I wasn't planning on writing until I had AT LEAST 5 reviews because I didn't think it so popular so fast but considering the person who I got the idea from (CelijahHasChoclateEclares) reviewed it I decided I would for you lazy people who won't go back and read it here it is BE HAPPY!

"Yesssssss! Uh-huh, oh yeah, *victory dance* Whoooooooo.

I LOVED IT. Because this is better than mine cuz NOW I know that Eli's mom isn't dead and his dad is a shock-jock. :/

BUT... I love it, well of course I do."

Yes I made you read it but it makes me happy! Wow I just checked my story traffic I didn't think I would have this many readers Thanks for reading hey but guys please review my writing and music are my life so I want to know what you think I won't be mad or sad unless you don't review because I believe there is ALWAYS room for improvement WOW this is long wait a second I have to get my kitten out of the drawer she got stuck in Marie curiosity killed the cat well TO THE STORY


Clare's POV

I walked in to my first period advanced English class I knew I wouldn't know anyone because I was with all eighth graders, I had always been a gifted writer, I toke my seat and then Eli walked in I smiled like a ditz 'STOP LOOKING STUPID' I mentally scolded myself "Hey EliJAH!" His cousin had told me he hated his real name so he went by Eli oh this will be fun! "It's Eli" "No I like Elijah" "Eli" "Elijah" "Eli" "Elijah" "Ok Red" "My hair isn't THAT red" "stop calling me Elijah I won't call you Red…that much" he muttered the last part to himself so I just rolled my eyes "Fine" I said just then my worst nightmare walked in I mean he was in gifted last year so I'm not surprised but did he HAVE to be in this class? K.C. Guthrie I had dated one boy before and it was him it was just a stupid summer thing I dumped him when I found out he cheated on me as I turned back to Eli I heard my name "Clare?" "WHAT DO YOU WANT K.C.?" I yelled with more anger than I thought was in me "PLEASE Take me back Clare I love you!" "Really did you love me when you were making-out with Hannah? Hmmm K.C. I'm waiting for an answer!" "I-I don't know" "HA that's original 'I DON'T KNOW' YOU ARE DEAD TO ME K.C. GUTHRIE DO YOU HERE ME DEAD!" I then turned around to Eli "WOW Red I didn't know you could be so angry" he said looking at K.C. I looked too he looked in a word broken I giggled "wow you are mean remind me never get on your bad side so how did he?" Eli asked motioning towards K.C. 'He cheated on me while we date over the summer with some girl Hannah Nicholson" "Crap" "What?" "Hannah's…" he trailed off" What girlfriend? Friend? Wife?" "Really wife? She's my other cousin" "ok" "you're not mad?" "No you didn't tell her to go be skanky" "yeea" "ELIJAH TELL ME NOW!" "Well I gave her guy advice about a guy named K.C. I WOULDN'T HAVE TOLD HER IF SHE TOLD ME HE HAD A GIRLFRIEND!" "It's ok" "really?" "Yea" "ok then" the teacher started speaking today class we're assigning writing partners "Mr. Goldsworthy wiiiith Ms. Edwards 'YES' I thought "Mr. Torres and Mr. Guthrie" I looked for the poor guy who got K.C. He was wearing loose clothes a plaid shirt with baggie jeans and a grey beanie with some girl-ish features I looked at Eli what was he thinking?

Eli's POV

So Clare was my English partner GREAT "…Mr. Torres" My head snapped up I saw a guy I knew Adam Schweet I threw him a note 'Adam! Ps it's Eli' OMG ELI THANK GOD I KNOW SOMEONE HERE!' 'Yea me to although I met the girl next to me this morning here name's Clare I'll introduce u 2 after class she's really smart ad pretty and nice and she loves hearses' ' Eli likes Clare and COOL! I GET TO KNOW MORE PEOPLE' 'haha Adam you're so weird sometimes' 'But awesome at the same time' 'whatever' just then the bell rang I grabbed Clare's arm "Not so fast little Red" "UGH" "This is Adam" "nice to meet you" "Eli was gushing about you in our note" then I slapped him in the back of the head and grabbed his beanie "Hey well then here you go Clare" he handed her the note "No mine" I said snatching it away "AW Eli did you say something mean about me" "NO NO NO!" "oh no no no he said 'She's really smart and pre-" I threw Adam's stupid beanie at him "Never mind" "Pleease Eli" "NOPE" I said running to class she walked of down the hall when I got to class I saw her sitting next Adam wow we all had another class together Cool "Hey Eli" they both said "'sup guys?" then someone tapped me on the shoulder "can I talk to you not in front of them" he motioned to Clare and Adam Clare pretended he didn't exist and went on with her conversation with Adam "Sure" we walked into the hall "Switch me English partners" he said politely "I don't think so" "Ok well you better watch your back" this was nothing I hadn't heard before I walked back in and sat next to Clare and Adam.


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