Don't Own Rwby Or The Gamer Ability, Only The Oc

'thought'

"Speech"

"Tvs, Radios, and Text via book or newspaper... when those are around..."

Gamer Ability Notifications

[Neptep The Destroyer Internal Voice]

(Mid Chapter Authors Notes)

This was meant to go out tomorrow, but I really didn't feel like letting this sit around with less than 3k words for longer than it needed... chapter 3 will be next Sunday though.


'uuuuhhhh... any ideas on how to kill this?'

Alpha Creep Level 5
350/350 Hp
250/250 Mp

Str 12
Dex 10
Vit 20
Int 1
Wis 1
Luc 1

[Don't die?]

'oh thanks, that is REALLY helpful...'

It runs towards me, its legs kicking up dirt as it closes the distance between us.

'it is the same speed as the regular creeps... so I should be fine if I just dodge-'

It doubles its speed.

'WHATTHESHIT'

I quickly turn my entire body away from it and break out in a sprint.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" if anyone told you I screamed and ran... they lied...

I cast a quick glance to the large- larger than a normal creep- grimm trailing behind me.

Alpha Creep Level 5
350/350 Hp
50/250 Mp

'o-oh! It is back to normal speeds again... so that speed boost seems temporary...'

I point my hand back towards the Grimm, launching an orb of shadow that causes it to briefly pause as it cracks a few armored plates, it shakes its head and continues after me as it gains its bearings.

Shadow Sphere has leveled up.

I quickly shoot another sphere at it, the shadows crunching into its shoulder and causing it to slightly stumble.

[You have just enough mana for one more by the way...]

I take the advice she gives me and shoot it one more time.

Alpha Creep Level 5
252/350 Hp
50/250 Mp

'WHAT NOW?!' I ask the voice in my head. 'IT JUST FUCKING TOOK THREE OF MY BEST ATTACK AND IT ISN'T EVEN AT HALF HP!'

[Use the dust...]

'wait wha- OH THE DUST!'

'inventory'

I tug out the two dust crystals and hold them in the palms of one of my hands as I continue running.

'How do I use this?'

[Ignite it with a small spark of mana.]

The crystals light up and spark, the heat slightly burning my hand.

[FLING THAT SHIT!]

I through the crystals at the ground, right in front of the alpha creep.

*BOOM*

A blast of hot air explodes outwards, covering the initial contact point with smoke and dust.

'is it dea-'

It bursts out of the smoke, looking MUCH worse for wear... but still very much alive...

Alpha Creep Level 5
72/350 Hp
50/250 Mp

[now you gotta PUNCH IT TILL IT DIES!]

'a-alright'

I stop my sprint and turn around to face the creep as it leaps up into the air, trying to knock me to the floor where it could end me, I quickly duck to the side and lash out with a punch to the side of its head as it soars past.

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

It faceplants into the floor.

[KICK IT'S SHIT IN!]

I run over to the downed creep and kick it three times, the first time, my shoe hit its armored plates, hurting like hell for me, but dealing minimal damage to the creep, the second was a lot more successful, as I managed to get my foot right in between the bone plates of the alpha, Critical Hit (*2 Damage) however the last, much like the first, bounced off its side as I brought my knee onto a bone plate.

Alpha Creep Level 5
27/350 Hp
28/250 Mp

"FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUCCKKKKKK!"

I quickly hobble away from the creep, wincing slightly as the pain in my leg is slowly taken away.

Your Vit has Increased by 1

Sean Chro Level 3

304/335 Hp
22/350 Mp

It slowly gets to its feet as I run up and land a devastating blow to its underside, where it lacks any armor, causing it to flop to the side as it slowly turns to dark mist.

Your Str has Increased by 1

Unarmed Strike Mastery has leveled up x2

You have leveled up

A quest has been completed.

Tutorial Fight #2:

Objective:
Kill the alpha Creep [x]

Rewards: 400 Exp, Creep King Title

You have leveled up.

Creep King:
"The king of no-one is still a king~!"
Your attacks deal an extra 50% damage to Creeps of any kind.

You have gained 1 shadow dust crystal, 1 creepy crystal, Creep Leather x2, Creep Claws x3

I take a deep breath and slump down under a tree.

