Over the past few days I have been thinking about my story and barely came up with enough ideas for this chapter. I would enjoy any suggestions that may be given to me.
I get really lazy some time so at moment I might lose interest in my story and won't add more chapters until later. Sorry if that happens.
I read a lot of high school fanfiction, which includes Gaara and mostly Neji, but I'm still not sure if I can make my story the way I want it.
I also have a few questions I hope some one can answer. What does these words mean?
Kitsune
Dobe
Seme
Teme
Uke
Please don't laugh at my ignorance. *Sad face*
Ok on with the story.
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Gaara sighed and then started to pick up the papers to recycle them. When he returned to his locker he reached in to get his books for next period but discovered a note.
He thought it was from his tormentors but the handwriting was different from any of their style. He should know because they would occasionally give him nice messages saying "Drop dead", "You should kill your self and make every one happy", and "Leave". Some of their messages were instructions to where he had to meet with them.
The note he had in his hands gave off a warm feeling. He didn't feel threaten at all by it. His thoughts were startled by late bell and dashed to Art. He decided he was going to read the note after school at his favorite place.
It was the end of the school day. Other than the locker incident, everything went well. It lasted longer, though, most likely because his burning curiosity to read his message.
He lived near a wooded area, not really a forest. There he would run to this huge hollow willow tree that seemed to be in the middle of his-alternate-world. That is what he called the not-so forest. He always felt like he belonged there more than anywhere else and the willow was his true home.
Years ago when he first claimed his new home he added a few things to make it more comfy. It wasn't much but he had a picture of his late uncle and a patched up small bean bag he found in the trash.
He made himself comfortable on his black beanbag furniture and contemplated what the note was about. He slowly opened it. His face became surprised as he read it.
Gaara,
I have always liked you and admired the way you keep coming to school even though you are bullied. I can hardly hold my happiness whenever I see you in school. I have finally gotten up the courage to write this letter so I could express my feelings to you. I don't want to reveal myself yet. I'm sorry but I am too afraid. I will be writing more letters. I wish one day we can be together and that I can finally see you smile.
Love
Someone from Afar
Gaara's brain stopped working. This was the first kindness that was shown to him since his uncle Yashamaru.
"This must be a cruel prank" he thought angrily "but what if it isn't"
He was lost in thought for hours or at least it felt like it. He shook his head trying to make himself believe it was a joke.
"How could someone like me?"
He looked at his watch and started to walk back to the dimmed yellow colored, four-bedroom house he called home. He had plenty of time so he walked slower than usual. He got home and found that no one was there. On the fridge was a list of things he must complete before doing his homework.
GET DONE
Clean the bathroom
Clean the attic
Take care of the laundry
Clean the garage
Do the dishes
Vacuum the carpets
Dust
Shine the trophies (given to Keen when he was in school. And some that were awarded to his two favorite children).
Make dinner
Pretty much the few things he didn't have to do was clean his father's, sister's and brother's rooms. Keen believed in privacy and made it a point that Temari and Kankuro should be able to keep their rooms in order, which they did.
He finished the list almost with ease because he was so acquainted with doing chores most of his life. Gaara's homework wasn't hard to do so he finished it about a half hour after he started.
Earlier that morning Gaara was told by his father that he was taking Temari and Kankuro out for the day and that he had to finish his chores before they got back. It wasn't unusual because he did that at least once every month. The trip included a three hour ride to this rich city called something, going to the mall, watching a movie or practically doing what ever Gaara's siblings wanted to do. Gaara really didn't care to know the name because he was never able to go.
Gaara had some money he had been saving and decided it was ok if he left for a minute to go across the street to bye something to drink. He may usually not be hungry but he was thirsty a huge amount of the time.
Gaara got to the door of the store and froze. Standing in line was the three people he never wanted to see again. Just as he was trying to leave he spotted five more boys walking his way.
"Just my luck." Gaara sighed.
"Well, well, well, haven't seen you in a long time Gaara" spoke Kiba.
" You seen me this morning, remember or are you too stupid to remember anything" replied Gaara in a monotone voice.
Gaara was then punched in the stomach.
"You shouldn't be talking. You just insulted a member of our gang." Sneered Naruto.
Gaara crumbled to the grown from the contact. He was still on his knees when he heard the doors of the entrance open.
"Hey, Neji, Sasuke, Itachi. Nice posters" said Shikamaru
"Thanks, it only took a minute or two of out time," replied Sasuke. Sasuke looked down at the kneeling boy.
"Look who we got here, its Panda" observed Sasuke.
"Yeah we seen him at the door but he didn't go in. He probably seen you guys and wanted to run away," answered Shino.
"We were just about to take him to the park. Do you want to come?" asked Sai
Gaara could feel eight pairs of eyes burning into his skin. He didn't want to be there so as quick as he could he ran to his house. As he was making his way home he heard that other people were following him. Not daring to look who was coming, knowing he would be slowed, he opened the door, shutting it and then locking it. He was out of breath and slid down the door in a kneeling position.
BANG, BANG, BANG
"Open up Gaara. We won't bite," asked Kiba
"Leave me the fuck alone," Gaara countered
"But we thought you would love to have a bunch of guys over" sneered Sai.
"Shut up," yelled Gaara.
As Kiba and Sai stalled Gaara the others were searching for a way in. Gaara forgot all about the back entrance and race to it to find it was already open. No one was in the room though. He shut and locked the door hoping that was how he left it.
"Why are Kiba and Sai so quiet," thought Gaara "Hopefully they all left"
Apparently Gaara spoke his thoughts out loud because he was answered.
"No, we are all still here," replied Itachi.
Gaara's heart pounded against his ribcage as he stared at the gang of boys.
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I wanted to stop here to raise some suspense.
I'm sorry I did not make this chapter too long because when I'm reading a story, that I think might be interesting, that it should be at least a little longer.
so far only one person commented which is a little discouraging but I won't let that stop me.
I would like to thank you.
DarkAngelJudas
