This lovely Char was submitted by OtterTheMemeLord
Name: Typhoon
Nice name, not too simplistic, but not mary-sue-ish either. Represents his backstory, looks and personality well. I'll give it an 8/10, mostly because this could be confused for a sky/Seawing name. It works for his tribe however, so it's good by me.
Age: 40
It's nice to see a dragon that isn't 18 and super hot 3
Gender: Male
Fine by me :3
Tribe: CycloneWing
Ah, a Fanon tribe! It actually seems rather simple, and isn't the most powerful, wonderful tribe to exist. Pass 3
Home: Western Ocean (off the coast of Sand Kingdom)
Makes sense :3
Kingdom: Cyclone Kingdom
Looks good to me
Abilities: None.
*nods*
Love interest: Queen Cobalt, CycloneWing
I'm assuming that this is a male-ruled tribe? Points for differentiation if so!
Back-Story: He was born into the Royal CycloneWing Family, and was the oldest of three brothers. Their father died in battle, leaving the three to fight for the throne. Typhoon then killed his brothers in their sleep and took the throne for himself
Normally, this would seem like a mary sue's backstory. Because he IS royal, however, and things like this definately did historically happen in monarchies, I'll give it a pass. I do wonder why the king was in battle, however. It doesn't seem very logical that he would die there, as Kings/Queens don't usually fight, unless you count the antagonists, and they aren't soldiers in their own army, they usually come to kill one dragon away from a battle. Either way, I'll let it slide as I don't know much about the Tribe.
Features: Rubies studded under his eyes, long fangs
Pretters!
Features: Like all CycloneWings resembles a SeaWing, but has large "frills" from his head down to his lower back
Seems good, but does he follow his tribes color palette?
Flaws: Not very intelligent and make poor choices in terms of relations with the other tribes. When under pressure can cower away from a situation, very self-conscious.
Good, he has some major flaws, unlike most royal chars that I've encountered :3
All in all, he's a very good character. he gets a pass and a 8.5/10 from me 3