"Hurrah..." I sigh as the back of my head thunks against the tree.

I flinch as something hard hits me on the head and lands beside me.

I look down at the grass beside me. "Woah... that didn't disintegrate?!"

It was the piece of the creep that got lodged in the tree after I scored a super-crit on it when it was almost dead.

I blink several times at it.

[wow... a rare drop... NICE]

Creep Shiv:
A knife made from the bones of a creep.
Deals 10+.5*Str Damage per regular hit
Deals an extra 12% damage against Grimm.

It has a bit of black leather wrapped around the dull end of the spike, going for about 4 inches, it looks like it would primarily be a stabbing weapon, as it has no blade along the sides, only a sharp tip.

'so, what now?'

[well, normally I would continue explaining shit... but to be honest those creeps sort of ruined the mood... hmm... what else was I going to talk about...]

'what about your purpose?'

"Well, that is simple!" The voice exclaims, thing time, outside of my head.

Neptune decides to sit beside me. "I am clearly here to provide sexual tension until you find your lover!"

I blink at her.

"You fucking what-"

A couple sheets of paper appears in her hand and she clears her throat. "AHEM"

She stares at the paper and starts speaking in a monotone voice. "Of course, Sean, who else is going to make you their boy... toy?"

"UGH!" She retches slightly. "Whichever intern wrote this is getting fucking fired!"

She sighs "I MEAN REALLY! WHO WOULD EVEN TALK LIKE THIS?!"


Meanwhile... several thousand miles away...

*Sneeze*


She crumples the piece of paper and tosses it behind her. "That joke got old fast..."

"I am so fucking confused right now..."

"Good! YOU SHOULD BE WHEN EXPOSED TO THAT UTTER INSULT TO THE THEATRIC ARTS!" She exclaims.

"Did you ever tell me WHEN in remnant's history I was dropped off in?" I ask.

"4 years before canon... CLEARLY" she states.

"how is that clear-" I cut myself off with a sigh. "I am just not going to acknowledge any of your snappy comments and purely chalk it up to the fact that you are fucking with me."

"Yep! Mentally... and if you want~ physically~" she adds with a sultry tone.

I give her the most unimpressed gaze I can muster.

She sighs. "Fine, fine... I'll leave the innuendos and 'the sex' to her..."

"Who the fuck is 'her'?!" I ask.


*Sneeze*

"I swear if I am coming down with something-"


"Someone you don't need to worry about!" Neptune exclaims with a grin.

"Well then, masterful guide to gaming... what now?" I ask in a sarcastic tone.

"Personally, I would get a meditation skill to improve regeneration, then level the shit out of Shadow Sphere till the point where you can fling it like nothing." She states. "but considering where we are- mistral by the way- I think it would be safer if we actually went to a town or something."

"Are you telling me to just walk in a random direction until I hit a city or town... in a world where I guestimate that LESS THAN 5% OF THE ENTIRE WORLD IS CIVILIZED?!" I ask.

"Noooo" she draws out as she points in a seemingly random direction. "Road about 900 feet that way."

A circle pops into view, it shows a mass of grey surrounding the outward edge, while the center is green, a small bit of blue, and a bit of a lighter green, in the center is a bright red arrow pointing in a random direction.

"Is this-" I turn my body, the small circle following my vision, along with the arrow turning. "A mini map... nice!"

Neptune turns into pixels that scatter in multiple directions before disappearing.

[Now, WALK!]

'fine, fine, no need to tell me twice... tch... bitch.' I start walking in the direction Neptune indicated

[Ohohoho! Scathing! You acting all pissy in that body creates the effect of an angry kitten]

I frown as I continue my trek.

[No comment? Damn...]


I finally reach that 'road' Neptune spoke of, and it is just a small path, I look left and right, frowning as I still have no clue which way to go.

[Right...]

'hm?'

[Go right.]

'why though...'

[Right is always right!]

I blink at her clear cheerfulness.

[GO! We don't want to get fucking kidnapped by bandits with long dark hair, now do we?]

'wh-'

'that is strangely specific...'

[That's because she will fucking FIND YOU if you hang around longer than necessary!]

