fMagic and murmurs A/N: Alan = Jowan

"Tanner, it's me Alan."

"DEMON DIE! DEMON AHH!" I scream as my hands ignite in lightning blasting back several mages.

"TANNER! Calm down, you're back at the tower. It's okay."

"Oh, yeah. It is I suppose. But blood mages are supposedly stalking the halls. I would like to join them actually, that power has always tempted me. Just having trouble routing them out."

"Well, actually I need to talk to you about that."

"I have to see Irving first."

"Oh and he needs to see you, by the way. Forgot to tell you."

I walk out of my room in the regular mage quarters and to the first enchanters room.

"Ahh, Tanner! Our new mage to the circle. Duncan, this is our most promising young mage. Tanner, this is Duncan… A Grey Warden."

"Nice to meet you Duncan. Now can I have my staff and robes?"

"Of course, will you also escort Duncan to our guest quarters?"
"I'd be honored. And thanks for the robes and staff." I say.

"So Tanner, how's it feel to be a new mage?"

"Really good, but I would like to leave, to become a… a Grey Warden."

"Well, I'll certainly take your offer into consideration." Says Duncan.

"Thank You! Just, Thank you!" I left the room to see a worried Alan.

"Tanner!" He said.

"What, you seem worried?" I ask.

"You know how you wanted to become a blood mage?"

"Um, yeah…"

"I can teach you the basics, I mean if you do really want to learn."

"Wait! You're a blood mage?"

"Yes, and keep your voice down. Now follow me."

I followed Alan to the Harrowing Chambers which were empty now. Except for that bird bath full of lyrium.

"Now, feel the blood running through your veins. Now take the knife and stab your wrists."

I take the knife and do as he says. Blood flies over my head and I raise my hands and spin them over my head. Then bring it down around me. The blood turns into large pools in which a demons arise from. As the first rage demon raises from the ground I freak out and the pools of blood close and evaporate immediately.

"Tanner! Very good! Now let's get out of here before the Templar's come. Oh and here's some healing." His hands grow blue and he throws a blue energy at me. My cut stitches itself together and my hand is seamless.

"Congratulations Tanner, you are a blood mage."

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