AN (author's note): Hey ppl!
I know, i know my first chapter wasnt very good but i didnt have enough time but i did go back and edit it so if u haven't read the new version you might want to go back and read it's not very different but yeah there are a few changes here and there. well here is Chapter 2, don't worry it's much better than the first...i think!
Well enjoy!
PS: reviews are really appreciated!
Leo's POV
Finally we're here! The roman camp actually looked pretty cool, but nothing beats camp half-blood. Plus the chicks at camp half-bood are way hotter but there was this girl who was totally checking me out, apparently her name was Hazel or something but she was kind of freaky she called me "Sammy" and the last time I checked my name was Leo. Well after all the hugging was finished we made are way down to the "senate house" as they called it. As we were going there we encountered a statue without arms and a little girl.
"Hello," he said, "please deposit your tool belt into the tray that Julia is holding."
"Litsen up no arms!" I called it,"that little girl may be cute but no one is laying hands on my belt."
"Leo Samuel Valdez my name is Terminus, and I will not be spoken to that way, do you understand me?"
"Understand you? To hell with-"
"Leo," Percy interrupted,"he might not have arms but he is still a god, trust me he won't lose your tool belt."
"Fine," I replied grumpily,"but this is the last time I go without my tool belt!
Well after that little "disagreement" we entered the senate house and holy Hephaestus it was huge! As we took our seats the weird skinny pale kid called Octavian started yelling again:
"We need a prophecy, and I think the gods are trying to communicate with me somebody get me a stuffed toy immediately!"
"There is no time for stuffed toys," Reyna said calmly, "the Greeks have told me they have a real Oracle and I think we will waste less time consulting her than killing a few stuffed animals."
"Well where is she then?" Octavian demanded, "if the Greeks have such a high and mighty Oracle then where is she, what is she afraid of the Romans?" along with that came a few agreeing whispers.
Well I got to say that wasn't very nice, it was pretty obvious the Romans didn't like us but Percy was the one to react first.
"Woah there kid no one wants a fight okay, the Romans and the Greeks are equally good, she'll be here soon Annabeth is bringing her, she has not been well lately."
"Well to the Underworld with equality! If the Greeks and Romans are equally good then why are there more Greeks than Romans going on this quest?"
"Who said there were more Greeks than Romans going on the quest?" Reyna asked.
"Well it's obvious isn't it?" replied the Octavian sneering, "Jason will go with those two graecus that he went on a quest with and then Percy here will take Hazel and Frank, so he obviously couldn't leave his smart ass girlfriend behind could he? You didn't actually think they were going to take you did you Reyna?"
Reyna looked absolutely bewildered, "Well we'll have to consult the Oracle before we make any rash decisions."
"No we don't," Annabeth's voice came from the door, as she staggered in with Rachel, "we've already got the prophecy don't we, Octavian is right, Jason, Piper, Leo, Hazel, Frank and Percy have to go, they are the seven half-bloods that Hera chose, now we have to just decide on the seventh one, and we should decide fast Chiron said we would need to leave as soon as possible."
"Well good," Reyna said looking satisfied, "so shall we have a vote on who should be the seventh going on this quest?" almost the whole senate house agreed, Reyna stood up and was just about to ask for votes when Percy spoke up.
"No! Look it has to be Annabeth okay, I know, I just know."
"Why? Why can't it me- I mean someone else?"
"Ok, look after I went on the quest on the feast of fortuna, which apparently has nothing to do with tuna, Hera told me that it's Annabeth who has to go, it's just really important she comes."
"Oh wow," Octavian drawled on, "do you people really believe this? I don't know about you guys but I'm out of here." As Octavian went out almost all of the roman campers followed, seems like that pale sickly looking kid was actually pretty popular, well that or the Romans just really despise us. Reyna pulled herself together again and started to speak.
"Well, I'm sorry that the meeting didn't go so well, I will try to talk to the campers about it, anyway I think it's now time for you guys to take a tour of the camp and then rest, I suppose it's been a long day for all of you."
Yeah I took the prophecy out cause most of you guys said it was too straight forward, well you're right I guess so did you like it?
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