'okay... taking the advice...' I mentally answer in a small voice, turning right and jogging down the pathway.

About 10 minutes later, and 2 more increases to Vit, the system alerts me to a new quest.

Maidens and Magic:
June Lacey, the Spring Maiden, has figured out what her guardians intended for her, so, she escaped Mistral and ran without a second thought... sadly, June was ambushed by a couple of bandits after she was nearly out of mana from fighting off the creatures of grimm, they plan to use her as a bargaining chip to regain access to a tribe they have been exiled from as they has seen her use her innate powers.

Objective:
Protect the Spring Maiden [ ]

Bonus Objective:
Defeat all of the bandits 0/4 [ ]

Rewards: 1000 Exp, 100 Lien.

Bonus Rewards: 2000 Exp

'uh... Neptune... if my rwby knowledge is correct... didn't the spring maiden leave Mistral 10 years before canon and not 4?'

[It's an Au... purely because the author didn't want to deal with 11 years of your life again...]

'I... didn't quite catch that last bit...'

[Don't worry about it!]

I stop as I glance ahead on the path, a girl with long brown hair, about to her lower back, is frantically looking between 3 people as they slowly circle her, about 10 feet away from her, a main stronger looking guy standing in front of her about 20 feet away with his arms crossed.

'ugh... damn... it is fucking bright...'

A lamp attached to a backpack lays at the feet of the brown-haired girl.

June Lacey [The Spring Maiden] Level 20

Hp: 950/1050
Ap: 0/0
Mp: 25/2200

Str: 15
Dex: 25
Vit: 20
Int: 40
Wis: 40
Luc: 15

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 7 x3

Hp: 390/390
Ap: 0/0

Str: 20
Dex: 10
Vit: 16
Int: 5
Wis: 5
Luc: 5

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 10

Hp: 552/552
Ap: 1105/1105

Str: 15
Dex: 15
Vit: 21
Int: 10
Wis: 5
Luc: 5

'ah fuck... aura... but overall I should be able to take them easily... But she doesn't have aura... so one hit could kill her... fuck!'

"Stop resisting girly... we won't hurt you too bad~ hey, you might even get a good time!" One of the slowly circling people cackles, a machete in his hands.

That last line causes me to lose my cool for a second, my right eyebrow twitching ever so slightly.

'he gets destroyed first...'

'now how do I-'

"Yeah! Give us time and we can make you feel REAAAL good..." Another one smirks, this one with a spear.

'fuck it... walking in like a fucking terminator it is...'

Bgm: One Piece Epic Battle Theme [REMIX]

I casually walk into the light, no real emotion displayed on my face other than indifference. "Sup..."

Five pairs of eyes snap to me and no one speaks up for a while.

"Who the fuck are you?" The third mook asks, a club in his hands.

"As far as you know... her brother." I state in a stern tone, my indifferent facial expression slowly morphing into a frown. "leave her alone."

"Tch... who cares who he is?" The second mook asks. "All I see is kid trying to play hero..."

"…" the 'leader' of their group continues to say nothing

I look into the eyes of the machete wielding mook and he freezes for a second.

"I-I don't like this... his- his eyes..." He mutters to his 'friends'.

I slowly walk forwards to them, stopping about 10 feet away.

"Kill him..." The man in the back orders.

"You heard the boss!" The club man shouts as he runs towards me. "HAAAAAH!"

I wait for the last second to step out of the way, landing a quick jab with my elbow as I walk past.

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

"GURK-" his knees buckle at the force of the blow on his kidney.

June gasps as I punch him in the kidney a second time, muttering "C-can he beat them?"

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

I walk forward a bit more and by this point the other two have reached my small form, I barely duck out of the way of a machete swipe and narrowly avoid getting impaled by a spear tip, the blade slightly scratching me as it goes past, I punch forward into the spear guy's chest, Vital Hit (*1.5 damage) a cracking sound greeting my hearing, as if to tell me that I did it right, I then open my fist and send an orb of darkness at him, knocking him onto his back before I lash out with a kick to the shins of the machete wielding bandit, his bones also cracking as he grimaces with pain.

