Okay wow, i got feedback so quickly, and they all said yes! So i will make into a chapter story! HOO-RAH! Here it is: Chapter two, dunh-dunh-dunh! this story is going to be totally written in Chris's POV the whole time. now that its a full story, i'm going to change the rating to T because im going to have say things like crap and shit and damn. small things like that, but no F-Bombs.

Some people had questions, so i will answer them!

Shay: Yes the Cullens are back. Yes Chris will meet them. I don't know what the new pack will think about them yet. the wolves that joined Jacob's Pack are Quil and Embry. SM said so in BD. All the other wolves are dead(sorry). Jacob, Seth, Leah, Quil, and Embry are still alive. im thinking about giving Jacob and Nessie kids, probably twins(thanks to daydreamer727). no Bella does not have any new powers. im not sure if the volturi will com in or not. i have to think about it.

*whew*

Just a quick list of the characters so you don't have to keep wondering whos whos.

Chris - POV. Beta of the pack. Age 16

Tim - Chris's best friend member of the pack. Age 16

Sean - Member of the pack. cracks jokes and makes of stories and rumors a lot. Age 15

Ryan - Alpha of the pack, imprinted on Stacey. Age 18

Darren - member of the pack, imprinted on Carly. Age 17

Greg - Youngest member of the pack, partially obsessed with electronics, based off a friend of mine. Age 14

Carly - Chris's sister and Darren's imprint. bit like Emily except she procrastinates. Age 18

Stacey - Ryan's imrpint. Human. Age 17

Liam Uley - One of the Elders. Descendant of Sam Uley. Human. Age 63

Kay here it is!


I made my way back to the house. My sister greeted me in the kitchen and my parents waved from the living room. I bade them good night and went up to my bed, hoping to catch some Z's before I had to patrol. I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.

About four hours later, a howl split through the night. I jumped out of bed before I was fully awake, and ending up smashing my face into the wall my bed was propped against. Cursing, I opened my window and jumped out.

Isn't patrol change not for another hour? I mumbled sleepily.

There's a vampire in the area, said Sean excitedly. He wanted to scare it.

Where? I asked, more awake now. It was always fun when the leeches were around.

North, said Ryan, Let's go. And hurry up, Chris.

Grumbling, I shot ahead. I was the fastest in the pack. I loved the speed. It was amazing, like I was flying. I quickly caught up with the rest of the pack, and together, the six of us traveled north. We didn't have to go far. I could see it up ahead, its back was turned. But when we neared it, the vampire turned in our direction. It smiled. It wasn't taken aback or anything. That annoyed me, but Sean even more. Stupid leech.

Sean lunged at the leech's left, but he simply rolled on the ground looked at us, smiling still.

"That's the thing about attacks passed down from wolf mind to wolf mind," he said, tapping his temple with his forefinger, "If you're like me, you can learn about them all in a heartbeat."

Not that yours beats anymore, I thought to myself. The vampire's gaze found me and he grinned again. It wasn't an evil grin, more like a playful one. That did it.

I lunged for him, and he jumped into the air and grabbed a tree branch. Flipping around so that he was facing west, he used his feet and his vampire strength to propel himself forward. He moved so fast that we couldn't even see him clearly, it was just a blur.

Follow him! ordered Ryan.

He's already long gone, said Tim, Wow, that push carried him far.

After a minute Ryan had to agree.

Tim, Chris, you guys can take the next patrol since you're already up, said Ryan.

Going back to Stacey? laughed Sean.

Shut up. She's asleep.

They went back to their homes. Now it was just Tim and I.

I'll go east, you go west? I asked.

Kay!

He raced off. I ran to the east, trying in vain to pick out the vampire's scent, even though he was long gone. But, to my surprise, I found it. I followed the trail excitedly.

Tim, I got the bloodsucker's trail! Come this way!

I could feel him running in my direction. I continued to follow the scent, noting how it moved back forth, as if he had been traveling to and leaving many times. I looked up noticing that the forest looked unfamiliar. I must've gone really far. Than I stared ahead, and my eyes widened.

A house was standing in the middle of the forest, but it looked like the forest had taken it back. Plants had crawled up the sides, and broken through the windows. A tree had fallen on its left side, caving in the roof. The paint on the house's outside and inside was peeling. It was beyond creepy, even more so because there was vampire stink over it like you wouldn't believe.

What was this place?

This is weird, said Tim, making me jump. He snickered.

The scent's stale, no one's been here for a while.

Yeah, but the leech we just met has his stink written all over the place, I said.

Hmm…Do you think he fed here without us knowing it? There's an extremely faint human scent here, it's almost gone, Tim asked.

I bristled. We would've known about it.

Okay okay, geez.

And anyways, There's more than vampires that came here, I said, moving to the second floor.

What do you mean?

Can't you smell it? There's shifter scent all over here. And something else…like a mix of two different scent that belong to the same thing.

Hey look, hospital bedst, said Tim from behind me.

There's the smell of blood all over the place, he said, you don't think…

There was a battle here? I don't know. Maybe…

This place is weird, he said.

Definitely, I agreed.

Let's go.

We left the house and circled it once, just to be safe. Then Tim spotted something.

Hey, look at this!

It was an old mailbox. The name was almost faded completely. I could only make out three letters.

C…en

What could it be?

Hmm…Cambrelen?

