A/N: I was reading the fanfic last night (after so long, I've finally start reading again!), there's a fanfic which is created and I noticed we had about the same idea!
That fanfic is titled as [Temptation
A great fanfic, I would say. So people, readers, don't come to my reviews and saying like I copied or anything. The plot is somehow the same but I wont reveal here. Just continue reading and you'll know.
For your information, this story would mostly look at Cagalli's Point of view. Not to confuse you or anything…)
And the prologue, seriously…who said that? XD
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for some replies:
Shiloah18 – thanks for supporting all the stories I wrote for Gundam Seed. )
I love Hershey – thanks for liking the story!
AsuCagafan – Don't worry…to me, it actually sounded more like poem… my teachers had been commenting why did I write my prologue like a poem?
AsuCaga01 – Yup! Here's chapter 1 for you! )
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Disclaimer: The characters in this story DOES NOT belong to me…though how I wished they were…sigh…
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Chapter 1: siblings?
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It sucks when I felt out of love…though this wasn't the first time…but the feeling just sucks…
Guess I would be teased again when the news reaches my brother…
Why did this have to happen?
Guess it was because of my selfishness or whatsoever again…
How did some people found their true love?
I want my prince charming to appear as well…
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"Sorry, Cagalli. I guess we aren't just meant…" he said it…
"I understand," Cagalli forced a smile on her.
"We could still be friends?" he asked me…he rasied his hand, gesturing a hand shake…
how to become friends…how I wish…this relationship would have last…I thought he was the one…and I put my heart into this love…but why?
I placed my hand and forced another smile out. "Sure,"
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"I'm home!" my brother announced as he entered the house. It was a raining night…
Being a younger sister makes no sense…I have to come back before he does…or else he'll start his nagging again…
"Cagalli," he called. "Are you prepared?"
"Prepared? Prepared for what?" I replied him, totally having no idea what he was talking about.
"We're supposed to head to Lacus's place for a meal. Did you forget?" he questioned me as I headed down the stairs to where he was, the kitchen.
"Lacus?" I looked at him with even more confused look. "Why are we going there?"
"My dearest sister, Cagalli," he said in the usual speech tone he gives when presenting his presentations in school. "We're going there because our parents are out for a business dinner. And Lacus had gladly invited us to her place for a meal to spare me from your dangerous food."
I glared at him. This brother of mine! He's always on this topic. Just because my food caused him to enter the hospital once, doesn't mean it would happen again! After that lesson, I took classes up to improve my culinary! Why cant he understand!?
I pouted at him.
"Now, now. Quickly go prepare yourself so we could head to her place as soon as possible before this rain get worse." He said once again in a gentle tone. He is certainly a man who knows when to use his charm.
Before I headed up back to my room, I took a peek at him. The rain had shown his body…his clothes were hugging him tightly, showing all this well-toned muscles. The water on him…had made him look so sexy…
Noticing what I had thought, I quickly shook my head. He's my brother for god's sake! Why am I thinking him in this way?!
He seemed to have noticed my reaction…he smirked and walked close to me…
He whispered in my ears…
"Like what you're seeing?"
I immediately felt my face going warm. OMG! No! No! He's my brother! He's just teasing me!
"What the hell are you talking, Athrun!"
I turned to look at him with my blushing face. He smirked at me and was about to touch my face…I quickly turned myself and ran back to my room.
"This is so wrong…" I whispered as I leaned my back to the door of my room.
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"Athrun…you had endured for the last 20 years…don't show it…don't show it…" the man now stood in the kitchen looked down at the ground, trying to suppress his emotion.
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"Thanks for the dinner, Lacus!" Cagalli said with a satisified smile.
"You're welcome, Cagalli."
Now the two siblings are sitting in the dinning room of Clyne house. Lacus Clyne, is Cagalli and Athrun childhood friend. The three had been together playing since forever. Although there was a period where Lacus and Athrun started to act a little weird in front of Cagalli…
However, Cagalli thinking that it might be something that they don't want her to know…didn't question them…
"Thanks for inviting us, Lacus…" Athrun said in a relief tone. "You had just saved me…"
Cagalli immediately glared at him. She knew what he meant. Once again he's saying her cooking is really that bad!
