This chapter will be much longer then the last one! The last one was just to introduce you to the characters and plot. I feel kinda bad for my characters I gave them sad past/background stories.
Note: this chapter has been revised and edited. Though the story is pretty much the same, some words and sentences have being added, changed or removed.
Disclaimer: still don't own Pokémon, but I'm working on it!
Tobi had been wandering around route 1 for a while. He hoped to get to Trawa city before sun down so he could buy some pokeballs at the mart. He looked at his pokeball with his magikarp in it.
"I suppose that I should keep him. I mean, he will evolve, and I can't just dump him somewhere. That would be cruel. Once I catch something else, I will try to evolve him." He was just rambling out of boredom, but he did mean it.
It was hard being in the wild with only a magikarp. The Pokémon that kept appearing annoyed him. He had to keep running. He couldn't fight with his magikarp. So he ran, but it was annoying. Not to mention he felt like someone was watching him. Just my luck, it's likely some trainer, I can't run from that fight….
Kuna was training his shinx, but it wasn't going so well. Oh, he could make them faint, but they kept hurting h in the process. This frustrated Kuna because he didn't want Shinx to be hurt. He kicked a tree in anger. Trawa so close, just be patient…
Kuna was questioning catching another Pokémon, but none of the ones there interested. Anyone could get a bibarrel or rattata. Still, it would be nice to get even further ahead of Tobitasu, who would have only one pokemon. The thought of beating Tobitasu made him get excited. He would love to see that dumb kid fail at something. He was always ahead of Kuna.
Then a rustle of bushes caught his eyes…
Some time passed, and though he still felt like he was being watched, Tobi started to feel better, because the fact that he was finally getting the chance to prove himself to not be like team rocket. He would show them that he could be great trainer, and that he wouldn't be a thief.
A pidgey appeared. Tobi groaned and ran from it. This had been going on for a while. Then he got the shock of his life. Out of the bushes sprang a ninetales! This scared him to death. What the heck is a ninetales doing here!?
"Kanari, thanks for spying for me! I couldn't have been in both places at once!"
a little dirty-blonde-haired girl with bright green eyes and light skin came out of the brush and hugged the ninetales. She looked to be around 7-9.
"W-w-w-who are you?" Tobi was still recovering from his shock. And, he didn't like kids very much. It was kids who taunted him (except for willow, who is an adult) back in Archi town.
She smiled at him. "I'm Kitsune! But, you can call me Kit for short! This," she pointed at the ninetales, "this is Kanari! What is your name?"
"I-I-I'm T-Tobitasu. You can call me Tobi." This little girl was so cheerful, it made Tobi feel happy, but at the same time he eyed her suspiciously, since he didn't know why she was here.
"Hi Tobi! Sorry about spying on you! It's just that, my dad, he is a big fox lover. He raises eevee, the eeveelutions, zoru, zorark, absol, vulpix, and ninetales! Recently, some of our eevees had a bunch of baby eevee. He told me to bring by trainers I thought would be good to them! I was going to invite you! They are all level 5 and so cute!"
Tobi could use an eevee, it help him train his magikarp. Plus, he had always wanted an eevee. Besides, he didn't think Kit would be trying to trick him. "Ok, I will go check out the eevee babies."
She grabbed his arm and dragged him though the forest. A strange feeling of peace that he never felt before set over him.
Kuna hugged the pokeball with his new pokemon in it. Now he really was ahead! All he had to do was beat the next gym! Maybe he wasn't worthless after all!
Kuna was egger to be a Pokemon master and make his parents proud. But first, he needed to get out of this forest. So he set off to get out of the forest and to Trawa town.
Tobi was trying to pick an eevee. They were all so cute, but Tobi had to remember that he wasent picking a pet, he was picking a partner.
There were3 eevee kits. One had bright green eyes and was wrestling with a ball. An eevee with more fur then normal was grooming herself. And the last one was average, and soaked his pelt in the sun.
