CH2: "Chpater oen prouloge"

Hold on tight, because through the next few chapters this story takes a turn into crazy-land (hint: and it never really turns back onto normal street)

Remember: me - bold&italics, xdarkrosesx - bold


Chapter one prologue

The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she-cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. (Too. Many. Simple. Sentences.)

"There is a prophecy!" she said. "Out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."

"It's about Starkit!" (wow, couldn't tell!) A white tom(whose identity is not important, it appears) said. "She's going to save the forest."

He looked at a gold tom by Bluestar. (Lionblaze? Lionheart? Half a dozen other golden toms in StarClan?)

"She has powers nobody dreamed of." said the gold tom. "Should we tell Jayfeather?" he asked.

"Yes" said Bluestar, "he needs to know."

She walked away from the pool to tell Jayfeather about the prophecy.

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I'm going to upload another chapter too, to get the ball rolling with this story. This chapter is so short!

Please let me know how I'm doing! And remember, flame all you want, but this is not my story...repeat NOT MY WRITING! :)

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