Hey im back with another chapter yay and I hope its better than the last chapter thanx to the help of some pointer I got in my reveiws

Author: I had this chapter done really early this morning but didnt update yet

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Author: But it was because I was hopeing I'd get at least some more reveiws, but I didnt get any more so I'm gonna update early

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'Maybe if I were to just sneak into the kitchen, grab something, then run back I'd be safe.' Kisame thought with his stomach growling. He then proceeded towards his and Itachi's door to leave. "What are you doing Kisame?" Itachi asked his partner. "Oh um*sweat drop* just going to get some food." Kisame answered scratching the back of his head.

"If you do than I will leave you out there." Itachi said. "Fine" Kisame grumbled but after a few minutes his stomach growled again only more loudly. When he looked over at Itachi he saw his partner was sleeping. He then left if only he knew the dangers of leaving at that moment.

'Alright just make it around that corner and your home free.' Kisame thought "!" Kisame screamed. "Oh Kisame-san are you hungry TOBI MADE COOKIES." Tobi said/screamed "Err sure Tobi what kind are they?" Kisame asked "Well Tobi didn't know what kind everybody would want so Tobi made different ones." Tobi replied.

Kisame then reached for one but then Tobi screamed, "What's the matter Tobi I thought I could have a cookie?" Kisame asked puzzled, "You can have one of Tobi's cookies but you have to play with Tobi first."(AN: I'm just going to say it, That's what she said!) "Oooooo-kkkkkkkk what are we going to play Tobi?" Kisame asked "Tobi thinks we should play feed the sharky." Tobi replied.

Cue sweat drop "OK then give me the cookies and I'll be fed." Kisame said "NO! You have to get into this shark tank first." Tobi said motioning to a shark tank. 'Where'd that come from?' Kisame thought "OK Tobi I'll get in it then what's next?" Kisame asked "Next Tobi throws the cookies in for Kisame to eat because Tobi's a good boy." Little did Kisame know what he was getting himself into.

Tobi then managed to lock Kisame in the shark tank and was filling it up. "Alright Kisame it's full now, Tobi will feed you the cookies Tobi Made." Tobi told Kisame, 'Finally I'm going to get some food.' Kisame thought but as soon as Tobi threw a cookie in the Tank, and Kisame ate it he immediately spit it out. "Tobi what the h*** did you put in these cookies?" Kisame asked because it tasted like rotten eggs and fish.

"Well remember when Tobi said Tobi made different kinds, well Tobi knew Kisame liked eggs, and because Tobi knows Kisame is a shark, and Tobi knows sharks love fishies, so Tobi made egg and fishy cookies for Kisame." Tobi finished smiling happily, but Tobi having the short attention span that he has thought he saw his sempai (AN: Deidara is still tied up sadly) went to go glomp him. So Tobi put the Tray of cookies on the ledge of the shark tank. Only when it fell it fell into the shark tank.

"Oh crap!" was all Kisame said before the cookies fell in, and he ended up gaging on the gross cookie water wondering what Tobi put in all of the cookies. He then decided against trying to figure out that because he'd rather not know what horrible stuff Tobi did to the cookies. Only Tobi had put something horrible in whoevers cookie it was Tobi actually forgot what was in the cookies, yes readers even Kisame's cookies. It turned out instead of sugar it was a sleeping powder for out of the medicine cabinet so sadly Kisame passed out about two minutes before Zetsu appeared in the kitchen.

Zetsu saw Kisame then did what any smart person would do, when Tobi's on a sugar high, he got out of there as fast as he could. Three hours later we come back to the kitchen and see Kisame passed out and Tobi eating a sandwich, and drinking sweet tea (half of it being sugar), and eating a plain bowl of sugar. Sadly readers this horrible rampage is not over yet.


So how was it better hopefully

this chapter is 901 words long hurah its longer than the last chapter by 316 more words yay *throws confetti*

Just so everyone knows im also counting the Authors note in the word count each chap including the one before because I'm lazy like that

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