Critical Hit (*2 Damage) (A/N like DAMN I keep rolling crits)

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 7 (Club man #3)
Hp: 335/390

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 7 (Spear Man #2)
Hp: 313/390

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 7 (Machete Guy #1)
Hp: 353/390

"Your slow..." I boreally state as I draw the creep shiv and stab it into mook #1's lower stomach.

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

"AGH!" He shouts as he collapses to the floor, holding a bleeding wound as I turn around and jab it into Mook 3's stomach as he turned around to club me, causing him also to fall to the floor attempting to stop the bleeding.

I dive at the spear wielder, who is slowly getting to his feet again and stab him once in the shoulder and once in the stomach.

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

He drops to the floor like the others.

Bgm: End

'mental note... for humans without aura... one good stab should be enough to take them out of commission without killing them...' I gaze towards the 'boss' of these pathetic waste of air and put up a small smile as he is still standing there with his arms crossed.

"You think just because you have Aura you are safe?" I ask. "It may take a while to beat you... but you will fall just like your friends here..."

"Hm..." He hums as he unfolds his arms, reaching back behind his back and drawing a great sword.

'youknow... I am a lot better at combat than I thought I would be...'

His stats increase as he grips his sword with both hands, his aura lowering for some reason...

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 10

Hp: 565/565
Ap: 630/1130

Str: 19
Dex: 19
Vit: 26
Int: 10
Wis: 5
Luc: 5

Bgm: Dragon Ball Super - No More / Vegito vs. Zamasu | Epic Cover

'ofuck...' Are the thoughts going through my head as I jump back, avoiding a slash that imbeds itself about 3 inches into the dirt, I quickly respond with a punch before leaping back to avoid the sword as he tugs it out of the ground.

Vital Hit (*1.5 damage)

I lean back, once more avoiding an attack that could have horribly injured me, before punching the large man's stomach twice, the first punch actually slipping past most of his aura and burying itself about a centimeter in the boss' stomach. Super Crit! (*3 damage) the second blocked by his elbow as he brings his sword back for another attack.

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 10

Hp: 565/565
Ap: 529/1130

Sean Chro Level 5

535/535 Hp
0/0 Ap
434/550 Mp

I lash out with a quick slash towards the bandit's midsection, which he expertly parries with his great sword, as he slashes forwards.

*Squelch*

And embeds it into my side.

'painpainpainpainpain'

June gasps as she covers her mouth with both hands.

"Oh?" He asks before smugly grinning. "You don't have aura?"

Something snaps as I clench both of my fists, my fingers twitching from the burning pain of nearly being gutted.

"RAAAAGH!" I roar as I swing my offhand forward, coincidentally the one on the side that was cut.

A large spike of my own blood launches out of my wound, pushing against his aura and sending him skidding across the ground from the force of the attack, leaving his great sword in my side as the spike of blood formed around the blade.

A skill has been created through a specific action.

Blood Spike (Active) (Element: Blood) (Level 1: 0.0%) Cost: 800 (400) Mp
Deals damage equal to 50+Int +50%, must take half the mp cost in damage to your health points on completion of the spell, or shortly beforehand.

A skill has been created through a specific action.

Blood Control (Passive) (Level: Max)
Your passive control of your blood, and your heritage allow you to heal 4 times quicker than a normal human.

Your vitality has increased by 3

"Wh-what the hell?" The aura-clad man in front of me asks the open air as he sits up to see a large slowly shifting spear of red partially receding back into my body, his great sword falling to the floor as the spike takes on a more liquid viscosity. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU?!"

Sean Chro Level 5

355/550 Hp (A/n I would like to note, his attack didn't deal 200 damage, it did around 70 and the spell itself ripped more blood out of Sean, thus dealing 200 in total)
0/0 Ap
39/550 Mp

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 10

Hp: 565/565
Ap: 409/1130

I glance to my side to see my blood seeping back into the wound. "…"

I slowly turn back to the man, an impassive expression on my face.

"Y-YOU'RE A MONSTER!" He shouts.

"You're one to talk Pillager-rapist-murderer..." My voice wavering slightly as I am in quite a bit of pain that is slowly letting up. "Karma has a strange way of dealing with worthless wastes of space like you... I guess that I am just the one who it chose to kick your ass..."

