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"No way. I know you're lying Zig." Five out of the six D-tent boys were crowded around an old, beat up pool table in the wreck room. Two of them had astounded looks on their faces.

"No man, Zigzag is tellin' the truth. Mom brought showed her to us while you were showering, or sumthin." Magnet said.

"Seriously X?" asked a boy with messy brown hair covered by a hat.

"He's not lying Squid. X-ray told him.

"Well then lets go see her! Squid exclaimed, and practically started running towards the door. The rest of D-tent followed. When the got to D-tent, they walked nervously towards the back of the tent. Danni was just lying on the cot, facing the wall.

"Hey chica. Hey! Are you asleep?? Magnet asked, then turned to X-ray. "Hey X, I think she's asleep."

"Naw Magnet, shes not asleep, she just don't like you." X-ray told him "Danni, I know you're awake. Come'on, get up."

"HEY DANNI!" Zigzag yelled in her year, and shook her lightly. Danni sat up, and pulled off her hood, revealing her headphones.

"Dude, how did you get a Discman into camp!?! X-ray exclaimed. Danni shrugged.

"I dunno, Mr. Sir didn't check my bag."

"What else did you sneak in?" Magnet asked.

Danni smiled. "That's for me to know, and for you to find out."

"Uhhh, oh ya, Danni, meet Squid and Armpit." X-ray pointed to a large African-American, who was clearly in shock, along with Squid.

"Ummm, hi......" Danni said, raising her eyebrow. "I'm Danni."

Squid blinked twice and stuck out his hand. "Squid" Armpit was still staring at her.

"So chica, what did you do?" Magnet said, sitting down on the bed across from Danni's.

"What do you mean?" Danni replied, putting away her Discman.

"You know, like, what did you do to get here? What criminal offence did you commit?" Zigzag put in.

"Oh," Danni replied, and gave a small smile. "Attempted murder."

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"Dannielle Goldstiene, please rise. Danielle, you are charged with the attempted murder of Maisy Denver and David Hash. How do you plead?"

Danni stood up. "Guilty." She said. The expensive lawyer her father had hired stood up as well.

"Your honor" he said. "I don't believe my client understands the charges which she is pleading guilty to. I would like to call a short recess to talk to her privately."

Danni turned to him. "But I am guilty." She told him "No point in lying."

"Danielle, sit down!" her father hissed at her from behind. "Unless you want to go to jail, for god's sake, say you're not guilty!"

"Listen!" Danni said loudly. "I am guilty! I confess! Lock me up! Do with me what you want, but I AM GUILTY!"

The judge, the lawyer, and her father all looked stunned. Danni sat down looking satisfied. The judge snapped out of his stunnedness long enough to say:

"Jurors, please go make your decision."

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Magnet laughed. "Woah chica, why'd you try to kill sumone!?!"

Danni laughed too. "I dunno, some bitch was hittin' on my boyfriend, so I beat the shit out of her. Her boyfriend tried to break it up, so I beat the shit out of him too. I was never really attempting, to, you know, murder them, I was just pissed off."

"How bad did you get them?" Squid asked.

"Well........" Danni reached into her bag, and pulled out two police photos. "Look."

Squid and X-ray sat down on either side of her to see them. The first was of a girl, about fourteen, with short brown hair. She would have been really pretty, if it wasn't for that fact that she was really beat up. Her nose was bent on a funny angle, like it was broken, and covered in dried blood. She had a black eye and a huge scrape on her forehead. The second was of a boy, about the same age, with short hair. He had two black eyes, a scratch on his cheek, and a bloody nose. The pictures were only from the shoulders up, but Danni guaranteed them that there was much more.

"Maisy Denver" she said "a broken nose, three broken ribs, a broken wrist, a dislocated shoulder, and a twisted ankle. David Hash: a broken arm, four broken ribs, and a broken wrist."

All the boys stared at her for a second, the X-ray broke the silence. "Woah, you're some very brutal chick."

"Ya, but you wanna hear something funny? Maisy actually broke her ankle trying to get away from me, so I didn't actually do it, but I still got charged for it. The rest was my work though."

"So why are you in a guy's detention camp instead of a high security jail somewhere?" Armpit asked.

"Well you see, my dad didn't want me to go to jail after I was found guilty, so he paid a bunch of money to get me sent here, instead of jail."

"So he spoils you?" Zigzag asked."

"Tries to." Danni replied. "My older brother, Shane, dropped out of school, and is in jail a couple of times of times every week. After him, my dad felt it was his fault, and didn't want to screw up his next kid. When I got arrested, I think my dad realized that I'm not his perfect little angle."

"So where is your brother now?" Squid asked.

"I dunno, probably in jail again. Dad always bails him out though. Shane's not a bad kid; he just likes to have fun. He's never done anything serious, like me, just funny stuff, like robbing the candy store or vandalizing the school." Just then, they heard a bell off in the distance.

"Dinner!" Armpit stood up, and everyone followed.

"That's how they call you for dinner??" Danni asked, putting her Discman under her pillow. "They heard you...... like a bunch of cows?"

"Suck it up princess, get used to it." ((AN: I LOVE that phrase!)) X-ray told her.

Danni crossed her arms, as the other boys lead her into a large room filled with gross smells, and lots of beat up tables. They got into line, and picked up their trays. Danni was last in line. She poked Magnet, who was standing in front of her.

"Hey Magnet, do we really have to eat this stuff??" she asked, pointing to the greeny, browny beans that were getting put on their trays."

"Ya, we do. Believe me, you'll get used to it." He told her, and lead her to one of the tables. She sat down with the rest of D-tent.

"Say, uhhh, Danni. You didn't dig today, so you wouldn't mind giving up your bread to someone who did now would you?" X-ray asked, reaching for her bread.

"Uhhh, no. You can have it." Danni said looking up. But before X-ray could pick it up, she had grabbed a giant handful of the green mushy beans, and put it on one slice of the bread. On the other slice, she put a handful of brown mushy beans, and then squished both slices together until mushy stuff oozed out the sides.

"Here you go X." She told him putting the nice little 'sandwich' down on top of his green mushy stuff. "Eat up; you'll need you energy for tomorrow." Danni then pinched his cheek, like a grandmother would do, smearing mushy stuff all over them, headed for the door.

"ummmm, Danni. You need to eat something you know......" Squid started to yell at her, but she was out the door before he finished.

X-ray just sat there staring at the spot where Danni was sitting for a couple seconds, before wiping the mush off his cheek, and saying. "That's one special chick."

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