Star's Keyblade4114: Yes, it can either be one of the best experiences in your life or one of the worst.
Mrenteria99: No, I didn't see anything wrong with the original either, but like I said, I felt like it could've been written better.
Or-lan-do626: No…I traded her and Jackie in for Higgs and StarFan…sorry, but I think Higgs might be as crazy.
Someone 121: Good to hear and more is coming soon.
Enjoy the next chapter.
Marco sat on his bed, typing away at his laptop when he heard shuffling coming from the hallway. He looked up for a moment before shrugging his shoulders and looked down and continued to type on the keyboard on his laptop before he heard a loud crash coming from across the hall followed by a scream. Closing his laptop, he stood up, walked out of his room and across the hall.
He opened the door to the room across from his and stepped in before turning the light on and saw Sabrina tossing and turning on her bed. He rushed over to the bed and shook her awake. Sabrina sat up panted, "What's going on? What happened?" she looked at Marco and scooted closer to the wall and narrowed her eyes, "What the hell are you doing in my room, you pervert! Were you-"
"Alright, you know what, fuck it!" Sabrina flinched and Marco growled as he shook his head and walked towards the door, "I was trying to be nice to my housemates and they accuse me of…whatever the hell you were going to accuse me of!" Sabrina frowned and Marco looked back and spotted broken glass and a puddle of water, "What the hell happened there?"
Sabrina looked over to the small mess and frowned, "I had a drink before going to bed…I guess I didn't finish it and I kicked it off the bed during my little episode."
Marco sighed and shook his head, "I'll clean it up," Sabrina looked at him as he walked out of the room.
Marco walked back into the room with a broom, a rag and a plastic bag before he walked over to the mess against the far wall before he began cleaning it up. He looked over at Sabrina and sighed before shaking his head, "Look…I'm sorry I yelled at you, but we've only been living together for a few hours and you, Brittney, Ashley and Higgs make me feel like I'm a criminal. What did I do exactly? Why are you treating me like I committed a capital crime?"
"What…what are you talking about, Marco?"
"Don't play the dumb card, Sabrina, you know what I'm talking about," Sabrina frowned as Marco continued to clean up the broken glass, "what did I do to any of you?"
"You…you didn't do anything," Marco stopped and looked back in confusion, "We're just a little uncomfortable with you living with us. We don't know if you're going to act…well…like a frat bastard and rape us when you get the chance," Marco groaned and rolled his eyes, "Or if we can really trust you,"
"Right, because that's what I want to do and I won't care what happens to any of you afterwards," Sabrina frowned and Marco sighed before he finished cleaning up, "Anyway…the mess is cleaned up…I'm going back to my-"
"What are you doing in here, Diaz?" they looked back and saw the others walking into the room, "Well?"
Marco sighed and shook his head, "If you must know, Brittney, Sabrina was having an anxiety attack in her sleep and since my room is right across from hers, I decided to see if she was all right," he walked over to them and pushed past them before walking to his room.
Star, Brittney, Ashley and Higgs looked at Sabrina and Ashley frowned, "Did he touch you?"
"N…no…he's upset that we've been treating him like a criminal all day and when I told him why…I think he's angry with that…and he did seem like a nice guy. He was genuinely concerned when I was having my anxiety attack,"
"I told you he was a good guy," Star sighed and shook her head, "And now he probably hates us for all of this."
Higgs groaned and crossed her arms, "Okay, so now we've made our housemate feel unwelcomed and he didn't do anything to us to deserve that…how do we fix it?"
"You could try…I don't know…being a little nicer," they looked back and saw Marco leaning against the doorframe, his arms crossed and his eyes narrowed, "I know you five are uncomfortable with me living with you, but I wouldn't do something like that to anyone, and no, I'm not just saying that."
The five young women frowned and looked away in shame, "We're going to be living together for the next four years…we might as well try to get used to it," Marco sighed and turned and began walking back to his room again, "I'm going to bed. I suggest you five do the same. We have classes in the morning," they looked up as Marco walked out of the room and they flinched when they heard the door across the hall slam shut.
They looked at each other and Star slightly frowned, "Okay…I admit…I know I said he seems like a good guy and I feel guilty when I said that…maybe we can try to get to know each other a bit better tomorrow after classes," Star walked out of the room and down the hall to her room.
Ashley frowned and shook her head, "She has a point…goodnight," she walked out of the room and Higgs followed behind her without saying a word.
Brittney looked at the auburn woman and shook her head before silently walked out of the room and down the hall to her room. Sabrina frowned and shook her head before lying down and going back to sleep.
Here is the second chapter. As always enjoy everyone and please let me know what you all think.