Kit's dad was trying to help by providing info about them.
"The furry one is named Fanshi. She is very fancy, but I'm sure she would work hard. The green eyed one is Em. He is a hard worker but a bit too playful. The last one is Chairo. He is, well, he is a lazy bones, but he would be a loyal friend."
Tobi was even more confused, but he decided to rule out eevee so that he could pick. Fanshi would not be good. As hard working as she might be, he could never manage such long fur. Fanshi would be better as a pet, he admitted. So that left Chario and Em.
He was going for Em. He needed a fighter, not a lazy bones. But, something about the way Chairo looked at him, Tobi had to reconsider. He needed a friend. No! you want a pokemon you can train! You need to pick Em! You need to!
"I'll take Chairo please." The words came out of his mouth before he could stop them. But, he could accept that. He felt so much better now.
Kit picked up Chairo and dropped him in Tobi's arms. Tobi smiled and found himself pleased with his decision.
"Bye bye Chairo! I will miss you! Be good for Tobi!" Kit hugged the eevee and kissed it. Tobi smiled. The eevee licked Kit's head. "Here is his pokeball! Good luck you two!" Kit waved to Tobi.
"Ok Kanari, let's go!" she whispered to her ninetales.
Tobi had wanted to train his pokemon up one level, but decided to just continue on to Trawa city because he didn't want to be too far from the Pokémon center. He was close, and could almost see it.
What he didn't know was, someone was waiting for him.
"Well well. If it aint Tobitasu." Kuna called. Tobi groaned. Great, I have to deal with him some more.
"What do you want Kyoryokuna?" leave it to the annoying kid who hates him for no reason to show up here.
"Well, I was hoping someone I could battle would come. That wouldn't be you because you have no fightable Pokémon!" he sneered.
"I'm fully ready for battle! I have more than one pokemon I can fight you with!"
"Then let's battle."
Tobitastu sent out an eevee!
Kyoryokuna sent out an eevee!
Tobi noticed the other eevees white coat and shiny paws.
"Wh… A SHINY?! How did you get a shiny eevee?!"
"I met a little girl. She said she had some eevee babies, and I needed to get ahead of you, so I took one. This little shiny one caught my eye. The girl was rambling about her name being Yu or something like that."
Tobi did a double take. Why would someone think KUNA of all people would be a good master?
Tobi ordered Chairo to use tackle. Chairo ignored him.
"What?!" why would Chairo ignore him like this?
"Hey Tobitasu! Looks like your eevee won't listen to you! You need to discipline your pokemon better!"
"Shut up kyoryoKuna! I wonder how you treat your pokemon? They are probably scared of you like the ones in our home town!"
Kuna looked really mad. He ordered Yu to tackle the other eevee.
Chairo lost half his HP. he yipped but just went to sleep.
"Chairo! Wake up and fight! Please?" he didn't what the little thing to faint.
Kuna didn't give him time to respond. "Yu, use tackle once more!"
Chairo fainted. Swallowing, Tobi sent out his magikarp, knowing he would lose. I'm sorry magikarp.
Kuna withdrew his eevee and sent out his shinx. Shinx used tackle. Magikarp used splash. Shinx used tackle, and magikarp fainted.
Tobi lost.
Kuna won.
Tobi ran into trawa city. He spotted the pokemon center and took them there. He sighed.
I lost…..
To be continued…
Authors note: I love Kuna! He is so much fun to write. I feel bad for all my human characters (except Kit) because they have such depressing backgrounds!
Name meanings:
Trawa: "grass" in polish. Its gym is grass type.
Kitsune: means "fox" in Japanese. It fits because her dad owns fox Pokémon. Also, I wanted an excuse to give her an adorable nickname.
Fanshi: means "fancy" in Japanese.
Em: short for "emrald". He has green eyes.
Chairo: means "brown" in Japanese.
Yu: I don't know. It sounded cool.
