Here's the second chapter. Sorry if the first chapter was short.


As everyone is sleeping at the swampy area, the monsters reappeared and were moving slowly where Mario, Link, and Pit where sleeping. Soon Mario woke up and saw some monsters moving slow.

As soon as the monsters came close enough to where Mario, Link, and Pit were sleeping, Mario and Link jumped into the swamp. Pit decided to fly instead of go into the swamp. As soon as Mario and Link couldn't find pit they started looking for him.

"Pit!" Link yelled.

"Pit where are you" Link yelled louder.

"Pit! Where are you?" Mario yelled

Soon Pit starts hearing someone yelling and then he goes looking for found Mario and Link and they were all relieved when they found each other.

"Where a were you?" Mario asked.

"Looking for you and Link." Pit responded.

"But how a come you didn't come a with us?"

"I didn't want to get my wings wet."

Soon everyone started walking at the swamp and Samus appeared running like a crazy person

"Samus, why are you running?" Pit yelled.

"They won't die."

"Mario, Link, and I told you they won't die."

"Thats not possible."

"Well somehow it is."

"I can't believe this!"

"Well Believe it."

As Samus and Pit continue arguing, Mario and Link tried to stop them from arguing.

"STOP!" both Mario and Link sreamed.

"Ok ok we'll stop." Samus and Pit said.

"Um guys" Link said softly.

"What?" Samus said.

"Look!" Link yelled.

"Where?"Mario said.

"At the swamp. Someone is walking." Link said talking very fast.

"Who's Walking?" Pit asked.

"I don't know he has blue hair though." Link said.

"he's coming closer." Pit said.

"Wait a minute is that Ike?" Link said.

"Ike!" Link yelled.

"Whoa, what happened to you guys?" Ike snapped.

"There's monsters... EVERYWHERE!" Link said.

"What are you talking about and why won't you fight them?" Ike snapped.

"They're impossible... THEY WON'T DIE!"

"Your crazy." Ike said.

"Will you stop acting like an idiot?" Samus snapped.

"Then I like to see you fight these creatures" Samus said.

"Fine I will." Ike said

"Now get them." samus said as she was rolling her eyes at Ike

When Ike found a monster, he started to fight with his sword. Soon, Ike started getting tired of fighting this monster and started to run away from it. Then he met up with Samus.

"How did it go?" Samus said.

"Not so well." Ike said exhaustedly

"Was i correct?" Samus said.

"Um..."

"Wow... YOUR AN IDIOT!"

"Uh..."

"Ike, Stop being such an idiot and admit that you can't beat these creatures."

"No!"

Samus shortly used her paralizer and used it to paralize Ike

"Now admit it!"

"No!"

"Fine. I'll just keep on paralizing you until you admit it!"

"I'm not admitting anything!" (Samus paralizises Ike)

"OW!"

"Now admit it!"

"Fine. Those creatures are stronger than me."

"Now was that hard"

"Yes."

As soon as Samus and Ike stopped fighting, Mario, Link, Pit, Ike, and Samus started walking again and found a mysterious underground place. Everyone starts checking this place out and then finds Diddy Kong stuck in a hole that was broken when he first came.

"What is this underground place?" Pit asked.

"This is my hiding place." Diddy Kong said

"Can we stay here for now?"

"Sure." Diddy Kong said happily


Hey guys I think this chapter is much better than the first chapter. Please review and no flames please. Sorry if i had some spelling errors.