Thanks for the awesome comments, i was so excited this morning when i looked and i had two comments! i know not many compared to the ones that have hundreds upon hundreds of comments, but i'm grateful. Sorry for any typos on the last one. My dear older sister looked at it, and was pointing out to me every single grammar mistake i had, and spelling [please bear with me, i fail at grammar(not really but you know what i mean) :D]. But that only makes sense, she IS a perfectionist who makes straight A's. I also like commas, like the explanations inside the sentence separated by two commas. My chapters are short, [this one is over a hundred more than the last one though :D] and i am truly sorry about that, but a person can only describe so much...But i might put two or three chapters in one chapter, just separate them a bit, because i make sure i leave a dramatic cliff hanger at the end of each one :). I would love constructive criticism! [just please don't hit me to hard with the criticism, i am a person with feelings ;)]. I also need some names kinda strange, like the ones of the flock, if anyone has suggestions i would like to use them for future characters. Four girl names and Five guy names, unless i need more, thats the way its looking right now. Ok, after this very long authors note i will let you read my Fan fic now! Thanks :)

Yours truly,

Seadiva :D

Fang's P.O.V

I stood there, stunned for a moment, then took off into the clear blue sky after him and stumble a bit on the air, i haven't flown for a couple of days and the wind had thrown me off. He glances back with a look of amusement etched on his face from what i could see. Half of it was covered by a bulky Red cardinals Baseball cap. Most of his clothes were bulky, an oversized pink sweat shirt with a random panda on the front, probably hijacked it off some youth group person. Don't get me started on his jeans, you could hardly see them from the sweat shirt, but what you could see was shredded. I pick up my pace to try and match his.

" His" P.O.V.

At last, i had found him, but what was he doing here without the flock? they were a quarter of the reason i had come. Unfinished business. I smirk to myself and glance back, as he stumbles. WOW, i think, he has defiantly gotten clumsier. That has got to be the funniest thing i have seen in weeks, seeing fang mess up? a chance in a life time. I try my hardest to keep a straight face. But the look on HIS face tells me im not doing such a great job. I pick up speed, as the wind threatens to tear off my cap.

Fang's P.O.V.

After flying hard for two more minutes. I finally catch up. Grab his arm and drag him down into a dark looking, but empty alley. When we get down to the ground, he doesn't even put up a fight, all he does is stand in the shadows and stare at me again. He stands there for another moment, then steps forward. Just as i prepare to tackle him and does the most unexpected thing one who has fought many people would even guess at. He stepped forward and gave me a giant hug. Im too petrified to do anything but stare him down. He steps back into the only light in the alleyway and takes off the cardinals cap he had been wearing. " Hello Fang. Long time no see ehh?" as a tumble of familiar dark brown waves fall out, " Wait a second, your not a guy?". " That look on your face is priceless," She says in a musical voice, " two priceless, expressions and a reunion, all in one day. Today must be my lucky day." She flashed a genuine smile at me. I slowly put the pieces together, Hazel eyes? Laughing while being chased? Long dark brown waves? Musical voice? Genuine smile? Cardinal Cap? There is only one possible person this could be. I gulp " Celia!" I exclaim in disbelief. She nods, " but, your supposed to be dead!"

Ok, soo what did you think? i know i kind of threw a lot at you, but i couldn't make them go on some crazy chase for a whole chapter then throw it at you the next chapter. soo i hope you liked it and i will be doubling up on chapters soon. :D And i promise the other person mentioned on the "what character this story is about" things is relevant i just have to get there. ;)