Excuse me?

I had a friend in elementary school with the name of Cambrelen, Tim explained.

No, I said, that name's too uncommon. Anyways, something happened here. I wish I knew what it was though.

Yeah, said Tim, But we have to get back to patrol, remember?

Yeah, I agreed, turning away, Sure.

I arrived back at the rez a few hours later. I just wanted to ask Liam about the house. I knew he'd be up; he always got up at four in the morning for God knows what.

"Chris?" he asked, looking surprised as he leaned in the doorway. Liam might be old, but he was still very active. Maybe he ran in the morning, I'd never seen him…

"Hi," I said, shifting my weight onto my left foot, "I just wanted to ask you about something. We—Time and I—found a ruined house that was totally trashed. It had a mailbox with the name that had three letters: C, E, and N. Do you know who lived there."

For a second I thought I saw something flicker on Liam's face before it became a mask again. Worry?

"No, I don't, Chris," he said, keeping his voice even.

"Right," I said. Liam was an okay liar, but when he was really trying hard to keep something hidden, he overworked it and it was easy to see through the fib. Like now.

"But then why was there bloodsucker stench all over it?" I asked, "And shifter?"

I saw the flash again.

"I don't know," he said, "Maybe a vampire explored the house like you and Tim did. As for the shifter stench, I bet you that many a pack searched the place also. Either way, don't go back to that house again. If you run into a vampire there and you're all alone, who knows what could happen?"

That stung a little. I could take care of myself.

"All right," I said suspiciously.

He nodded, and disappeared into his house again. I waited a moment longer on the porch before thrusting my hands into my pockets and walking home.

"Hey little bro," said my sister Carly.

"What are you doing up at four in the morning?" I asked as I walked into the living room.

"I should be asking you the same question," she said, her eyes narrowing.

"Pack stuff," I replied. Carly knew about the pack, because Darren, another member of the pack, had imprinted on her. My parents were still totally oblivious.

"Ah," she said, nodding, "I was working on my report."

"It's due tomorrow, isn't it?" I asked, smirking. Stacey was a Senor at the high school on the rez. I was a Junior, but we had a three day weekend, so there was no school for me tomorrow.

"Maybe," she said.

"Slacker. I'm going to bed," I said, darting upstairs and falling into my bed. Carly probably had been stuck on the phone and lost track of time. I soon lost interest in Carly's report, and fell quickly asleep.

When the next day came, I woke up when Carly came and pushed me out of the bed. Grumbling, I got up and ate an entire box of cereal for breakfast and rushed out the door.

"What should we do today?" Tim asked, lounging on the sofa in Sean's living room.

"We could go catch a movie," suggested Greg, the newest addition. He was sitting cross-legged on the floor, watching the two of us. I was sitting on the coffee table.

"Nah," said Tim, "I need a rush."

As soon as he said it, Sean looked up. So did Darren. Ryan was still glued to Stacey, but I saw him tilted his ear towards us.

"Cliff diving."

It was cooler than oxygen. I loved so much, the rush that you get when you jump off the cliff, the wind, the water, freedom, everything.

We all rushed out the door.

"Are you going to get a room, or come with us?" I called to Ryan and Stacey from the front door.

"Go on without us," Ryan managed.

"Whatever," I said, shrugging and walking out the door before I could see anything inappropriate.

We arrived at the cliff totally hyped. Sean didn't waste any time, he just dove off the cliff before we could catch him. I heard him yell as he hit the water. Laughing, I walked over to the edge of the cliff and looked down. It looked threatening, but I wasn't afraid. The waters were moderately calm. I could easily swim through it. Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes and dive headfirst with my hands streamlined out in front of me. The wind whistled all around me, and I grinned. I felt totally weightless and free. This was the best part.

The water came rushing out of nowhere because I had my eyes closed. I kicked to the surface and swam to shore. Then I begin to take the route back to the top with Sean.

"Did you hear that there was an attempted suicide here a long while back?" he asked.

"No. How long ago?"

He snorted. "Really long. Like a century."

"Did he die?"

"I think she did. I don't know. But during a storm, these waters can get really dangerous. For humans at least."

"Yeah, I guess it would be," I said, thinking. Someone really jumped off the cliff here? How strange. Yet familiar…

But then Sean interrupted my thoughts, leading me to the edge of the cliff again with the others, and I forgot what I was thinking about.

After cliff diving, we headed back to the rez. I brought up the suicide to Tim. He laughed.

"Chris, you know that Sean likes to make up crap about that kind of thing. He was just pulling your leg."

"Yeah," I said, "Maybe. Probably." It certainly was something Sean would do. He usually liked to start a rumor when he was in a foul mood, and the leech getting away had certainly done that to him.

"Come on," said Tim. I hadn't realized that we had made it back. I got out of Tim's truck and walked to his house.

I brushed Sean's story off. It was nothing. There was absolutely nothing going on. As usual.


Chris still doesn't suspect a thing. What did you think? What did you like most? Chris won't actually start digging until the next chapter. I think im going to make this story 7-10 chapters long. if you can guess what any of the hints are(there are two) ill send you a preview of the next chapter! Please review! Also, check out my story Murkywater! Its my main one, after that its this one. be warned, its very adult. contains the pack, rape, cutting, violence. VERY mature. But please check it out!

But review this one first! Please!