Hello frnds
thx for rvw on previous chap
guys 'jindgi jina sikha diya mujhe' par 50 rvws complt hone m sirf 2 reviews ki kami h plz check out it if u dnt read it...i want to complt my 1st 50 on os...
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person : kaam ho gaya h...iski kabar khod di h (and trio laugh)
2nd person : le khatam kar de...(while giving him abhijeet)
1st person : thik h (at a time they listen a voice :dundho charo aur vo log yhi khi chupe h)
Kidnappers get scared
1st kidnapper : lagta h sanik aagae h...
2nd kidnapper : to aab kya kre...agar faas gae to jinda nhi bachege
1st person : phle bhagte h...
2nd person : (while pointing toward abhijeet) iska kya kre...
1st person : wo sab baad mein dekh lege...phle bhago yha se...
And with this they run away
After an half hour
1st kidnapper : ye log to charo or fale hue h...
2nd kidnapper : aisa karte h ise(abhijeet) markar yhi kachre ke dher par fank kar chalte h...(all noded)
and one of them squeez abhijeet's neck
And they run away in hurry
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at other place
A person : ye dekho...
Lady : ye kun h...
person (with love) : pata nhi...mujhe ye kachre ke dher par mila...
Lady : to...
Person : to m ise humare ghar le aya...humare to vaise bhi koi santan(child) nhi h (but he cutted with a frim voice)
Lady : to kya kisi ko bhi utha laa oge...pata nhi kiska paap h
Person with anger : chup raho devyani...jo muh mein aarha h...bke ja rhi ho...ye yhi rhega humare sath...humare ghar mein...or m dekhta hu kon rokta h mujhe
Devyani : aate hi mere khilaf kar dia apko...bada hokar n jane kya karega...(but he stopped by saw something)
Devyani in lovely tone : ye humare saath hi rhega...bhagwan ka asirwad h ye to...(man shocked by saw the sudden change in her behaviour) par ye kuch bol kyo nhi raha h
Man : behosh h...nawaz bhi bhot dhimi chal rhi thi ...m raste mein vedhay (doctor) ke paas se hokar aya hu unhone kha h ki darne ki baat nhi h kuch dair mein hi hosh aajaega...
When they listen a knock voice
Both turn & devyani said : are sima tum...aao na
Sima (their neighbour) : haa vo shakar kahtam ho gai thi to lene aai thi...
Devyani : chal rasoi (kitchen) m...deti hu m
Seema & devyani left for kitchen
In kitchen
Seema : vo bacha kon tha ...
Devyani told sima everything
Seema in shock : or tu maan gai use aapne ghar m rakhne ke liea...pagal to nhi ho gai...tum 2 logo ka kharcha hi bhut mushkil se nikalta h...or ye ek or
Devyani with evil smile :karcha badega nhi...balki ek kmane wala badega...
Seema : kaise...
Devyani : tune dekha nhi uske gale m sone ki kitni bhari mala thi...dono hatho mein sone ke kagan h...unhe bechkar bhot paise aege...or jab bada ho jaega to kama kar khilaega
Seema : waah !...kya dimak paya h tumne...
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other side in palace
Samrat : ye sanik aab tak aae kyo nhi...hum or sabar nhi kar sakte...hum khud jaaege...(at a time he listen a voice)
Minister : samrat ki jay ho
Samrat in hurry : veejay singh...kuch pata chala humare bete ka...
Veejay singh with downhead : hum ne pura rajay chan mara...par hume rajkumar abhijeet ka khi pata nhi chala...
Samrat pirthvi raj sit with a jerk...
Samrat : da..daya..kha..h..? (all are shocked by the sudden qustion for daya...all are expect somthing for abhijeet)
Samrat in anger : humne pucha daya kha h ?
When a person speak : yha h daya...samrat look toward the person with 6 month old child...and a tear falled from his eyes (which is noticed by the person)
The person come toward pirthvi raj and wipped his tear with strong voice : nhi pirthvi...nhi...aap ek mahan samrat h...aapki ankhoo mein ansuoo shoba nhi dete...
Samrat hug him & in tears : bhaiya..hamare abhi ko le gye...hum humare bete ko dushmano ki najroo se nhi bachapae...
Person : dev raj ke bhai h aap...humare bhai ...aapki ankho m ansuo lane wale ko hum jinda nhi chodege...aab aap chup hojaiye...(but pirthvi raj crying silently)
Devraj : aap himat rakhiye...hum rajkumar ko fir dhudhne ki koshish karte h...
Pirthviraj with lowerhead : koi fayda nhi h...hum saari koshise kar chuke h...
Devraj : himat rakho pirthvi...
Pirthvi wipped his tears with : hum samjhte h bhai ...par pata ni vo choti si jaan kha hogi...jinda bhi h ya (he is not able to speak furthur)...
Devraj : honi ko koi nhi taal sakta chotte...par hum ruk bhi to nhi sakte na...bhot badi jimedari h aapke kandho par...aap aese tut nhi sakte...
Pirthvi raj noded and wipped his tear with : hum sambhal le ge khud ko...
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time get passed
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daya and abhijeet also young now
both are same in nature...if they are happy then there is no limit of there happiness
and if angry with anyone then there is also no limit of anger
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daya is a handsome and soft hearted boy of age 18 years
with a attracting & shining face
and heart wining smile
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abhijeet is also a handsome but emostion controlling and self dependent 'khudar' and with serious nature ...a mature boy in small age of 21 year...
With sparcle eyes and a confident smile
In a small house
jagat : abhijeet beta...kha jaa rhe h aap kal
Abhijeet with smile : aapke sath
Jagat in shock : mere sath ? ...beta hum shai ghodo (horse) ki dekh-bhaal ka kaam karte h...mehal m...tum vha nhi jaoge
Abhijeet in cute tone : pita jii aap hi kehte h na ki koi kaam chota nhi hota...to fir aap mujhe kyo rok rhe h...m bhi agar nehal m kam kruga to kya burai h...
Jagat try to deny : abhi beta...(but abhijeet cut him)
Abhijeet in 'zid' : pitaaa jiiii...
Jagat : thik h tum kal chal sakte mere sath mehal...
other side in palace
Samrat : dayaa
Daya get stand & with respect : jii pita jii
Samrat : beta kal aap rajya ki parja se milne jaa rhe h ?
Daya with smile : haa pita jii
Samrat : bhot achee...hum aapki sawari tayar karne ka hukum dete h...
Daya immedtly : nhi pita jii...humara matlab h ki..hum..hmari jban..hmara matlab h..humare ghode 'chetak' par jana chahate h...jagat kaka ke sath
Samrat with smile : jaise aapko thik lage kijieaga..(in odering tone) par angrakshak (body guard) aapke saath jaege...samjhe aap
Daya noded immedatly
Samrat left with : hmmm...dhyan rakhiyega apna or koi setani nhi samjhe (daya noded & samrat left)
Daya in happiness : waah ! Aaj hum pura rajay ghumege...humare dosto or humari jaan humare chetak ke sath...waah !
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the end
guys rvws bhot kam the
regular rvwer gayab rhe
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adya : dear m naraj nhi hu...bas buzy hu studies m..dear m ek-do din m apki stories par rvw karti hu...and i m everytime available at pm
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is baar rvw ache ane chaiye
plz rvw
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mein story duo milap ke baad hi shru hogi
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to next chap bhot intresting hone wala h
kyoki nxt chap m duo aamne-samne aane wale h
to kya hoga age
kaise duo dost banege ye janne ke liea rvw plz
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nxt updt after 25 rvws.
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