EDIT: Hello everyone! I decided to delete the previous two edits mainly because I feel as if they mainly looked childish to me. However, I will give the initial warning that was in the prologue. Since that was a newer piece of writing in front of an older piece, it is true that there are some things that are bad. I would change the writing, but I'm afraid it may ruin the character development ahead. I also know that few may like this chapter and a few more, so I'd appreciate it if you didn't comment about how the main character is a Mary Sue at the time as I am well aware of that. However, I'm fine with constructive criticism to know what I had messed up on so I hopefully won't make the same mistake. I would appreciate it if you didn't flame, though I didn't say you couldn't, but I would also appreciate it if the whole story's perception wasn't based on the first few chapters, as they will hopefully improve in the future.
That is all I have to say for now in this edit.
Enjoy (though you may not like the chapter, but you don't have to),
CirciFox81314
(A/N: Hey everyone, I decided to post another chapter because…Well, the last one WAS short (Edit: Well, the prologue, which replaces the initial chapter before was short, so I guess this works.), wasn't it? Yeah, so anyway…
Penelope: GET ON WITH IT. Nobody wants to wait a Million Years.
Don't back sass.
Penelope: You aren't the boss of me.
(I summon my Keyblade, the Creator's Tool)
You asked for it!
(Penelope and I begin battling.)
Xion: Oh no.
Sora, Riku, Roxas, Ventus, Terra and Axel: Let's do the disclaimer. CirciFox81314 does not own Kingdom Hearts. If she did, Larxene, Xigbar, Xemnas, Marluxia, Saïx and Vexen would probably have been thrown off a cliff.
Kairi: Oh Kingdom Hearts. The fight is getting worse.
Vanitas: (Eating Popcorn) I am loving this battle so much.
Naminé: Um…On to the Chapter?
Chapter 1: To Destiny Islands!
(Penelope's POV)
This day must be one of the greatest days in my 15 year life. You see, I got a scholarship to go to the prestigious Destiny Shine High School! So did my Best Friends Roselyynn, Yami and Saki. Roselyynn, Yami, Saki and I have known each other ever since we were kids.
They've told me their secrets but I've never told them some of mine. I've kept my special psychic power secret to my friends...and I have a crush on somebody who I won't mention in hopes I don't forget them during the school year, as I love them dearly and I've had to hide it...
Anyway, If anyone knows about my power, it'll be (or might be) used to their advantage. So, that's why I've never told anyone about my powers.
I look at my clock and see it's already 7:45. I quickly use my power and pack the remaining things I need for my room at school. Why you may ask? There ARE dorms at the school. I personally think it's really exquisite and fancy. I mean dorms? Yeah, that is fancy. Okay, I need to quit thinking and go or I'll miss the plane.
As I walk out of the room dragging my bags with me, I see my mom and my Grandma smile at me. "Bye sweetheart! We'll miss you! I hope we get to see you during the summer!" Mom says while crying. Grandma smiles at me and says, "Be good and make sure boys don't chase you!" I kiss my Mom and my Grandma on the cheek. "It's not like any boys will, Grandma. I'm just too strong for them." I state flatly. My Grandma and my Mom hug me and once I leave, my Grandma calls, "Bye Penelope! Stay safe!" I wave good-bye and shut the door.
I see Roselyynn, Yami and Saki and they wave at me. Well, Roselyynn and Yami did. I walk up to them, pulling my bags behind me. "Ready to go yet, Penelope?" Roselyynn asks. "Why wouldn't I be ready? I DO have everything I need, Rosy." I answer with a bit of sass in my voice. "Don't sass me, Penelope." Roselyynn growls. "Ugh…Let's go before we miss our plane." Saki says in an annoyed tone. "Jet, Saki. We're going on a Jet." I say, correcting Saki. "Let's just go already. I don't have all day." Saki says in utter annoyance. Roselyynn, Yami, Saki and I are now walking to the Hollow Bastion Airport.
"I wonder what it'll be like at D.S.H.S. I bet we'll make new friends there!" Yami says in her usual cheery tone. "I think everyone just might be rich idiots who are either jocks or girly-girls who get to go to a private school. We DID get scholarships, did we not?" I state questionably. "Penelope, not everyone may be like that. Why do you always think so badly of people?" Roselyynn asks. I shoot a glare at Roselyynn. "People at our old schools only appreciated the fact that I'm really skilled at Blitzball and that I've earned the title of the Blitzball Champion of Hollow Bastion and nobody really liked me for my other qualities so that's why I think badly of people." Roselyynn almost protests but doesn't.
