Hey everybody! I just wanted to let you all know I recently revised this story. I was never in love with the original finished product; it had a bunch of typos and and for some reason, the whole thing just felt kind of choppy to me. Instead of deleting it like I usually do when I hate a story, I decided to go back and fix it. I ended up adding quite a bit and changing some things, but the overall story is the same. I actually really like how it turned out so I would really appreciate it if you gave this story another look! If you do, be sure to leave a review letting me know what you think.
Thank you so much!
PS: If you want to check out some more of my work, I also recently edited my other Percy Jackson story, Happily Ever After. Enjoy!
