my first fanfiction, please review.

Pokemon trainer Sean stood at the edge of the broken down path, he had endured the hardships of victory road, he had rejected the pain that welled up in his legs as he slowly climbed up the path that ran through the mountain side. More than once, he had gotten lost only to find a dead end or a trainer waiting for him, when he had finally saw light, exhausted as he was, suddenly spurred by the warm and inviting light of the exit, step by step he had finally made it to the elite four.

Ever since he was a child he had heard stories of the elite four, a group of four trainers powerful beyond reason, together they were unstoppable as their life-long partners had once took the journey that he had taken, a journey which allowed him to see the kalos region, but more than that he had learned, observed and made his own life-long friends with slowly built up respect and hardships that he and his Pokemon had faced. ever since he left home in abrosite town, he journeyed through towards the ultimate goal, making different friends along the way such as Serena, professor Sycamore, Selena and of course his Pokemon.

now he stood at the path to the champion league, where he would challenge Malva, Siebold, Wikstrom, Drasna and of course the champion, Diantha. he was eager, as he knew his Pokemon were too, but he knew he had to heal them up first. On his left he saw a Pokemon center, on his right was a strange colored tree which was filled with fletchlings and bellossoms. Sean headed towards the Pokemon center and came to an abrupt stop as he almost walked into a girl in a white dress with a pink handbag. 'whoops, sorry' a voice came. Sean looked up and was surprised to see Diantha looking a little flushed at the sudden meeting, 'oh, hello dear Sean, i assume you will be coming to challenge the elite four and me?' "Yes,' Sean replied curtly very aware that he was speaking to the champion of the Kalos region, that meant that he had to show a certain deference and respect to her. 'Well then, I better get ready, we haven't had a worthy contender in ages, and Sean dear,' Diantha said, 'do try your best to win would you, it would be nice to have a new champion.' Sean looked at her with surprise, 'But don't you want to remain as champion?' Now it was Diantha's turn to look surprised, 'but then i won't be able to experience the world like you and meet new Pokemon and friends.' Sean looked at her with a sense of deference,'wouldn't you have already experienced that in your adventures?' he asked. 'That story is for another time, and here.' Diantha gave Sean 5 max revives, 'take that as a good luck gift.'

Still feeling a little bewildered, Sean walked into the Pokemon Center to heal his Pokemon to their former health. 'Hello and good day to you sir, what can i do for,' Nurse Joy said as Sean approached the counter,'would you like to heal your Pokemon.' 'Yes please.' came the reply. 'Please wait for a moment as i tend to your Pokemon.' she turned away and placed the Pokeballs onto the machine, 'there, all happy and satisfied. We hope to see you again.' 'Thank you,' Sean replied. As turned around to leave he felt a gentle hand on his shoulder, he looked back to stare into the gentle eyes of Nurse Joy. 'And do try to win will you.' Sean smiled back warmly at this, ' thank you for healing my Pokemon, but i don't intend to lose.'

Sean entered the huge chamber glowing with a soft green and blue light that reflected the circular mosaic on the floor. A giant statue stood on the wall facing centre of the giant room, there were four archways that entered into rooms, obviously, each one went to the different elite 4. Sean stood there and looked around, marked above each archways were engraved words, on closer inspection, they were guides to each elite 4. Sean head towards the 'flame chamber' of course that would be Malva the fire type elite 4. Sean switched his party Pokemon to match the type advantage. He moved his starter, the first Pokemon he had received, a black Greninja. It was a special Greninja, it had a hidden ability which made it unique even compared to other Greninja's. Further more, it was shiny giving its skin black, that made it hard to see in dark locations. however, the main reason it was special was not because of its ability nor its colour but because of his tremendous speed.

Taking a deep breath, he entered the chamber to greet a room with nothing except a floor panel elevator. Assuming that this would take him to the main room, he stepped onto the elevator and sure enough, it started to rise...