'I DON'T OWN NARUTO'

Listen to castle on a cloud while reading this it adds to the book.

Naruto has never came out since that fatal day but they all felt killer intent and heard yells of screams coming from that house. Only for missions he has come out but he was still never seen only his team saw him but never his face. He used to wear orange and black. Now he only wears a black coat with 9 foxes on it, that coat goes to touch the ground it also covers his arms and neck. Also he wears black gloves. At night he put chocolates at their door steps, akamaru got a heart shaped bone.

1:00 P.M.

Naruto then travel all the way to his training grounds. It has holes everywhere and a waterfall. He found one day while traveling to hide from villagers. He then took his coat and gloves off. He then started his training off with 10,000 push-ups, 10,000 curl ups, and 10,000 pull ups. When he finished he would always try to increase the strength of the rasengan. He started training when it started changing its form "what the he-"KABOOOOOM. The whole village saw it. Naruto opens his eyes and sees the crater all you heard when he moved was crack from the rock he was stock in, but he got out and was bleeding a lot it was like a fountain. Every ninja stared at naruto in shock. All his friends ran in but naruto put up a force field. Then put on his coat all friends were scared what they saw, his eyes had no life at all like the soul left nothing but a hollow box. He put his force field down and spoke "leave all of you!" His friends stared as they saw him put 50,000 pounds on his coat he couldn't move he was stuck so he put 10 ponds instead. He got up passed them and no one dare speak a word. He headed home so no one saw him only a trail of blood.

3:00 P.M.

He headed back over to his area and took his coat, glove, pants, and shirt off. He then jumped into the river. Then he sensed someone, it was sakura. She saw he stopped coming on missions. He had decided to leave the team. She saw his face, no smile. Sakura said "Hello naruto" once he passed her everything went black. When she wakes it was 10:00 P.M. she looked around pink room then she starts to cry. She then runs outside to go to his house again and knock on his door.

That is it, no more bad comments though you can give me how to make it better or wow naruto and sakura new o.c. next time on this book.