I run towards the man, drawing my fist back before clocking him in the side of the face with it, causing his entire head to snap to the side. Vital Hit (*1.5 damage) I punch forward with my other hand, it bounces off the aura protecting his stomach, I swing my other arm forward, bashing my elbow against his chest Vital Hit (*1.5 damage) before finishing my combo with an uppercut that causes his teeth to clatter, launching him back onto his rear. Critical Hit (*2 Damage)

Branwen Tribe Reject Level 10

Hp: 565/565
Ap: 300/1130

A brown light crackles around him as he widens his eyes and pauses his attempt to get up as his knees seem to weaken.

"N-No... a minute has passed already?!" He stutters.

More blood flows back into my body.

"Tch... pathetic... you got beat by a kid without aura..." I scoff at him as I grab both sides of his head before slamming his face into my knee.

*Crack*

Super Crit! (*3 damage)

Bgm: end

He falls backwards, unconscious, and with a shattered nose that is profusely bleeding.

I turn to the girl staring at me still covering her mouth.

"Sup..." I say with a grin. "I'm here to save you..."

[Nice... paying homage to the original!]

A Quest Has Been Completed


VELL VELL VELL I vould say that zis is already at least 3 times better than ze original!

So, what do you think of Sean's new blood powers? Anyone want to guess what race he is? … this is a question to those who either 1: didn't read the original... or B: didn't stick around long enough for it to be revealed... and I won't blame you for that... the first chapter would turn me away from the story so I am in no position to judge!

Sean's fighting style is going to be based on a fighting style of someone of similar stature and powers... any guesses?

Now onto the guest reviews!... and damn... there are A LOT of them... LIKE DAMN! 40+ total reviews on last chapter ALONE! That is a personal best!

Well without further ado

Guest Reviews:

This Boi: "Hooooooooooooo boy Sean going throught the electric boogaloo again? Let's just hope his sanity and v-card stays intact, also im back! yaaaaaaay let the games begin!"

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PFFHAAHAHAHAHAH! You expect Sean to keep his virginity?! I mean, Sanity is debatable... but as the wise and powerful Neptep once said (now). "That cherry has got to go!"

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Cf96: "Nice"

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Nice

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Guest 001: "Please don't just give up on the original one."

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I mean... it was REALLY trash... Sean got WAAAY too op as I gave him the gamer ability... and 11 years to train... in this... Sean most likely won't be getting Aura till beacon...

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Guest 002: "This better not die it is too good to die don't disappoint me to rewrite this only for it to die or else I'll have neo invade your thoughts only no gamer powers."

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Oof... the Ice Cream might even be worse than the Nep...

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Guest 003: "I think the story is better overall than the last one rewriting it was a good choice also was that a Jojo refrence?"

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Pffft whatever gave you the idea that it was a jojo referience?

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GUYMAN v2: "soooo sense your have started the rewrite could you make Sean evil I understand if you want him to be the GOOD GUY but there's why too many good guy gamer fanfictions and too little bad guy gamer fics so please for someone who got sick of good guy fics can you do this for me..."

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Sean won't be evil! Just... chaotic neutral...

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Superkaiokengoku: "Are you still keeping the oc x ruby x neo"

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Maybe just Seo this time...

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KX: "Consider me sceptical. You want to reduce the cringe but you keep TopNep ? Sorry to burst your bubble but Nep inside yozr head is basically cringe incarnated. If you keep the mecha giant grim stuff as well i cant say i see the appeal of the rewrite.
I mean sure. Reducing the powerlevel in general MIGHT help the overall feel of the story. But the cringe factors were Nep, race stuff and the mecha stuff.:

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Booo! Neptep is a god! No robots tho

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Anonymous:"MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA! MUDAAAAAAAA!"

Okay, here we go. Reboot time's up, let's do this! LEEROOOOOOOOOOOOOY JEEEEEEEEEEENKIIIIIIIIIIINS!

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LEEEEERRROOOOOOOOOOYYY JEEEEEEEENNKIIIIIIIINSSS

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A fan: "Now that I think about it in this new cannon of the story if you are beyond sure septep won't be a thing then you shouldn't let neptep have a ghost shell just saying."

