I felt so special in just a day of me uploading the first chapter I got 3 followers and 1 review i wrote another chapter... haha don't laugh I suck at writing stories... Write me reviews please! Oh and if you like my this story tell your friends... haha So anyways... Heres chapter 2!

A man is already half way in love when any woman listens to him. -Brenden Francis

Rachel shut her eyes, but Raphael still didn't take his eyes off of her beautiful face. He has saved hundreds of girls like her but he couldn't help but feeling that she was special. He only wanted her for himself, he didn't want his brothers to even look at her. Raphael looked up from Rachel's face to see that his brothers were staring at him with a worried look on their face.

"Why ya guys starin' at me like that?"

"Raph just there for a few minutes you were smiling." The blue masked turtle said.

Raph rolled his eyes, "I can't smile when I save a girl's life Leo?"

"Dude, we save like millions of girls you never smile like that!" said the orange masked turtle.

"Shut up Mikey, if I wasn't holdin' her right now you woulda had a black eye just then." Raph was getting mad at his brothers for pestering him.

"What do you suppose we do with her Leo, leave her here?" The purple masked turtle asked.

"Why the fuck would we leave her here Donny?"Raph shouted at his little brother.

Leo eyed Raph, "Raph has a point we can't leave her here she has seen what we look like, we should take her to our home." The brothers nodded their heads in agreement with their eldest brother and walked through the sewer tunnels to their home. As they walked Leo was wondering about Raph who was at the end of the moving group and was staring at the girl in his arms. Leo decided to let his brothers walk ahead as he stay back with Raph who didn't even realized he was behind the group.

"Hey Raph you okay?"

"Ya I'm cool." Raph only looked up at Leo for a few seconds then he turned his attention back to the girl in his arms.

"I'm just saying Raph but I think you like her." Leo questioned. Raph stopped walking and blushed.

"No she is just another chick who needed her ass saved."

"Really, then why are you blushing?" Leo knew he caught his brother.

"Shut up and keep walkin'."

"I wasn't the one who stopped walking." Raph just kept walking. "Its okay if you like her Raph." Raph still just kept walking. He knew he liked her, she is beautiful." He observed her silky brown hair that turned golden blonde or red when the moonlight hit it in a certain way. And just before she closed her eyes he noticed she had the prettiest hazel eyes he has ever seen. He loved her freckles that went across her cheeks and nose it made her eyes stand out. Lastly he observed her tender lips, which looked soft with a light pink tone to it and it made her smooth and perfect tan skin look tanner. He wanted to just kiss her tender lips and show her how much he cared about her his thoughts about kissing her were interrupted when they arrived home. He carefully sat her down on the couch making sure not to wake her. But Rachel's eyes fluttered opened anyways.

"Hey guys she awake." Raph shouted to his brothers who in a second were there surrounding the couch including a girl with red hair.

"Where am I?" Rachel asked.

"We took you to our home because we didn't know where you lived." Donny told her.

"Oh okay, you guys saved my life didn't you?" Rachel said as she sat up.

"We kinda save life's a lot its one of our specialties" Mickey said.

Rachel giggled, "Thanks, I could of been dead." That comment pierced Raph heart, his beautiful girl could of been dead right now if they didn't find her. "So whats your guys names?"

"I'm Leonardo and these are my brothers Raphael, Donatello, and Michelangelo." Leo told her.

"But you can call me Mikey and them Leo, Raph, and Donny." Mikey pointed to each turtle as he said their nickname.

"That would be easier to remember." Rachel joked.

"Oh and by the way this is April." Donny said as April waved. I could tell that Donny had a thing for by just they way he looked at her, Rachel was very good at knowing if someone liked someone else by just looking at them or even by just listening to them. But she is horrible at knowing if someone likes her.

"What's your name?" April asked

"Oh, my name is Rachel." Raph thought it was a beautiful name to go with a beautiful girl.

"You should tell us more about you!" April said in a cheery tone. Rachel wasn't very good at talking about herself.

"How about you guys ask me questions instead?"

"Okay, I'll go first, do you like video games?!" Mikey asked

"Well I've never really played video games but my little brother plays video games all the time."

"Oh okay, your turn Donny." Mikey said a little disappointed.

"Do you go to school?" Donny asked

"Yeah but I only have month until I graduate.

"No way its only like the middle of the school year!" Donny was surprised

"I took a lot of high school credit classes during the summer and it was enough to graduate a half year early." Rachel smiled feeling proud of herself. Before Donny could reply Leo asked his question that was on his mind.

"Have you ever thought about taking self-defense classes?"

"No not really..."

Before Leo could give Rachel a lecture about taking self-defense classes April said, "Your hair is sooo pretty, did you dye it?"

Rachel was a little offended that April thought that her wasn't naturally the way it is, "No I have never dyed my hair." Everyone looked at Raph for him to ask a question but he didn't know what to ask, he wanted to ask if she had a boyfriend but instead he asked, "Why were ya walkin' by yourself tonight?"

Rachel frowned, "Well I was going to spend the night with my kinda friend Abby after volleyball practice but she canceled last minute and I had no ride so I had to walk home."

