." I handed the chief money and took my Mongolian food out with a big soda. I walked to the McDonalds, Sam was grabbing his food, and He turned and looked surprised as I walked up to him.
"You said you would come and get me…. I win!" I smiled.
"What did you win?"
"I beat you to the punch of getting here first." I snorted. He smiled, oh wow that was a cute smile, NO! BAD ANDY! DON'T FALL FOR THE ENEMY!
"Shall we sit?" Not trusting my voice I nodded, we sat down of to the corner of the food. I was pushing down a massive blush, it felt like a date! I never been on a date, Is this what it is like? NO BAD ANDY! 'Take my mind off the cute guy in front of me! Geez He is D.C.'s brother! Look food!'
"Oh~! I waited all morning for something to eat!" he chuckled as he pulled out a big Mac, I skill fully broke and positioned my chopsticks. I put the delicious food in my mouth, I glanced to Sam. He probably has a crush on my sister, I mean sure I tricked him into coming with me I just don't like to eat alone. Grrrr! Why was my sister so pretty? She gets lots of guys! She mostly rejects them to, and my sister can be really cold, if you take one step out of line her little world, you have a bitch. If she really likes a guy they have to first get through me, sometimes if Jess really likes them she will go through me. But if you take a wrong turn out of her picture perfect world she will become a beast half of the time the guys run from her then me. Sometimes her crushes mistake me for her, which is also the story on how I became the scariest girl in school.
"So, Andrew you like those noodles cold? 'Cause they are get that way." I blinked out of my musings.
"Oh sorry, I tend to space."
"It is ok." He said with a smirk and ate his fries.
"So how exactly do you know my little brother?" I looked up he stared right at me. I sighed and put a piece of meat in my mouth. I though it over on telling him if I said I meet him in my room that would seem creepy, I should lie but why? I mean if I said I met him in the white house he would want an explanation…
"I met him on national park!" He looked at me like I had a second head.
"You mean National Mall?"
Blink "What?"
Blink "That is what that big field in front of the white house is National mall."
Blink "Well that is a weird name."
Suspicious look "So how did you really meet D.C.?"
Glare "I told you!"
Deadpan "I could tell you were lying."
Wide eyes "H-how?" he chuckled; I glared hard as he threw his trash away. I messily ate the rest of my food as he finished and walked to throw the cup way.
"First- your voice wavered-." He stated coming back.
"DID NOT, you jerk!"
"Did to, second you hesitated." He put his hands on the table next to my food; he is right next to me.
"So what if I hesitated I was eating." I snorted.
"True, but finally." He grabbed my chin and gently rose it to I was looking right at him his thumb brushed the corner of my mouth, most likely food was there, his head swooped down close to mine our noses barely touching, I felt my face heat up.
"And your eyes told me you were lying." He said in a whisper. I didn't speak, I could not speak. His face was so close, he also sounded like an interrogator. BE STRONG ANDY! PUSH HIM AWAY! Was my minds comment, but my heart… that was a different story- Kiss him! It chanted. I could just feel the stares the people were watching us like a TV. Show! Then I heard clapping he let go of me and turned, I looked over to see Jenifer smirking and clapping, Abigail smirking with a camera, and Jess had a huge smile on her face… wait, a camera!
"What?" He said coolly, pushing himself away.
"Nothing! But Jen you clapped at the wrong time! They looked ready to kiss!" my face went beat red. She snapped the camera shut
"N-no! He was interrogating me! Give me the CAMREA!" I shouted, Abigail just smirked
"No!" She laughed. So the great chase of me casing Jess and her new friends started… Why me?
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Next chapter! All the states meet the Pres. and his family! Oh New York is in for a surprise! No Jess and Andy have no idea what so ever about Alfred being America! Oh I have to add him in the mix! Along with the rest of Hetalia! Well thank you!
