Special thanks to my first reviewer Snowflack43. I am glad you like it. Here is chapter 2.
I did forget the disclaimer in Chapter 1 so here it is
I don't own Ratchet & Clank Insomniac do, I own only my character to be later seen in this chapter.

Chapter 2: uninvited visitor


Inside the ship

"Master it is time to wake up" said the computer voice As the cryosleep chamber opened it showed the person still asleep snoring softly. "Not again" it said "well only one thing to do" It then summoned a robot and told its commands it than rolled to the bathroom and came back with a bucket of water. "Oh how much I just love waking him up like this." was the last thing the compute said before the robot dump it over its master.

"OOOOHHHHH MY GOD THIS WATER COLD AS HELL" he said before he started running around his ship looking for a towel. After he dried himself he soon notice the super computer laughing in a robot voice. "Did I oversleep again" he asked the computer.

"Yes sir, sorry but it's the only way to wake you up in a deep sleep" it said. "Yeah Yeah now that that is over what is our report." he said "Report show we are nearing the planet prepare for landing"

"All right" he said sitting down on his chair looking at the planet he beeb searching for. It is now time for me and ratchet to face, he said with a smile on his face.


Back on the planet

"Man what a day" ratchet said while walking into him home. "Yeah but at least we only practice once every 2 weeks" clank said. "Yeah thanks god to that, now we can relax the day away" ratchet said.


Back on the ship

"Excellent prepare for landing, deploy the landing gear" he said "Yes sir" said the computer. Below the ship the landing gear are coming out of the ship. "All right I am taking control for the landing this time, I done trust you after the landing on Ryna 5 That how we lost over hovering landing gear."

" Sorry, but it was me first try after all" it said "That is why after this we are going to practice landing."

"All right, building coming into veiw" he said " we are going to land right on top of it at that landing zone."

Inside building

"Clank did you hear something?" Ratchet asked "Yeah I thank it on the roof" clank answered. Ratchet grabbed his wrench and heading toward the roof.

As he got there the first thing he saw amusing and confused him. "a giant ship" was the only thing both of them said. "Clank get out of the way it's going to land!" Ratchet yelled as the ship neared the landing zone(Ratchet has 2 landing zones one for his ship and another for if he has visitors.) Both watch as the ship finally landed.

The ship open and both ratchet and clank waited for the person in charge to come out. " Oh ratchet nice to see you" the mysterious person said walking out his ship. He walk up to ratchet and stared into his eyes

Ratchet was of course mind blowned by what was infront of him. "wh- who are you and how do you know my name?"

"Well to answer you first question my name is Zack." "As for you next question well just look at me and you should find out why.

Ratchet looked and was shocked by what he saw-


Don't you guy love cliffhangers I know I do.
Who is this guy how does he know who ratchet is and and why is ratchet so mind blowned by what he is
find out new time in the story Ratchet & Zack Read and Review please. Thanks.