I'm so glad that i got so many views. But, i need to get reviews. Mostly because i don't know if i should keep doing this or not. Also just in case you need me to change anything. Just as long its no too harsh. So i'm open up to any ideas or if i need to change anything. Also if you could tell me how Nightmare Moon or Discord could trick the others.


*Outside*

Luna appeared in front of the sleeping friends. She checked behind herself to make sure Discord was there. Everyone woke up to see that it's still dark out. Twilight asked herself, "What's going on? Why is it still dark?" Applejack yawned, "It's probably because of the storm." They both screamed when they saw Princess Luna in front of them. Which woke up everyone else; Luna asked, "Did thy friends have a good eve?" Twilight answered, "Yes, Princess Luna. Why is all of this happening?" Luna thought for a moment, "Uh…We do not know Twilight. Do thy friends want to enter the castle?" Rarity immediately said, "Oh please yes. Being out here has been simply dreadful, thank you so much." Luna smiled and walked them to the castle entrance.

Luna stopped and announced, "Thou need to be alone." Twilight asked, "When you get inside, can you tell us more about Discord? Like if he can escape without the need of disharmony." Luna shouted, "Thou art a boil, a plague-sore, or embossed carbuncle!" They all looked confused. Rainbow Dash whispered to Twilight, "Is that bad or good?" Twilight shrugged. Fluttershy sighed, "So uh…I guess we'll see you later Princess." Luna said, "I shall see thee anon." The group went to the castle. When they left Discord started laughing. He laughed, "Thou art a boil, a plague-sore, or embossed carbuncle. I know I should be upset, but that sounds so stupid." Luna rolled her eyes. She smirked, "Well I hope thou knows I was speaketh about thee." Discord stopped laughing. She proposed, "You should make it sunny again. That way she doesn't get suspicious." Discord groaned, "I hope you know I'm all for chaos. But, as long as it keeps her from getting suspicious, it'll only be an illusion though." Luna nodded her head. Discord snapped his fingers, he disappeared, and the clouds started parting. Luna smiled and went towards the castle.

*Inside the castle*

Rarity swooned, "I always love going inside the castle. It's so beautiful, so wondrous, so…" Pinkie quipped, "So royally." Rarity just stared at her. Twilight pondered, "I wonder where Princess Celestia is." Applejack whispered to everyone, "Twilight looks more nervous; than a long tailed cat in a roomful of rocking chairs." They all said, "Mhmm." Luna entered and asked, "How fare thee?" Pinkie answered, "Fair? Well I don't think there's one going on. But, I think I'll have to check. Hey the sun is out!" Everyone looked outside. The sun is out, but why? Twilight looked really confused. How's the sun out already. We were just out there a few seconds ago. Luna asked, "Is thy alright?" Twilight shook her head. She said, "I'm just worried that's all. It doesn't make sense at all." Luna suggested, "Does thy need sleep?" Twilight shook her head, Rarity answered for her, "Yes she does." Applejack added, "Twilight hasn't slept in weeks." Twilight scoffed, "Well it hasn't been that long. Has it?" The five nodded. Luna escorted her to her sister's chamber.

*Princess Celestia's room*

Twilight asked, "Isn't this the Celestia's room?" Luna disagreed, "Nay, methinks not." She looked puzzled but, shrugged it off. Something inside her felt like Luna was lying to her. But, she was too tired to think about it. Even though it was the Princess's room, she climbed into bed and went to sleep. Luna smiled and quietly walked out.

*Outside*

Luna's horn glowed and the door turned into a steel chained door. The windows were also locked, by steel bars. Luna whispered, "Now all I have to do is rid of her friends. But, how am I to do that?" She knew it would be harder getting rid of her friends. Her horn glowed and Discord appeared. He was wearing a Hawaiian t-shirt; he was lying on a cloud, and drinking punch. His eyes widened when he saw Luna laughing. He snapped his fingers and everything disappeared. He asked, "What do you want?" Luna asked, "Twilight's friends, how did you get rid of them?"

Discord answered, "Well I used their elements against them. Like with Rarity and generosity. Instead, of her being generous, I made her think it was better to have precious valuables to herself." Luna shook her head. She noted, "They'll know that I'm probably working with you." They heard a voice down the hall call, "Princess Luna, is that you?" Luna pushed Discord out a nearby window. Luna shouted, "Come hither, my friend." Discord laughed. Luna just gave him an angry look. When the figure got closer; it was Rarity. She asked, "I just wanted to know if Twilight is fine." Luna nodded. Rarity rocked back and forth. Luna narrowed her eyes. She sighed, "Tell ye truth." Rarity didn't want to. She finally asked, "Is there a place somewhere in the castle that has…you know… jewels?" Luna smiled. She may have found a way to trick her. She nodded, "Follow me." Rarity jumped up excitedly and followed behind Luna.

*Jewel Chambers*

They were deep underneath the castle. When they arrived there were two huge doors covered in shimmering emeralds. Luna was fine walking really far down, but Rarity was breathing heavy. She huffed, "Is this it? Please tell me this is it?" Luna looked at her strangely. She laughed, "Thou realize that it only took 20 minutes." Rarity rolled her eyes. Luna answered, "Yea, we are." Luna stuck her horn inside a hole and used her magic. The doors swung open and revealed a cave. On the walls were torches and a ton of jewels.

Rarity gasped, "There's bound to be thousands of jewels in here. Diamonds, sapphires, rubies, they're all so beautiful." Luna agreed, "It is most beauteous. Would thee like to go inside?" Rarity squealed and ran inside. Rarity asked, "Is it alright if I borrow a few? It's for my line of fashion." Luna laughed and Nightmare Moon's voice showed, "Oh don't worry you'll be here for quite some time." Rarity's eyes went wide. Luna shut the door and the wind blew the fire out. Rarity shouted, "What are you doing?" She answered, "Taking back what's rightfully mine." Rarity shouted, "Somepony! Anypony! Help me!" Luna disappeared in a cloud of purple mist. Rarity got stuck in a deep, dark cave. Rarity whispered, "I wonder what she'll do to the others."


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