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It'll be FIIIIIIINNNNEEEE!

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Boblets: "Yeah not interested in this that annoying neptune character ruined it for me."

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If you don't like annoying characters say goodbye to about 90% of all literature... because at some point you are going to find a character that IS annoying in said story... if you were actually planning on giving this story a chance you wouldn't let a SINGLE character ruin the story... just piss off... for real... if a single character can ruin stories for you god forbid you watch one piece... oh did that Colby character annoy you? GOD FORBID! DROP THE WHOLE ANIME! INTO THE BLENDER IT GOES!

I know my place in this site... about in the middle on the line of 'bearable' and 'sort of okay'.

If you have constructive criticism... by all means... hit me with it... god knows this story would be like chapter 1 of the old fic for many, many, chapters without it... but if you are just going to bitch about the story for no other reason just to tell me that you didn't like it, just leave... I accept that some people won't like this story, and I get it... you just don't need to go out of your way to be a dick, ya' know?

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Guest 004: "M8 u did 9/11?"

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Psh... nah man... it was the moon people... damn them and their moonspeak!

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humer: "im sorta glad you're rewriting this, i mean it was brilliant and all, but s*** got out of hand a little. also i really hope you have Neo in this too, but maybe have Sean less afraid of her lol, it was funny and made him seem oddly cute in a tsun way, but i think you could make it a good romance. all in all, good chapter and i hope to see more! keep the chapters coming bro"

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Sean will in fact be slightly less spooked about female contact.

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Welp! This has been a slightly longer chapter... of The Remnant Gamer Re-Write!

I really should change the name to 'The Remnant Gamer Remastered'… that would probably be a better name...

See you all next Sunda- NANI?! WHAT'S THIS?! AN OMAKE?!

I DON'T EVEN HAVE A THIRD OF THE MAIN CHARACTERS INTRODUCED YET! HOW COULD I POSSIBLY DO AN-


Omake (Canon)

'so, I mean... this is basically a dream come true if I am going to be honest... my old life was extremely boring before all of this... and now I am in an anime world!'

[Yeah, I can see what you mean... to meet the goddess that is me is definitely a once in a lifetime experience, but you managed to do it twice... in one day!]

'mhm...' I think sarcastically, jumping over a root that would have probably tripped me if I couldn't see in the dark.

Your Vit Has Increased By 1

[but you turned down my flirting you fucking madman... do you know how many people would break down and just bone right there?]

'this is... making me kind of uncomfortable...'

[OHOHOHO I fear for your sanity...]

'what do you mean?'

[if THAT made you uncomfortable... just wait until you meet some of the Rwby cast... two of them, as soon as they figure out what you are, would instantly attempt to fuck you- actually the second might wait around... but the race thing is the reason why she would hang around.]

'W-what? R-really?'

[For different reasons of course... one is an attempt to gain your power... and the other because she would slowly gain an actual attraction to you! Weird right?]

'Steal my powers?'

'…'

'OH FUCK'

'C-Cinder would attempt to fuck me?'

[if you sort of just showed up and didn't affect her plans at all and she figured out either A: what you are or B: you have magic power... yeah... but if you do stop some of her plans... she would probably try to steal your powers in a less fun and more stabby-stabby drain your magic with this bug grimm way...']

'I mean... Cinder is sort of... maybe hot... kind of a shame she got SUPER fucked up at the end of volume 3... but that bitch fucking deserved it... though I thank you for warnings... now I know not to get involved with crazy false maiden bitches.'

[what about getting involved with regular maiden bitches?]

'N-NUMBER TWO IS RAVEN?! NONONONONONONO-'

[Not Raven... hell, I wasn't even on the topic of 'Rwby-cast-that-want-to-fuck-you' anymore, I was referring to something else entirely]

'Who?!'

[oh, you'll see in a couple of minutes... though I don't expect you to get sexually involved with this one... only the regular speaking perhaps become her brother involved...]

'IIIIIIIIIII don't like this...' I mentally respond, drawing out the 'I'

[Meh, you don't need to like it.]


WELP! See you all next week!