Lacus continued sitting at her seat looking at the siblings quarrelling. The two just had to quarrel though Lacus knew better…
"Athrun!" Cagalli shouted as she stood up angrily from her seat. "Must you always be going against me?" she pointed angrily at him
"Why…I'm just stating the fact" Athrun said indifferently looking at his sister. "I almost since our late grandfather when I last ate your cooking. No wonder none of your relationship lasted,"
"You!" Cagalli was fumed. "You're really irritating! Sorry Lacus. I'm leaving first!"
"I understand, Cagalli." Lacus replied as Cagalli stomped towards the door. This was nothing unusual to Lacus. She had seen worse than this. Sighing at the how Cagalli left, she looked at Athrun who was staring at the door.
"Athrun," Lacus said as she stood up from her seat. "Why do you have to behave this way? Stop bullying Cagalli already…you should have heard of what happened to her today…"
Athrun nodded his head. "Lacus…you knew better than me…" Athrun said sadly and looked right into her eyes. "I'm going to leave her and the family soon…I can't control it anymore…"
Lacus couldn't do or say anything. All she could do was pray that Athrun would be able to go through everything otherwise…Cagalli would suffer in the future…
Please…let everything remain as what it is now…
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"JUST BECAUSE HE'S A YEAR OLDER THAN ME DOESN'T MEAN HE COULD TEASE ME THIS WAY!" I screamed as soon as she was back in her room. I need something to release this anger…but what?
I looked around my room…. and stopped my eyes at this certain thing.
This certain thing…is the huge teddyr that Athrun had gotten for me when I just turned 19. This might be the right thing to get rid of this anger.
I have my own pride as well! Why must he look at me as if I'm threatening his life!
Why in the world would I want to kill my own brother?
"Put that teddy down…" an order came from my back.
I turned my head and looked at him.
"Spare that teddy, Cagalli…"
I glared even harder on him.
"Cagalli…"
I was about to rip the teddy apart until he took the teddy easily out of my hands. When did he become this strong?
I remembered he couldn't even win me when we were in high school.
"Spare the poor teddy, Cagalli…it's just a stuff toy…after all…"
I didn't know what came over me…tears were falling from my eyes…
"Cagalli…?"
I didn't respond him…all I want to know now is to stop my tears.
Using my hands, I tried wiping my tears away continuously. Seems like everything that had happened recently had taken quite a toll on me?
I continued wiping my tears off…but the tears wouldn't stop…
A hand held onto mine, pulling mine away from my face. I looked at him…how I wished…he were the prince charming I ever dreamt of to pull this strong mask I made in front of everyone…
But no…he can't be…because he's my brother…
He couldn't be the knight to save me…I stared at him…what was he doing?
Wait a minute! His face! Why is it getting so near to me? He was looking right into my eyes…
Wait a minute! What is he trying to do to me?
Very soon, his face was just an inch away from mine. I stopped breathing…and yes! I practically stopped breathing!
This man isn't the brother I know. Suddenly he seemed like a stranger…who is he?
I continued staring into his eyes…
"Cagalli…" he whispered my name…it doesn't sound the usual Cagalli he called…what was going on? My heart pounded fast…what was going to happen?
[PONK!
Ouch! My head!
"YAH!" I shouted as I rubbed my forehead where he used his head to hit. "What are you doing?"
"BAKA!" he said as he looked at me. "Stop being a crybaby. It doesn't suit you." And with that, he threw the teddy back to me and left my room.
What is wrong with this man?
I continued rubbing the part where he hit hard on. It really hurts!
But instead of feeling angry and sad…the feeling was gone…
He did it on purpose?
I stared at the teddy he just threw back to me…
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Athrun…you almost kissed her! god! What were you thinking!?
I hit my head to the wall a few times. She's your sister! You said it! You had endured for the last 20 years! Endure it a little longer! Just endure it a little longer…
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A/N: That's all for chapter 1
Ratings might change in the later chapter...might be adding lemon...
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will be updating this story again hopefully by next week..c you by then!
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