Star wars: The chosen ones Master
Author's note
Hello sorry for the long wait my computers been broke for a while now, in response to the reviews I agree that my grammar is poor and now know that commas are important I hope I can improve the more I write, also in response to the review from MJLupin27 I have always thought that Obi Wan was the right Master for Anakin I'm hoping to show that in my story, any way rights are owned by Disney and George Lucas no profit is made in the writing of this story.
Chapter 2: Nightmares
It was the same nightmare again Obi Wan Kenobi was again fighting the tattooed Demon Darth Maul, he mocked him knocking his Lightsabre away always the same, falling into the pit watching as Darth Maul tried to finish him and as much as he wanted the demon to succeed to join his Master in the force he never did, he flipped over the demon and cut him in two once again and watched him fall down the pit once again but as before no feeling of victory came only a horrible feeling of guilt of not being fast enough of despair and failure.
His mind told him that the nightmare was almost over he just had get through this next bit the worse bit, he approached his fallen master Qui Gon Jinn wounded horribly in the stomach with no way of recovery just enough time to say goodbye no to make sure his chosen one was ok.
The nightmare always taunted him with this thought, a vile thought jealous thoughts full of hatred to Anakin Skywalker "Obi-wan promise⦠promise me you will train the boy" and once again the words unbidden in his mind replied "Yes Master" tears streaming down his face "he is the Chosen One he will bring balance train him." And with one last breath Qui Gon died and the nightmare should end.
Darkness swept round the room any minute now Obi-Wan thought and he'd wake to start the day, coldness gripped at his heart so painful that it hurt he fell to his knees crying out he felt darkness all around him and in the darkness a set of yellow eyes glowing the dark.
"You failed me Obi-Wan" His Master shouted "You're not a knight you are still a Padawan" Qui Gon yelled pain exploded as a bond thought dead flowed to life emotions that weren't his went through his mind anger he had never felt before especially from his master.
His master eyes grew bright yellow almost as if the evil was trying to get out he moved his hands towards his Lightsabre hooked on to the pitch black robes Obi-Wan knew he always said he hated, Qui Gon ignited his blade a bright red light appeared and Qui Gon pressed it against Obi-Wans chest making a slight burn, Obi-Wan bit down the urge to cry out but looked down at his feet instead Qui Gon was right he had failed him, suddenly Qui Gon pulled back and then forced the blade through Obi-Wans stomach making him gasp in pain and brought his face closer and whispered "now you know what I felt when you failed to protect me" Qui Gon then pushed Obi-Wan to the floor who landed with a cry "Come to Naboo come to Naboo and face me for what you have done".
Then a bright light surrounded Obi-Wan and he entered the world of the living once more with a horrible scream that echoed or seemed to echo throughout the Jedi Temple and through the force itself, he found himself in his room bed tangled and a very scared Anakin and concerned Yoda greeted him, it took a while for Obi wan to calm down and when he did he breathed out "My masters back" and passed out unconscious once again not seeing Yoda's shocked look.
Authors note
So here is chapter 2 it's not a long chapter but I expect my chapters to get longer now I'm back on fanfiction if anyone wants to review feel free actually if anyone can tell me more about Obi-Wan and Qui Gon jinn's history would be appreciated I'm sure my grammar isn't great here so any help or helpful criticism would be appreciated anyway next chapter will be called dealing with the future which will mainly deal with the repercussions of the nightmare.
