The forgotten child part 2

a/n hello everyone new chapter yay I'm a noon at this and I'm on a tablet so I don't know what to do like how to do polls or give updates so if anybody may give me hints I would be very grateful talk to you later bye

also there is going to be some heavy mistakes because i dont have a corrector sorrie

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The moment the potters and baby siter put the boys to sleep a laud boom was heard meaning the wards were broken. another boom was heard braking the door the siter came down ad screamed "stupid mud blood" the man with the black cloak. The face of this said man looked like snake two red eyes pale skin and no nose yust two slits (shudders).

The cloakd men killed the sitter whith two simple words avada kadbra the killing curse he went up stairs and found the door lock whith multiple complicated locking charms "they think they can keep me on whith this ha ha I say bombarda" BOOM went the doors one of the babies immediately woke up and started crying the other not so much he looked in to men's eyes whith beautiful green eyes that looked into your soul. The two babies could not be more different one had wild unruly hair while the other had perfectly neet red hair one had green eyes the other had hazel eyes. The man in the cloak looked at the two babies and decided that the baby on the left was the one he pointed is wand at his forehead and said the words that would resonate for years "Avada kadabra" in one instant a shield surrounded the two boys the one whith emerald eyes bore in to the man's or what left of soul he screamed as his curse rebounded to I'm screaming he turn to ash the man's soul cursed th child and left who out a trace. After the shield was down some debri fell on the hazel eyed twin cutting a cut in the shape of a star while the other one passed out from magical extion

At the party whith lily and James

The Young couple apareted in the black's family home and we're greeted by their best friend sirus black "James lily glad you could make it how harry and Orion" said sirus black he was a skinny man with long hair and a little of a beard "the twins are fine we left them with a muggle baby siter and put a bunch of spells to keep and army out now we're is Dumbledore we need to talk at the matter at hand" said James "oh he's in the living room talking with the logbottoms come with me ". Said sirius who walked them around the party was whild looking firewhyskie ebrywere and people dancing evrywere when they got to the living too were Dumbledore was talking with the logbottoms. Mr Dumbledore a crazy looking man for you normal people he wore half moon glasses stary robes and a weird looking hat he has twinkling eyes that were lit up when he suked his previous lemon drops or got exited "a a the potters what nice evening I was yust talking whit Mr and Ms longbottom " said Dumbledore "yes we wanted to talk about Orion" "ah yes Orion the child of the prophesy what do you want to talk about" said Dumbledore eyes twinkling madly "are you sure he is the child of the prophesy" said James worry edge on to his face "yes I'm I'm sure he was born on the on of July at exactly 11:59 and -" Dumbledore was interrupted by a laud alarm on lily's rest WEEEEEEEEOOOOO it went "those are the ward alarms somebody broke in James my babies are in danger dumbles let's go and with that they apparated on the potters door step that was blasted open lily ran upstairs to find that harry fast a sleep and Orion wailing uncomfortably they looked on his hand and saw his hand a star shaped scar a raged looking cloak on the side of the babies "by Merlin" said dumbles "this you still prove my point Orion sirus potter is the boy who lived hail our savior" he bowed while having a maniac grin on his face and on that day wulfric Brian Dumbledore leader of light supreme magwump e made the gravest mistake of his carrier.

so how was the chapter tell me any spelling (pun totally intended) mistakes that I missed and present review and tell me hints bye