Okay, first of all I'm gonna tell all you people why the first chap went so fast, as was pointed out to me. You see, I'm staying at my dad's house, and he wanted the computer back so I had to quickly put in the important details and upload it in the space of 10 minutes, all the while my dad shouting up the stairs "JASMINE! I NEED THE DAMN LAPTOP! JASMINE! I KNOW YOU CAN HERE ME!" and so on and so forth. I plan to redo everything later on, when I'm not at my dad's.
So, I don't know what to do, tell me if you want me to keep writing this way, or wait 'til Tuesday when my mam comes back from Glastonbury. I count on your opinions!
Tell me anything you want included too, and I'll do my best.
Thank you to everyone for your comments and criticism! It's much appreciated!
