Rewritten Chapter 2, enjoy!
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP...
An alarm went off early in the morning, and a teenager refused to get up.
BEEP BEEEP BEEEEEEEEP
The alarmed sounded like her mother when she was late for school, whenever she went to school anyway. All of a sudden, a smack noise was heard, and the annoying alarm clock was on the floor, backwards, still beeping, but louder. The hit that made it flip had turned it up so that the speaker was right there, facing up, carrying the noise to the girl's ear.
Kagome mumbled something incohearent, and opened her eyes hesitantly. She sat up slowly, and rubbed her eyes. Why the hell am I getting up so freaking early for!? She moved her comforters over so they fell over the side of her bed. She moved her feet to the edge of her bed, and stood up, squishing something hard that hurt her feet. She jumped backwards, and sat on the bed again, holding her foot, howling in pain. She glanced down to where she was standing a second before, and saw a mashed up alarm clock that she actually liked. Except when it was waking her up. Then she hated it like she hated Kouga calling her his 'woman'.
"Kagome, are you okay? Why were you yelling?" asked her mother with a groggy voice. It sounded like it came down the hall, so Kagome figured her mom was still in bed. It was...What time was it? She broke her clock, how is she supposed to know?
"Yes mom, I'm fine.." She called back, groaning.
Ahh, she's going to kill me! This is the third alarm clock for the past two months! She thought to herself.
"Well, I should get up and go take a hot, long shower. But first the time." She said mischeviously.
Kagome left her room quietly, and ran the hall, not making a sound, silent like a mouse. She opened the door to her brother Souta's room, and cursed when the door creaked. She looked at Souta quickly, and sighed when he wasn't awake: He had only stirred, and grabbed onto his teddy bear tighter.
HA! Teddy bear?! She looked closer at the bear, and realized it was the one she got him a few years back. Ah, well that's sweet.
She snuck up to him, and sneered down at him. He was going to pay for those times he messed her up.
Flashback
"Hi Eri, hi Ayumi!" She said. Kagome had just came out of the well house to see her two friends there. Luckily, they didn't see where she came from.
"Hey Kagome!" They said cooly. They walked up to her and smiled. They pulled her into a corner, and started to chatter. Kagome sighed, gossip was too overated sometimes. They started to talk about the new hot guy at school, how Kagome should be going out with Hojo, how the oden at the cafeteria tasted nasty, but the one down the block was delicious. They were about to tell her to go out with Hojo on Saturday, when Kagome's mom stuck her head out of the door.
"Kagome, sorry to bother you, but come here for a second, I need some help!" Thank goodness for mom, and her needs, whatever they may be.
"Uh, I'll be right back guys" She said quicky, and ran to the shrine. She was lucky to get out of that.
While she walked in, she noticed Souta walking out, heading for where her friends were waiting. 'Well, it's not like something bad will happen, he can't do much, he's small!'
She went inside, and ignored the gasping coming from her friends through the window. Maybe someone cute walked by, and they were talking loudly.
Kagome finished washing the dishes her mom made her do, and ran back to her friends. Coincedentially, she ran into Souta.
"Hey brother,
where were you just now?" She asked suspicously. He smiled at
her, and replied, "I left my toy out, and went to bring it back
in" When he saw here raising her eyebrows at the fact he had no
toy in his arms, he added quickly, "It wasn't there, I guess
it's in the shed." With that, he took off, and Kagome shook her
head. Little people these days! "Hey guys, I'm back"
She said reluctantly.
The girls looked taken back when she said that. "Oh princess Kagome, you dare call us like we're your friends? I am most surprised, especially because you go to a pamper house, and ask them to call you queen!" Ayumi said.
Kagome gasped. What the hell was that about?
"I...I...I have no idea what your talking about! Where did you hear that!"
Eri then said "Your brother Souta. Gosh, Kagome, if you needed more self esteem, you could've told us! You're making your mom lose 10,000 yen a month just for you!"
Kagome's eyes widened. That little twerp was dead.
"I have never gone to a 'pamper house'. Whatever my brother told you was a lie. Go ask my mom, why don't you, then please go. I have buisness to take care of." She said coldly. Kagome sounded a lot like Sesshomaru there, and the voice gave her friends a chill. They walked away, to the shrine to ask her mother, and at that moment, not caring who heard her, Kagome screamed at the top of her lungs, "SOUTA!!!!!!!!"
Her little brother had ran all the way to the next town, and hid at a police station. He told them a pshyco was chasing him. When Kagome ran in there, he had yelled, "There she is, that's her.AHHH!"
They took her away, and locked her up for a night. That day, Souta was unfortunately known as the Ultimate Pranker, of their city.
She shuddered at the reminder of the nasty jail, and the perverts that yowled at when she was there.
"Kagome, hurry up, it's 5:45, and we don't know how long it'll take you to get there!" Her mom called, now awake.
So that was the time. Uh oh, she was going to be late if she didn't hurry. She walked away from his bed, muttering "Next time, next time" She walked to her room, and got her towel..
I wonder how Inuyasha and the others are doing. Wait! NO! Bad Kagome, don't think about him!
She decided to put on some music to sing along to in her shower. So she put on Fergie's London Bridge. She stepped into the warm running water just as the song began.
When I come to the club, step aside.
Part the seas, don't be havin' me in the line.
V.I.P, cause you know I gotta shine.
I'm Fergie Ferg, and me love you long time.
All my girls get down on the floor, back to back,
drop it real low
I'm such a lady but I'm dancing like a ho,
'Cause you know something something
How come everytime you come around,
My London, London Bridge wanna go down like
London, London, London
wanna go down like
London, London, London
we goin' down like...
