Disclaimer: Not a strand on Atobe's hair is not mine Dx
Aurora: Haha thanks for tell me to fix it up, once I read it over it sound too Mary sueish oo
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"Never Pretend to a Love which you do not actually feel, for love is not ours to command." –Alan Watts
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Ever since that day, they all had planned out her full two weeks within that class period.
Requested from Atobe was not to use the car for transportation. Requested from Suichi was to leave the house at 7:10 AM and run to school within 5 minutes. Requested from all was to meet at the Tennis courts on Monday, Tuesday, and Thursdays. Wednesday and Fridays at the track field, Saturday and Sunday at her house. Everything else they didn't tell her.
It was a couple days she had to go through that schedule; she was going to collapse once she gets out of her house. She's been late everyday because of this. Her caretakers including the servants, and etc. were worried about her health. Unfortunately, another request from Atobe was not to eat sweets on the weekdays but the weekends she can, whenever that'll be.
Hanako always tends to forget her lunch because of her rush to school. It was becoming a habit of her now, run out of the house with water in her hand and running off, attending class, having a small detention, go to either the courts or the field, and walk back home.
It was already Home EC class, one of the worst subjects ever known to her. She cannot cook, she cannot clean, she can't do anything. She tends to pass this class with a low D. The teacher expects her to pass it with a B but not in her book.
"When will this class end?"
She groaned out while putting her head on the desk and ignoring the blabbering teacher. She took out her book from her lap and started reading the same paragraph over and over again for the pass hour. The bell has rung over the blabbering teacher. She gathers her things and left the classroom while reading her book.
She calculated her steps from Home EC to her class 3-1. She doesn't bump into anybody because she could see a bit on top of her book. She was reading a passage; it quoted "Never pretend to a Love which you do not actually feel, for love is not ours to command." By Alan Watts. Her book was snatched at the entrance of the classroom door. She wasn't alert when someone did that. She looked up to see Atobe smirking at her, while dangling her book in the air. She glared behind her rectangle rimmed glasses.
"No reading in the halls or you'll trip."
She turned her head to the side and mumbled.
"I prefer getting tripped then getting my book snatched by you."
She said and walked into class grabbing her book on the way.
Hanako was mad at him because he requested not to have anymore sweets. Since she started on her training she wasn't able to have any sweets, which are the only thing that could bribe her and maybe the other thing too. Before School started and the clubs as well, she meets up with Gakuto Mukahi at the Cake Shoppe and eat cake there or someplace else on a certain day like The Dango Stand.
She read the same paragraph again to ignore her growling stomach. She stopped and puts her book down in her bag.
"Will you be quiet?"
She muttered to her stomach.
"It is your fault for leaving your lunch at home."
"Blegh, and now you show up?"
"Rui-San… Rui-San."
Hanako snapped out of her little thoughts. She looked up at Oshitari.
"Hm?"
She asked him.
"Here."
He places down a bento.
"You'll need it for today after school, noticing that you forget your lunch."
He explained.
"But what about you?"
He lifted up his arm and shows another bento that is wrapped in a handkerchief.
"Oh, thank you."
She said and pulls the box closer to her. She opened it and saw a full lunch. There was a note on top. She picked it up and read it.
"There are candy under the rice, make sure you eat it before Atobe or Yamaki-San catches you."
Oshitari.
She grinned and took the chopsticks that were diagonal across the food.
"Itadaki- Sit with me Oshitari-San."
She pats on the empty side of her desk. He simply nodded. He took a seat from a nearby desk and sat down in front of her.
"Oh? A little group party? 'Che you guys leave me out too?"
Suichi said and took his seat and sat down next to her and Oshitari. Atobe was crowded around some girls from other classes. Some were 'brave' enough to go up to him, some are taking far away pictures, another are just adoring him. Girls around him squealed when he acts like a God in front of the girl(s). People bugged Oshitari too and giving him love letters and also taking pictures of him in the classroom. Some girls wished to be at her spot, some were just like 'that girl can't get him, she's too plain.' And stuff like that.
It was quiet but loud lunch. Quiet within the group and loud outside of the group. Suichi left before she finished her rice, which was good for her. She swallowed all her contents and took the candy and ate it before they looked at her, besides Oshitari, who smirked.
"Satisfied?"
He asked while finishing up his own lunch, Hanako nodded her head in a little hyper-ish mode. She closed the box and handed it back to him, he just pushed it back.
"Keep it. I have no use of it anymore."
