Gentle Soul Chapter 1
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Recap
"This ends right now," I said as me and Sasu were preparing our final attack.
Gentle Soul.
Now
Hinata's POV
As we started to do Soul Resonance to preform Gentle Soul, I had to activate my Byakugan so I could see through the bandages over my eyes.
We had tried to do Gentle Soul without my Byakugan and I had almost killed my sensei during our training.
When Sasu and I maxed out our Soul Resonance, I started to spin Sasu with both hands in front of me.
Then when he started spinning faster and faster, to the untrained eye you couldn't see it. You could only see the black and blue of Sasu's Scythe form.
Right when I got ready to launch the attack I released one hand from Sasu and I brought him to my side, still spinning him as fast as I could.
When I was about to throw him under hand, I saw 8 kids standing on a building watching us.
I let out a gasp as I released Sasu and missed the kishin by a long shot, Sasu going to the left.
"Damn it! Why the h-e-double toothpicks are you here!?" I screamed at the kids turning around to glare at them, well aware that the kishin was laughing its head off.
They all looked surprised that I knew they were there.
"Who are you?"
The one that had spoken was a boy with black short hair that had three white stripes on one side.
As he had said this the kishin had tried to hit me in the back with its claws. When I jumped out of the way, I landed on the side of a building and shot off and onto the building where the kids were.
When I landed I said, "I don't think that's any of your concern."
Most of them looked offended while 3 of them looked upset.
Before anyone could speak I smirked and had started to spin around really fast and I shot of the building with an outstretched hand.
As I was right above the kishin, I grabbed Sasu as he came back and we spun one last time together.
We shouted, "Gentle Soul!"
Right then Sasu's blades elongated and cut the kishin in half.
Then we landed, we walked up to the kishin's soul.
After Sasu ate it, swallowing it whole, the people jumped off the building and landed in front of us.
Sasu hit me on the head with his fist saying that I shouldn't swear.
"Now will you tell us who you are?"
This time a girl with blonde hair and green eyes had spoken.
This time I answered them, "I'm…"
Okay so I'm really inspired to write this story but, honestly do you think there should be a love triangle? I'm considering it but I really want to know what the readers want. Oh and tell me if there were any grammar or spelling errors.
