Chapter Two
Honestly, it really was a stupid move. Who, who in all of Araluen would chase a black sorcerer through a dark forest, especially if said sorcerer's home was in the forest. Not that he actually believed Halt was a sorcerer. He knew that all those rumors about the Ranger were just rumors, being educated as he was. Well, then again that was obvious; he was a baron after all. He worked with Halt personally.
Gilan really was an idiot. That was the only true thing he could register.
"This is insane." He claimed. "Great, now I'm talking to myself too"
"Too, meaning…?" the new voice trailed off, asking for an explanation.
The Baron looked up to see Sir Rodney, the Battlemaster of his fief, standing at the door.
"Something very disturbing; Halt's apprentice, Gilan."
Rodney was astounded. "You mean Gilan as in Gilan, pupil of McNeill"
Slowly, the Baron nodded, "That's the one."
"How the devil did he become Halt's apprentice?"
"Well," the Baron replied, "I'm not exactly sure, but…" and so he explained all he knew.
FLASHBACK
A knocking rang on the door to his office, and he didn't even have to look up to know it was Halt. No one else could manage to move to his door so silently.
"Come in," called the Baron. And so, Halt and a young boy stepped into the room. "Who is that?" he asked the Ranger.
"Gilan; I've come to ask if I could take him as my apprentice. He tried to follow me to the cabin." And here, Halt explains to the Baron what the hell just happened, go look back to chapter 1, I have a summary at the end...kind of. "And so I brought him here."
The Baron stared dumbly at him. Obviously, the madness of the entire story had left him temporarily speechless. He opened and closed his mouth repeatedly, unsure of what to say. Finally, he sputtered, "O-okay, I'll smooth out the kinks and complete any official stuff."
Evidently, the Baron is currently incapable of forming proper sentences, reflected Halt.
He used the word 'stuff!' Hey wait a minute…is that even a word? thought Gilan.
END FLASHBACK
"And that's how it happened. So now, Gilan is Halt's apprentice,"
Rodney sighed; what he had originally come for hadn't worked out. He'd try again later; but for now, he'd leave Arald behind.
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Beyblade: (sighs) I'm getting tired of this story already.
13: Then why'd you post another chapter?
Beyblade: Because A: it's RA, it's awesome, I can't abandon it; B: It's insanely short anyway & C: 2 people inspired me
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Thanks to:
John Flanagan
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Whoever else reviewed
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To: Mr."logically psycho" & others fond of nonsensical flaming
The parts in italics are what was said in the review, and the normal text is my reply.
lots of problems with this, here they are: thank you for notifying me, I'll try fixing them, NOT (unless someone else requests)
Too short well obviously, Beyblade told you that
WTF is with the random letters? it's evidently my linebreaker
Too short your fault you read it, should have checked the word count before reading
Useless waste of battery power reading it then DON'T
Too short WHY DON'T YOU READ WHAT I JUST DAMNED WROTE FOR THE OTHER TWO
No storyline or, well, anything at all! there's something called FILLER CHAPTERS & HAD you LOOKED, you would have seen what exactly I'm getting at
Too short DIDN'T I JUST DAMNED TELL YOU THREE OTHER TIMES!
Normally I give a blessing here…but you dont deserve it. see if I care
BEGONE DESECRATOR! well guess what, you can't be a desecrator unless you BELIEVE something is holy
(Desecrator means: one who insults or damages something holy)
Let this be a lesson to all those who are fond of flaming. This person flamed my other story, Two Queens & Two Kings, w/ very stupid reasons. I accept constructive criticism, just don't be stupid and flame for no good reason (don't say it when I mention it either plz). This is what I do w/ falmers when I have time. I especially thank kind or inspiring people publicly & mention those who reviewed inoffensively.