He said and got up and placed the chair back to its original place and headed back to his desk which was in the back. She smiled and cleaned up her area; she went out of the classroom and went down the hall to spot Gakuto somewhere. He was eating Dango.
"Aa! Dango!"
She ran up to him and was about to take his stick but Atobe was in front of her. He glared at her and placed it back down. She was mumbling some words. She stalked back out and into the classroom with a scowl on her face. She went back to her original routine and took out her book. Now that she is sort of satisfied she can read her book, calmly. Still something bugged her mind. It wants sweets which was bugging her. She's trying to withstand it and eventually got over it in the middle of class.
"Rui-San? Rui Hanako!"
The teacher yelled out.
"Hum, what?"
She scratched her head and looked at the teacher.
"Can you answer this question?"
She blinked a couple of times and thought,
"Um, Three?"
She simply guessed.
"So you were paying attention, hmph, anyways since the equation is set to…"
The teacher blabbered on and on about it. She started to doodle on her notebook paper which was blank unlike anyone else's paper, which had a couple of notes here and there.
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"So you expect me to run the courts ten times?"
She dreaded the word ten at the moment. They nodded. She was about to decline but she heard Gakuto cheering her on. Her shoulders dropped and started to run.
Not even a lap and she started walking.
"Eleven Laps."
Atobe said.
"Keep running, if you don't I'll keep raising it."
Hanako's eyes widen and started to jog a bit. It was only a couple of laps when her throat became dry, she was breathing abnormal than any other people. People just stared at her go instead of paying attention on their practice. It was her seventh lap and she was going to collapse on the spot. She forced herself to go on more till she collapsed at the eighth lap marking.
"Stop, Rui-San."
She got up and kept running, something inside her just broke. Her mind was unconscious but her body wasn't. She kept going till she reached her ninth lap marking, till she was held back by Gakuto.
"Hanako-Chan, just stop."
Once she stopped the courts were silent, only to stare at the poor girl. She collapsed after it being silent for a couple of minutes.
Oshitari stared at the girl on the ground.
"Her breathing was irregular… Even if she had asthma, it wouldn't be like this. What's going on?"
He thought and saw Suichi turn the corner to see her on the ground.
"What did you guys do? I thought you guys were going easy on her for now."
He asked with no answer. He only stared at her. Gakuto's head sprang up.
"Does anyone have chocolate?"
He asked to the whole group.
"Gakuto, it isn't time to eat candy."
Oshitari said walking to Hanako.
"No it's for Hanako-Chan! Her lack of sugar is what bringing her down."
Oshitari picked her up after he said that.
"I have a Hershey Kiss, does that count?"
Some club member said from behind the group. Gakuto ran towards the back and saw the art club secretary. He held her hands.
"That's fine, may I please have it?"
He asked, she just nodded and gave it to him. He held it in his hands and made it melt. He put a bit on his hand and waved it over her nose. In a matter of seconds she went up and bit his finger. Gakuto flinched in pain. Hanako opened her eyes and saw Gakuto's river of tears from pain.
"Aa! Gakuto, why did you taste like chocolate?"
She asked and noticed that she wasn't on the ground but in the air. She started more around and Oshitari dropped her, or whether that she dropped herself.
"Ouch."
She muttered and got up. Stumbled a bit but managed.
"So… Chocolate?"
The art secretary came up to her and handed her another Hershey Kiss.
"Aa! Kinoka-San, what are you doing around here?"
Hanako asked.
"No, its Kino-Chan. Plus I was worried about your low sugar level. So I got Hershey Kisses."
Hanako's eyes gleamed up and placed her hands out. Kinoka took some off her clipboard.
"Oh yea and plus, since you are hanging around after school, will you recommend in that art club? I heard it around school that you'll be hanging around here somewhere."
Hanako didn't say anything for the past minute or so.
"Well… Maybe, I don't know. It's just…"
She started to shift uncomfortably.
"You don't have to answer me now Hanako-Chan. Tell me later, ok?"
Hanako nodded and Kinoka took her leave.
"Stupid. Make yourself faint like that."
Someone hit her head. She turned around and pointed.
"Aa! Aoshi-Kun!"
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EDIT: I Fixed it up. I think that's how you do it right? I got confused a bit, so on my spare time from all the homework, I did this. Hmm.. I have a funny plot with Aoshi in it of the next Chapter. I think it's funny, It makes me grin, but whatever.
Hm? Who's Aoshi? Keep reading.
TELL ME, IF MY CHARACTER IS MARYSUE.
I really don't want to mess up now. Anything is fine.
Please if you give me any tips or advice or something that helps me, make it constructive.
