Hi there, welcome to chapter 2: Some Things In Common
I know not a whole lot of people down reviewed, but I really want to put up/wrote chappie 2. I really hope more people read it. I want to know if people like it.
Special thanks to tomboygirl: U ROCK MAN!!! (well, girl)
Here we go again!
(Disclaimer: I really don't feel like typing this but most of the characters don't belong to me. Only Emily, Oliver, Minnie, the extras (crowds of people, store owners etc.), and the plot line are mine. Everything else belongs to James Patterson, and Stephanie Meyer.)
Now, here we go again!
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Chapter 2: Some Things In Common
Fang sat on the couch lost in his thoughts. He continued to replay the last time he saw Max in his mind. The last time she touched him, the last words she told him, the last words he told her.
/Flashback/
"Why won't you just listen to me?!" Max screamed. She and Fang were standing in the front yard of their "new/old house". They called it new/old" because it was new to them, but it was an old house. It stood in the middle of a large forest outside some cliffs. This is where they all decided to settle down. "You lied to me! You said it was nothing! I don't think I can trust you!" Fang yelled back. "You'd told Iggy your huge secret, why not me?!" "I was going to tell you! I was waiting for the right time. I wasn't sure you'd understand." Max tried to explain. The rest of the Flock sat peering through the windows. It was 3 in the morning, and Fang and Max had woken them up.
"If you'd just listen-"Max tried. "No! Just leave okay! If you think I won't be able to understand whatever is going on with you, you should just go!" Fang ordered, turning his back to her. "But Fang…I love you." Max whimpered, as a tear run down her cheek. He turned to face her slightly. "How do I know that's not a lie, too?" Max couldn't take it anymore. She turned and took off into the woods. That was the last time any of them saw her.
(A, N: Sorry if Max seems OOC)
/End Flashback/
Fang was furious. His emotions were out of whack that night. He never would have yelled at her; he would have listened to her. He wouldn't have told her to leave; he never would have let her go. Nudge's abilities had only just improved, and she couldn't yet control them. That night, Nudge had been accidentally messing with Fang's feelings. Max hadn't known. Later that morning, Iggy decided to tell everyone…
Max was pregnant. (A, N: I was going to end it here, but I hate cliff-hangers)
Nudge stood up and faced Edward. "Hello, I'm Nudge. That's Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, and Fang. We've lost our Max." After that she told them their whole story.
All the Cullens were silent. Emily and Oliver had left the room, and retreated down stairs. Alice finally cleared her throat. "Hi, I'm Alice. We are the Cullens. We have lost our Bella." Then she told them theirs. Everyone was quiet, until Gazzy said "Looks like we've got some things in common. It's nice to meet you. Max was our leader. What was Bella to you?" Jasper said, devilishly "Bella was our human."
"Alright everyone, we're ready down stairs. Come on down!" Emily announced. One by one, they all filed down stairs, unaware of what they were going to see momentarily.
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There it is. Please review. Please, please, please, please, please. I really want to know what you think. Even if you think it is dumb, tell me that. I need reinforcement. But like I said, please be nice. I'm not good with insults.
