So here is the rewritten post of the story. Again plese bare with me and at least try . :) Ok I wont write something all draw out and stuff so ill be moving on...

Edward Pov

"Edward!"

"Edward over here!"

"Edward why?"

'You cant do this!""What about the new movie? The fans?"

I know a lot of people where bummed out about me retiring but to be honest I A) didn't need anymore money and B)Didn't like what path I was going down. I tried to go to med school because I didn't want to disappoint my father but once he let me know I should do what I loved I went into acting. That's when Irina , god bless her happened to stumble upon the wrong address and saw me acting in a small budget play. She came and chased me down afterwards and we talked and the rest is history. She has been my agent ever since. She got me every role I have ever had. Including the last four roles of the Firelight series. And who knew I would get that much money from those four films alone. I have more money then I would ever be able to spend in my life. But I don't want money nor fame or anything like that, yeah I love acting but I really want to settle down with a amazing women to call my wife with amazing children to call mine. But you cant have that in Hollywood. Well you can but with that comes the little to know privacy or rumors and with the children there is favoritism because of the fame I have. And I really never expected to be famous so I never thought I wouldn't be normal. So when I told Irina I wanted to retire she told me people would first think I was just quitting because of the large payout of the last Firelight installment. But I just want to settle down and be free of all the interviews and nosey people oh and the damn pap's. Speaking of which...

"I'm sorry to inform you but I must retire, I would like to have a family without all the fame , sure I wont be forgotten , maybe I will but at least I can be devoted to my family and friends as well. Thank you and I must be going." With those final words I was out of the conference room and went to my little house away from home and got the rest of my stuff together to head back to forks. I miss home.

Knock*Knock*Knock

"Come in." I should really ask who it is before I give access , I learned that the hard way, and cue shiver...Tanya

"Hey Ed are you ready the truck is all packed up and ready to take your crap home." Irina...She seemed mad that I decided to retire early but she understand what I really want , she has always been my friend over being my agent. She is actually moving to forks in a few months, she really is apart of my family and I would miss her to much. That and the fact I know how to do nothing without her.

"Rina don't sound so happy about my leaving." She scowled at he nickname, I mean she called me Ed so it was only fair for me to...return the favor.

"Edward you big lug im gonna miss you." Then she started bawling I felt bad but she was going to see me soon and I was going to call and text and even face time if I could even figure out how to do that right. I got up and hugged her to me , she was my best friend besides my brothers and sister.

"I know but I wont be able to speak to for a few days. You know how your family is going to be especially when Mama Esme sees you. All her Italian will come out and she wont let you out her sight for a while. They all miss you Ed." I knew she was right not only did my brothers and sister miss and love me but my parents even more my mom wont let me out of her sight for a long time. But I will try and at least let Irina know im safe and what is going on.

"Irina I will try and let you know whats going on when I can , you know that and I will text you and call you when I can and even try and learn that new fangled face time thing." I tried to make her laugh and I was awarded with a long unladylike like laugh and snort.

"If you tell anyone I snort I will kill you Eddie." She knew I hated it when people called me that even more so because of Tanya she always called me Eddie. Eddie this . Eddie that. Ugg it was so annoying and her voice . I could go on for days. But even that wouldn't be enough time to fully cover the mess that is called Tanya Anna Denali .

"I wouldn't dream of it Irina ". I looked at my watch . Showtime. "Irina its time, ill call you as soon as I land , that about the only time because as soon as I step off that plane-"

"Mama Esme and the fam with eat you alive and hold you hostage. I know Ed , I love you and be safe ok and don't forget to call me!" One time you forget to call and you never live it down.

"I wont , I wont and I love you too Ill talk to you soon , you shouldn't be this sad you should be happy your boss is out of your hair you deserved a break." I started towards the door and was halfway out of it when Irina shouted.

"Yeah my boss is a real slave driver and an a conceded ass!" She was kidding , I loved our easy banter. I chuckled all the way down the hallway to my new life. It hit me like a ton of bricks I was off to find a new life a wife to start a family with. Wow. I cant believe It. Off to my new life I go. I wonder what the future holds for me.

What I didn't know , really shocked me!


Bella Pov

"Well you know what you can forget it Mike you aren't even trying!" I was so pissed!

"Isabella Marie don't start this crap again! I already told you-"

"Crap? Crap? This is OUR daughters birthday mike she wants you here! This isn't crap and because your little skank wants you there you leave and forget about your real family. Don't deny it I have know for a while.!"

"Isabella Marie Swan DONT YOU EVER raise that pretty little voice at me. Don't forget what IM capable of! Or do I need to remind you? DO I?" uh oh he was pissed now.

This is how ever conversation or argument goes with Mike. If it something really important and he's off on a 'business trip' then he just cant seem to make it home. I have been with mike since the end of high school. It was all an misunderstand. Alice my best friend decide to give him my number without my consent or knowledge. He tried to be the cool guy but failed. He had a bunch of lines and he tried to uses mainly on me. Well at the time Alice thought he would get tired once he got me but he didn't and who knew he would start going to the guy and was able to fight very very well. Well Alice is the only one who know how Mike really is . I cant leave him yet because I need the money that he makes. I have a small job on the side but with a now five year old little girl its hard. Mike is a jackass because he wont let me buy my little Lucy a present. So I decide to fuck what mike says and get her one anyways. She was very happy to get that new doll and I was happy. But he refuses to come home for the little party we are having. Charlie, my father, Alice, my best friend, Jasper, Alice's husband and Angela my best friend and her fiancé Ben. Along with a few of Lucy's friends. Lucille Marie Swan was born at 3:00 in the morning on September 13 so we share a birthday. I loved her before I saw her but when I did It was like looking in a mirror. She looks just like me. I thought she would have gotten Mikes blonde hair or his cold baby blue eyes , but she got my brown hair and light brown eyes.

