I got some really good suggestions that I will no doubt use as the story continues. I want this to be about 20 or 15 chapters, now on to Chapter 2.
Percy POV
I searched every single greyhound for an hour I finally landed on top of a small building somewhere near New Jersey. I was about to give up but …
Then I heard someone bellow so loud, wait I've heard that yell before, Ares.
I swooped down and found myself on the road where the furies attacked the greyhound that Annabeth, Grover, and I Were riding on my first quest a few years ago.
When I looked down I saw something I couldn't comprehend, there was Ares getting off a battered greyhound with a lot of people unconscious just laying there. But there was a little speck with glinting blond hair, Annabeth
My heart sank as I descended, Annabeth was bruised and battered and bleeding all over. I was about to go to her aid when I heard a loud bellow "JACKSON!!!" yelled Ares. He through a spear and it impaled itself in Blackjack's leg.
He went down with a thud. I jumped off to meet him, I uncapped Riptide and I slashed before it was fully grown. It made a cut across his chest but since riptide was still growing it wasn't very deep.
Ares took out his sword, a huge, two-handed sword and the hilt was a sliver skull that looked like it's eating a ruby. He slashed, I rolled and jabbed at his ankle, it started bleeding ichor, golden blood. He yelled and slammed me with the flat of his blade like I was a baseball. I was flung into a tree.
Annabeth ran towards me but she stopped and ran into the woods. She didn't help me stupid Athena girl, thinks she's so smart and powerful and doesn't help the person who just saved her sorry life. I got up and ran after her, it was dark, I was tired, and Ares is probably following me.
I ran to find Annabeth when I slammed into a tree I fell down hard, it didn't hurt with the invincibility but when I hit the floor I fell asleep.
Annabeth POV
Percy smacked against a tree I just watched in horror as he lay there like a rag doll. He looked at me with a weak gaze, I ran toward him but I stopped and thought he doesn't care about me and I don't care about him.
So, I ran into the woods crying. I ran until I saw a small place with red neon cursive writing, I smelt hamburgers and fries and milkshakes and in this condition it was like I was hearing the sirens' song again.
I knocked on the door and a Hispanic woman answered the door and she looked at me with a gaze that made me feel uncomfortable. She said "Come, in have some food, forget all your troubles"
Even though her face was covered by a veil I sensed her smiling. Something kept nagging my mind, why did I feel like I'm doing something again, maybe it's eating a burger and fries.
Percy POV
I woke up really quick because in my dream one name forced my body up with the invincibility I was deathly tired but I trudged on hoping I lost Ares, truth was I did, for the time being.
I lugged myself through the woods until I caught the smell of burgers, I had smelled this before. 4 years ago I was lured here at the beginning of my first quest.
Then a place popped in my head, The Auntie Em's garden gnome emporium, Medusa.
You might be wondering why Annabeth didn't notice who the woman was that's because she's so into her thoughts and feelings. Please give a lot of suggestions and reviews!! ! ! ! !
