Many thanks to Snitch and Kitsune Yarisha for their appreciated reviews!

As you may see, English is not my first language. I am therefore trying to get better at writing it. If one of you wonderful readers would have a few minutes now and then to proofread me, I would be oh so happy and forever in debt : D

This is a translation of "Archives non officielles de Poudlard", one of my fanfics.

--MysticScribe--


Unofficial archive no.2

A scrap of parchment, found under a mattress, in the boys dormitory (Gryffindor Tower)

Looks like a rough draft, with additional notes (two handwritings) at the end

Please note : to preserve the spirit of this archive, spelling, punctuation and crossed-out words were kept as they were written initially.

(Clumsy handwriting, leaning slightly to the right. Note the carefulness.)

--Beginning of parchment—

--Beginning of draft--

Dearest Hermione (crossed-out)

Dear friend (crossed-out, three times)

Hermione,

I know that you fancy when I write to you and I thought I could (crossed-out)

I'm writing to you today to thank you with all my heart (part of sentence crossed-out)

warmly (crossed-out))

in a friendly way for the great gift you gave me for my birthday.

This poster of the Chudley Cannons is bloody brilliant : you have no idea how much you made me happy (part of the sentence crossed-out) it is my favorite Quidditch team and it will look really nice on my bedroom wall.

Each time I look at it, I think about you and (part of sentence forcefully crossed-out) I remember the Quidditch World Cup and the great (crossed-out) time that we had together (crossed-out) before getting pi (crossed-out) being attacked by the Death Eaters.

Would like to go (crossed-out)

Will you want to go (crossed-out)

I am going to Hogsmeade this Saturday with Harry. Would you care to (crossed-out) join us?

See you soon (crossed-out) See you later,

Your friend (crossed-out) Ron Weasley (crossed-out)

---End of draft—

Additional notes have been added (blue ink, two handwritings)

(clumsy handwriting) Do you think it's okay?

(small, round handwriting, with heart-shaped dots on the "i"s) This is so sweet of you…Writing to your friend (word underlined two times)

(clumsy handwriting, ink has slightly run) I didn't show you this to get laughed at

(small, round handwriting, a little bossy) Guess you should do better next time

(clumsy handwriting, forcefully) You are such a moronic sis (word incomplete, ink blot)

(small, round handwriting, angrily) Say that again and I'll Bat-Bogey hex you

(ink blot)

--End of parchment--