"Mike look I don't want to do this over the phone im so tired of doing this with everything we always argue please come home for Lucy! She needs and loves you and wonders why daddy isn't home. All im asking if -"

Knock*Knock*Knock

"Isabella who is that!? You better not -"

"Mike I have to go." And I hung up he was about to go on and on about how I shouldn't cheat on him with the neighbors. Our neighbors are old and perverted even the women. Eww.I got up and went to the door and imagine my surprised when I see Alice with a duffle bag and a folder full of papers with this crazy look in her eyes.

"Oh no Alice what now?"

"Bella I have to show you this , this is your ticket out." And I knew I had to listen if not for me but for Lucy Mike hasn't hit her yet but if he did I would have to try and kill him. I say try because I don't think I can fight him off.

"Fine come in." We got settled at the table. "So what did you want to show me" I was a little scared to leave Mike but I wouldn't let that fear hold me back nor Lucy.

"Ok so I got all the pictures back and it turns out Mike has a lot of girls and it looks like it could be an escort service. Like from that movie , only because all the girls are wearing little to nothing , They all pass by mike and give him a kiss on the lips as they enter the building. Bella if he is running a ring of prostitutes he can go to jail. I mean these girls don't look happy and don't look like they are wanting to be there and most of them don't look like they could even pass for seventeen." Alice is a private detector. She has been watching Mike to get information about what he really does in hope that I can find something , so I can get a divorce and get some sort of money to get me back on my feet. But if this is true my no good , abusive husband will go to jail and most likely be shanked to death or something. As far as I know they don't take to kindly to 'Kiddy Likers' in jail. I know I should be sad that he might die but I cant bring myself to care , he has called me everything under the sun and has done everything to my body that makes me want to throw up just thinking about it.

"Alice are you sure?" I cant go into this and it turns around on me and I have no case. I only get one shot and if I fail Mike just might keep up his promise to kill me.

"Yes Bella and Mike should have gotten the divorce papers already so its been set into motion. I spoke with a judge and family friend and he will keep this trial on the down low. Bella everything will work out fine and with this you will be able to keep Lucy all to yourself. Now to the second part. I have one million dollars that you will accept from me because of Lucy. You and her need a great place to live. And it wont last forever Bella so don't bitch to me about it. It should hold you long enough so that you are back on you feet. I got you a few job interview for next week. And I will watch Jasper. My brother is coming home soon and will be there. He loves kids so he and Lucy should get along great. Now you will go upstairs and put all you can fit into this duffle bag with you and Lucy's stuff. Only clothes and such Bella. I already went out and bought your personal items and things like that for you and Lucy. Bella don't argue just go do it." For someone so small she is really bossy , it was a lot she was giving us . And I only cried and hugged he promising to repay he someway.

"Isabella Marie don't you thank me I should have don't this a long time ago. You wouldn't have need to go to the doctor about broken bones and infected burns and things like that. I hate him so much I want to kill him Bella. Anyway hurry up because as soon as he get those papers , which he should have he will be on his way home."

I made a run for it and started packing when I was finished I get to went to wake Lucy up. Happy that Mike didn't call, but I had a sinking feeling that even thought Alice was prepared something bad was going to happen. And I didn't want her here for it. Mike was only an hour away. So I have to move fast.

"Lucy love wake up for mama we have to go on a little trip." He hair was all messy and adorable.

"Mwama whwer arew we gowing." She is to cute when she take like that.

"Sweetheart we are going to go to a new home. Without daddy ok. And we will be really happy and you will have toys ok." I was getting her dressed and decide to put here hair in a pony tail. She was ready and tying her shoes up . She wanted to pack her little Ariel backpack so I let her. she grabbed her teddy bear and we where on our way out when there was a pounding on the door.

"ISABELLA YOU CANT LEAVE ME YOULL BE SORRY YOU EVER TRIED!" Oh no he was here, I knew it would end badly. I turned around and told Lucy to hid in the closet and cover her ears and be very quite and not to open the door without me or Alice telling her to. She went on and was hiding right in time for Mike to storm in. Oh no he was really red. Where is Alice?

"Mike you cant stop me so just let me go, ok just please move."

"YOU UNGRATFUL BITCH YOU DONT DESERVE ME BUT I LET YOU STAY WITH ME AND SPEND MY MONEY AND YOU BETRAY ME LIKE THIS!."

"Mike you hit me. You hurt me you don't love me! As much as you try to say you do you don't!" I tried to make my way around him but was pulled back by my hair

"Ahhhhh. Please let me go."

"I suggest you let her go." Jasper?

"GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HOUSE! THIS DOESN"T CONCERN YOU!" Mike actually thought he was getting away. Not with Jasper he was one of Forks best cops but he retired early , he still had a gun.

"Lucy-Goose you can come out ok. Come on out." Jasper called to lucy. How did he get here? Alice! She was prepared for this. She must be outside or something.

"Bwut Mwama swaid I cwant cwomed out untwill sehe cwam to gwet me." To cute.

"Its ok love come out." And she listened and came out and ran to Jasper. He instructed her to go outside.

"Now mike just let Bella go. And it will be ok." Jasper

"You know I cant do that Jasper, she is MINE, she is trying to leave me! Leave me? " He sounded surprised.

Before I knew what was happening I was out of Mikes clutches and was being carried to a car and set in the back seat with my baby. We where off to our new life. It hit me like a ton of bricks I was off to find a new life . Wow. I cant believe It. Off to our new life we go. I wonder what the future holds for Lucy and I.

What I didn't know , really shocked me!


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