"Good Rosy. I'm sure this year will be absolutely flawless." I say proudly. Yami suddenly says, "We're here!" I look up and see we're at the Airport. "Okay ladies. I'm going to go check us in, please come in with me." I command to Roselyynn, Yami and Saki.
My friends follow me inside the H.B.A and I see the Destiny Islands Airway Counter. I look at my three friends. "Go check us in." Saki barks. I shake my head slightly and walk up to the counter.
A lady with brown hair and pink eyes notices me. "Hello, my name is Sarah. How may I help you?" "My friends and I are going to Destiny Islands to attend D.S.H.S. The names are Bunny, Penelope P., Hana, Roselyynn., Satou, Sakiyani. and Mizu, Yami." Sarah looks at me and asks, "For the Destiny Islands Airways Plane or the Private Jet for D.S.H.S?" "Option 2." I answer. "Of course, your flight leaves at 8:45 and it is currently 8:27. It is at Flight Station #27. Here are your tickets." Sarah hands me Four Tickets. "Have a nice flight!" Sarah calls as I walk back to Roselyynn, Yami and Saki.
"So what do we do now?" Yami asks. "Right now its 8:29, so we have 11 minutes to get to the flight station and begin boarding on to the Jet. Let's go." I say, doing the math in my head. "Okay!" Yami cries in a very upbeat tone.
Roselyynn, Yami, Saki and I begin running as fast as we can to get to Flight Station 27. It's exactly 8:40 when we get there. A lady scans out tickets and says, "Your seats are in row 5B. You can begin boarding." Roselyynn, Yami, Saki and I walk on our plane and carry our bags along with us and we all sit in row 5B. I'm by the window.
I notice a blonde with brown eyes say, "Hello everyone! Welcome on the flight to Destiny Shine High School. My name is Caitlin for those of you who don't know. We will be traveling from Hollow Bastion to Twilight Town. Is there any questions before the flight begins?"
I see a girl with deep auburn hair and appear to be in a pink dress raise her hand. "How long will it take to get to Twilight Town from here?" Caitlin begins to answer but I cut her off and say, "Well in all, from the starting point to the finish, it would take five hours in all, BUT due to the boarding times, it would actually take six hours." Caitlin and the Girl look at me surprised. "That's right…! Thank you?" Caitlin says, confused. A boy with black hair and golden-yellow eyes glares at me. Then he HAPPENS to raise his hand. "Ms. Caitlin, has anyone ever cut you off when answering a question?" The boy asks. "Um…No?" Caitlin answers in even more confusion. "Then that must mean whoever answered is a know-it-all." Caitlyn goes quiet for a bit. "Um…Anymore questions? No? Okay, let's begin our flight."
The flight begins and the idiot is smirking at me. "Now, WHY did you do that?" I ask. "Oh, because it's MY job to be the know it all." I glare at the guy. "Are you TRYING to start something?" I ask angrily. "Maybe I just am." My glare intensifies. "Now may I INQUIRE who you are?" "I'm Vanitas. Your name is?" "Penelope Bunny." "Yeah, whatever." Vanitas says, sounding a little bored. "How DARE you use that tone with me." I growl. "It's not like you're in charge." Vanitas states. Okay, can I punch him right now? I REALLY want to punch that guy now. I notice a blonde looking at me. Vanitas glares at him, but the boy doesn't notice. "Hi, I'm Ventus. What's your name?" People, STOP TALKING TO ME! "Uh…I'm Penelope Bunny." WHY DID I ANSWER?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?! "Uh, Penelope, you're turning pale." Ventus alerts. "Sorry!" I cry out. Okay, Can someone tell me what is wrong with me?!
(Twilight Town)
(Roxas's POV)
"Pence, Olette, come on! By the speed you're moving, we're going to miss the WHOLE school year!" Hayner yells. "We're coming!" Olette yells back. "MOVE FASTER! Axel and Xion are waiting!" I yell. "WE ARE JUST PEOPLE!" Pence yells. I face palm. "COME ON!" Hayner screams. Olette and Pence slowly walk up, seeming very exhausted. "We are NOT as fast as you two." Olette says, sounding very tired. I see Axel and Xion. "Hey, we're here!" I indicate to Hayner, Pence and Olette before going over to Axel and Xion. "Hey guys!" I say cheerfully to Axel and Xion. "What took you so long, Roxas? Xion has already checked us in." Axel says calmly. Xion smiles but says, "Since our flight leaves at 10:35, we really should get going now because it's 10: 27 now." Axel and I look at Xion in shock and then we immediately run in while dragging Xion in with us. Then we hear Hayner, Pence and Olette yell, "WAIT UP!"
