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Joe sat in front of the TV for hours but his dad stilled hadn't come back. He started getting worried when it got to 10 o'clock and his dad still hadn't returned. He started to fall asleep when the doorbell rang. Dad has a key, So why would he ring the doorbell? Thought Joe. He was surprised to see a policeman standing outside the door. This can't be good, he thought. As soon as he opened the door he could tell something was wrong. The mans body language and expression were all wrong and he had the looked of someone who had something to say but didn't know how how to say it. Joe knew what the man was going to say before he said it.
"I'm very sorry, but your dad is dead."
"H-h-how did it h-happen"Joe wobbled as he was shaking.
"Your dad delivered drugs, yes?"
Joe nodded.
"He had an argument with a customer because the man hadn't paid him enough. The man then stabbed him with a knife and he died before the ambulance arrived."
Joe didn't know what to feel. He just felt empty. His dad hardly saw him and Joe hated him sometimes but he was still Joe's dad and the only family Joe had after his mum what would happen to him now? He had no relatives. He would probably have to go to a children's home where he didn't know anyone. But would it be a fresh start? Somewhere where he was finally happy? Joe didn't know. But all he could do right now was crumple to the ground and cry for his mum and dad. Right then he fell into a deep depression and it felt like he'd never get out. .This was too much for him take in and he feinted.