She stopped singing to hear her mom yelling at her, "HURRY UP!" Damn, time passed so fast already? She walked out of the shower, and sighed. "That felt good, I feel so awake right now."she said. She came out of the bathroom with a big fluffy blue towel. She looked at the clock, and it read 5:47.
"Only? Then why is mom rushing me?" She wondered out loud. She put on a loose white shirt that said 'C.I.A, Cutie In Action with black sweats, and some black and white Jordans. She put on two Nike Wristbands and tied her hair up. Then she put on earrings that were dangly white diamonds, that she got for her last birthday. At 17 years old, you had to get something better than a watergun or make up. Speaking of make up, she didn't put any on because if she had got sweaty, it would run. So Kagome went downstairs, seeing her grandfather sweep the shrine. Again.
"MORNING GRANDPA!" She yelled really loud. She had a lot of energy. Why? She really likes showers...
"AHHHH!" her grandpa yelled. "AHHH! DEMON! BE GONE!" He threw sutras at her that just came out of nowhere. Literally, he just started throwing them, and Kagome didn't see from where.
She started laughing at her grandpa's face. "Ahh, No gramps, it's me Kagome!" She kept laughing as her grandpa got another look at her, this time a little closer.
He sighed, and said "Oh dear, why'd you yell for? I thought it was a demon from that well of yours!" She got a little sad at the well part, she hadn't thought about it in a little bit. No, she wouldn't let Inuyasha get her down, not now.
She brought a smile to her face, and laughed again. "I don't know gramps, I'm just so hyper! Well, I'm hungry, so bye!!" She walked away.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk. Children these days, so hyper, why back in my day..." he droned on to himself, and continued sweeping. In the kitchen, Kagome made eggs with bannana waffles, and orange juice. It was 6:00 when she stated eating. 10 minutes later, she decided to leave because she didn't want to be late. Plus, she had finished breakfast, and was bored. She left the house, and took the bus to this Kaguya lady's house.
In the Feudal Era
Inuyasha was just waking up. He looked around at everyone sleeping on the ground, and gasped when he counted only Sango, Shippo, Miroku, and Shippo.
"GUYS!! WHERE THE HELL IS KAGOME!" He yelled out loud. Very, very loud. The group on the ground jumped up all of a sudden, and were standing half sleeping, with their weapons up.
"Whuzzhappinin??" Asked Miroku drooling slightly at the mouth. Then, they all fell back down, and snored.
Inuyasha had a look that said 'What the hell is wrong with these people?'
"I SAID, WHERE'S KAGOME! GET UP!! GET UP, GET UP, GET UP!!" He yelled
This time they actually woke up, and Shippo said "Inuyasha! You idiot, you don't even remember? You are so stupid!" He said disbelievingly.(is that a word??)
"Yesterday, you had a huge fight with Kagome, so she left. Remember now, dummyhead?" He asked, jumping on Inuyasha's shoulder, and hitting his head.
Inuyasha's face looked less confused now, and his mouth was an 'o'.
"Oh, yeah! Oh well, the wench should be coming back today, like I said" That was the wrong thing to say.
"INUYASHA!" Sango yelled. "DON'T CALL KAGOME A WENCH. I AM STILL ANGRY! I WILL STILL KILL YOU IF YOU SAY ANOTHER MEAN THING ABOUT HER!" She yelled.
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. What a threat. Kagome's a wench, she can't do anything, she's a weakling. What are you going to do, Sango? Nothing. Even you are weak as ever. Like a little newborn pup."
That was the worst possible thing to say to a very pissed off Sango.
"I will do THIS!" She threw Hirakotsu at him. He ducked and smirked. "Good job, you missed." BONK
"I never miss." Hirakotsu had came back and hit him on the head. Hard. He was unconsious, and if Miroku didn't hold Sango back, she might've went over to his prone form, and stomped on him or something.
Shippo got out a marker that Kagome had gotten him, and drew a silly face on Inuyasha. The hanyou now had glasses, a unibrow, circular teeth with an overbite, and a french man's mustasche. "Wow, Shippo, your artwork is getting better." Sango, and Miroku started laughing.
"Yes, thank you! Thank you, thank you. Well, let's go inside, I'm hungry." said Shippo. "Okay, let's go." agreed Sango. So they sat around the campfire, and ate some breakfast.
At Kaguya's Mansion
At Kaguya's mansion, Kagome stepped out of the bus to come face to face with with a huge mansion. It had a beautiful lawn, with a fountain. A lot of statues, and a beautiful garden.
"No way! This can't be right, it's an old lady, an old miko. But it is the right address." So Kagome walked up the path way, gazing at the beautiful flowers, and buzzed the doorbell. It was one of those things that you buzz, and someone answers. It had one on the gate, but the gate was open, so Kagome didn't bother. Sometimes you just had to take chances.
"Hello, Kagome dear. Come right in, I shall meet you at the front door." An old voice said. Kagome guessed it was Kaguya, so she turned the knob, and went inside. Standing in front of the door, was a beautiful lady.
"Hello Kagome, I am Kaguya. It is a pleasure to meet a young miko. Please, come in.." Kagome did so, and said "It's nice to meet you too. You have such a beautiful house! It's amazing!"
The house was amazing. There were beautiful tiled floors. There were hanging plants, beautiful artwork, and a beautiful stairway in front of her. And everything else a mansion would have.
"Well Kagome, I would like to know how strong you are, and see your martial arts so far, so my assisstand will help you. So, you will fight her. Begin, Now!"
Kagome dropped her stuff. And a person came out from the shadow that was in the back of the room.
"Oh. My. Gosh! It's..."
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