(Flight Station 13)
(Roxas's POV)
We made it on the plane. Thank Kingdom Hearts. Luckily, Axel, Xion and I are all in row 6B. I poke a brunette when I get in my seat. She turns and glares at me for a second and then she tilts her head and moves her head away and then she turns back to me and asks, "Are you Roxas?" I glare at the weird chick. "Yeah, I am." The girl shifts a little and I notice my Twin Brother staring at me. "Roxas, it's you!" Ventus cries. "Ven, it's you!" I cry back. "Who's Ven?" The weird brunette asks. "Ven is Ventus's Nickname, STUPID." I answer. The girl proceeds to pull up my shirt collar and growls, "Look, I had to be on this plane for an hour and thirty-two minutes dealing with Vanitas and I don't want to deal with anymore jerks, OKAY?" My eyes widen, "OKAY! Sheesh, what's your deal anyway?" The girl releases my shirt collar and glares menacingly at me before turning away. "That chick is SCARY." Axel states. "Yeah, I don't know what her problem is."
(2 Hours later)
(Destiny Shine High School)
(Penelope's POV)
We made it! I can't believe I had to deal with Ventus's Twin Brother and Vanitas on the freaking jet. Yami also introduced me to Kairi and Naminé and Ventus introduced me to Terra and Aqua and for some odd reason, Roxas introduced me to Axel and Xion. Oh and why am I walking off the jet with Kairi? I really don't know what's happened to me. Kairi is literally pulling me along with her while I'm pulling along my luggage. "I have to introduce you to Sora and Riku. They are really nice and I'm pretty sure they will like you." "But I need to get to my dorm!" I whine. "It's alright, Penelope. We're already off the plane." Kairi indicates.
"IT'S A JET!" I mentally scream to myself. I notice a guy that looks EXACTLY LIKE Vanitas but has chestnut brown hair and blue eyes and I don't pay attention to the guy next to him. "Penelope, this is my best friend Sora and this is my other best friend Riku. I look at "Riku" and see that he has long, silver hair and blue-green eyes and he IS pretty hot. Oh no. I will NOT fall in love. I am a responsible girl, not a boy crazed one. I feel somebody tap me on the shoulder and I notice it was Riku. "Uh, you're blushing."
I feel my face burning. "Let's go in." I walk with Sora, Riku and Kairi and I look around to see beautiful scenery. The school even looks amazing! When we go inside the school, it. Is. absolutely. Magnificent. I feel like I'm going to faint but I keep myself from doing so. "I'll see you all later I guess." I say to Sora, Riku and Kairi. "Okay! See you later!" Sora says cheerfully. I go and get the stuff I need for the year and I go to my dorm, which is Dorm 13. When I open the door and close it behind me. I notice that Xion, Roxas and Axel's friend, is my roommate?! What? "Weren't you that weird girl on the plane?" Xion asks. "Weren't YOU that girl that Roxas introduced me to?" I ask back. Well, this year is going to be nice. I was being sarcastic really. I just hope I aim more on the year than with friendships.
(A/N: Hello everyone! Let's just say there was a big fight...and luckily, I'm okay as well as Pen and Riku! And Axel got involved too with some fiery action. I made sure to keep their fight out of the scenes, since it was starting to get bad... and it had nothing to do with the story.
And I can also agree that the fight was absolutely terrible.
Everyone else: YEP. Vanitas: I wanted you to all… (Ventus smacks Vanitas and he passes out.)
Ven: I'm happy I did that.
Axel: Thank Kingdom Hearts I didn't get burnt. (Penelope smacks Axel.)
Penelope: Curse your stupid immunity to fire.
Axel: I AM basically the Flurry of Dancing Flames. (Penelope rolls her eyes.)
Penelope: No, you're the Flurry of Flames that tried to kill us. (Axel hits Penelope with his Chakrams and she passes out.)
Axel: Did you get that memorized?
Penelope: OW…
Uh, well I hope to see you all in the next chapter. You can review if you want. No Flames… (Axel uses a Firaga Spell on CirciFox81314)
Axel: Burn baby!
NOT THAT KIND OF FLAMES. I don't want a 3rd degree burn!
Aqua: Uh, we'll see you in the next chapter. In hopes that Axel doesn't catch the building on fire.
Everyone except Penelope and Vanitas: Okay, see you all later!)