"So your parents aren't freaking out right now wondering where you are?" Leo asked

"My dad probably thinks I'm at Abby's house right now so yeah I guess so."

"What about your mom?" Mikey asked, Donny elbowed him he probably thinks my mom is dead.

"Ummm she's not dead but I'm afraid one day I'm going to come home to my sad dad telling me that my mom is dead. my mom has been really sick sense I was three and over the years it has gotten worse over the years and the doctors don't even know what is wrong with her." Rachel started to tear up, her mom couldn't really do anything with her like what other mom did with their daughters and it made her sad to think about.

"My sons, why did you not tell me that we had a guest in our home?" said a wise sounding rat.

"Sorry Master Splinter this is Rachel, we saved her when she was being attacked by a man that was threatening her life." Leo informed him.

"I see..." Master Splinter smiled, " You are quite a beautiful young lady, I can see why my son Raphael is not taking his eyes off of you." Rachel looked over at Raph who turned his head away from Rachel and started to blush.

"I smiled, "Thank you Master Splinter, I don't get that a lot."

Master Splinter nodded his head,"If I am needed I will be in my room." Everyone didn't say anything until Master Splinter walked in to the other room. Mikey smiled , he might be the youngest but he still knew what was going on with Raph.

"Hey Raph how come you haven't said anything?" Mikey wanted to annoy his brother.

"I guess I got nothin' to say." Mikey wanted to continue to try to pester his brother but Leo gave him a look as if saying stop it Mikey.

Donny yawned, "Well I'm exhausted, why don't you spend the night tonight and I'll stitch up your arm and you could sleep on the couch."

"Yeah that sounds cool!" Donny cleaned Rachel's wound and put four stitches in it, Rachel moaned in pain. It hurt Raph to see her in pain he wanted to push Donny away from her. April brought Rachel a blanket and a pillow. Everyone went to their rooms and fell sleep after that.

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Rachel was having trouble going to sleep because every time she shut her eyes the stocky man that attacked her would flood her mind. A hour or two went by and she still couldn't sleep. Raph couldn't sleep either all he could think about was Rachel and how she was sleeping peacefully on the couch. He decided to go check on her and he was surprise to find her still awake, her hazel eyes sparkled from the little bit of light coming from the kitchen which made it possible to see her beautiful face.

"Hey what are you doing awake?" Rachel asked as she sat up.

"Ummm. I couldn't sleep and I wanted to see if your okay." Raph hoped that she couldn't see him blushing.

"Oh that's so sweet for you to check on me, I'm fine," Rachel noticed him blushing. Rachel smiled "So you were staring at me?"

Raph pulled a chair over to put it in front of the couch and sat down, "Yeah I guess I was."

"You know not a lot of guys are nice to me like you..."

"What ya mean, can't they see how beautiful you are?" Raph didn't mean to saw the last part but he was angry at the guys around her that were blind.

Rachel froze and her heart stared to race, she looked into Raph's amber eyes and saw for the first time saw that he liked her. "You think I'm beautiful?"

"Isn't that what I just said?" Raph snapped back.

"You have a temper, I do too."

Raph felt ashamed of how he just snapped at her, "Yeah..."

"Don't you feel like no one gets it, that they just think that your angry for no reason?" Rachel asked.

"Yeah all the time." Raph answered.

"So why are you angry all the time?"

Raph took a deep breath he has never told anybody why he is so angry all the time."Okay, it started when I was like eight years old and Master Splinter was goin' to say who was goin' to be the leader of our team, I thought I was goin' to be the leader and get the blue mask with swords, Master Splinter had always told me that I had the traits of being a good leader, but Master Splinter told us that Leo was our leader for showing that same traits that Master Splinter had told me before that I had and gave Leo the blue mask and swords, I'm not angry at Leo or even at Master Splinter , I'm angry at what Master Splinter's explanation was of why he didn't chose me as leader, he said that he saw anger in me and gave me the red mask with the pair of sai, I thought that day that if I have anger in me then why not be angry all the time."

Rachel looked at the amber eyes that were looking at the ground. "I know how it feels to want something taken away from you that you wanted so bad."

"Really, what?" Raph eyes looked back at Rachel's sparkling hazel eyes.

"My mom, she's been sick for so long that she hasn't been there to do the things that most moms do with their daughters, I feel like shes been taken away from me and it makes me mad, I hold the anger in me and when someone sets me off I punch them in the face."

Raph realized why he felt she was special now,"Finally someone understands me."Raph felt like he has even fallen even deeper in love with her. Rachel yawned and he realized he was keeping her up. "Night Rachel." He stood up and started walking to his room. But he stopped when he heard Rachel's voice.

"Hey Raph." He turned around to see that her face was only inches away from his he could easily lean forward and start making out with her.

"Yeah?"

Rachel grabbed Raph and hugged him it took him by surprise but he wrapped his arms around her and didn't want to let go. Rachel pulled away and whispered, "Good night Raph." He smiled and went to his room and fell asleep immediately where a girl named Rachel flooded his dreams with her beauty.

There you go! I know your probably thinking what just a hug?! Don't worry I can promise that there will be a lot of making out and romance in the next few chapters. :DDD Remember please write reviews and follow!