Ok here is the second chapter. It is slowly coming together. Rachel was sick today so she had time (finally) to edit. She needs to be sick more often. I am again sorry for any inconvenience this could cause. Please review I have been working on the next chapter and the more reviews the fast I will get the rest edited and post it up.
Chapter 2
I started running. Following the scent. Of course, I am more controlled than sucking whoever's blood that may be, but still I found my legs moving forward and swerving through trees. I was curious why a human would be this far off the trails. The Cullen house was specifically away from any hiking trails, so we could run free without worrying about finding anyone. I followed the scent around the woods until I reached a small clearing. This part of the woods seemed to be newer than the rest. Most of the trees were no bigger than a twig, except for one huge Oak Tree at the other side. The branches of that one tree stretched out and covered the sky above. Then as I looked down. I saw a little girl lying on her side, with her back toward me, at the base of the Oak. Her delicate body lay limp, and she reminded me of Alice, how her small fragile figure curved. Then of course, Alice was much older than her. I estimated that she was just 12 years old. As I came closer, I could see big claw marks across her body, bleeding. She wore a long-sleeved shirt with a jacket, and jeans. Her feet were bare and cut up, but these cuts were more likely from plants and thorns on ground while running. I kneeled next to her, and looked at her hair. It was uniquely colored. It was mainly brunette, like me, but it had a tint of blond with small stripes of blond. Those blond stripes were almost the same color of Rosalie's hair. I finally came to a conclusion that her hair color would be called caramel; I couldn't come up with anything else. I flipped this mystery girl over to see her face. As I pushed her caramel hair off her face I gasped. Her face was curved delicately and gave her an innocent look. I felted my stone heart drop. It was like looking at my own daughter lying limp in my arms, dieing. I couldn't believe how closely her face reflected Renesmee, but at that moment I looked into her eyes. This shock probably would have given me a heart attack, if I was still human. As I turn and looked into her green eyes. Her deep forest, emerald eyes. It was like walking through the greenest forest in Forks. They had great depth. It was like looking into her innocent soul. I for once thought I have actually seen Edward's eyes. I couldn't let her die. I just couldn't stand that. I had to save her, but how. I quickly put my hand on her heart. It was still beating. Yes. I knew how to save her, but I couldn't trust myself to bite her without sucking. I only knew one person who could do this, so I picked the mystery girl up in my arms and ran. I ran too fast. If any human could see me, I would have blown our secret. However, I knew for a fact that I was moving way to fast for even the sharpest human eyes to see me. As I came to the river that was at the edge of the forest I got ready to jump, and flown through air fluidly. I escaped the trees and now had to cross the patch of wild grass up to the back of the house. I was a third of the way crossed when I saw some one running toward me. As we got closer to each other I wasn't surprised to see Alice. She probably had a vision of me finding this girl, as soon as I decided to follow the sent. "Oh no!" she said, and then gasped. I knew she was seeing the same thing I saw, her delicate body, odd but beautiful hair, Renesmee's face, and her eyes. "Help me!" I pleaded once I noticed that she looked back up at me. "What do you want me to do?" she asked. "Get Carlisle!" I said, noticing my voice was uneven. She ran faster then I ever thought possible, even for a vampire. I ran after Alice until I reached the back door. I started to shift the weight of the girl so I could open the door, but Carlisle opened the door with a shock expression on his faced. I walked in, and I felt six pair of eyes on me as I set the girl on the couch. "What happened?" Carlisle asked concerned. "I don't know, I found her in the woods. Oh please, Carlisle, save her." I said speaking fast, and taking fast shallow breaths. "Ok…" he muttered, walking closer to the girl. He stood over her looking as astonished as Alice was. "She has Edward's eyes!" he said looking up. I knew it. There was something about her eyes! I just knew it. "There is also a lot of blood, you guys might want to leave." he said looking back down at her. I looked around the room. I noticed Jasper probably already left with Emmett. The rest however were standing there, half in shock, covering their mouth and nose with their hand. Esme nodded, and waved to us to follow. I started to follow, but then Carlisle caught me by the shoulder. "Bella, if you don't mind, can you stay for a minute?" he asked. "Of course," I said. The others left, and as soon as I heard the back door shut. "Bella, do you know what happened?" he asked again. "No, I don't, but please help her. She can't die!" He obviously heard the plead in my voice. "I will try, but these marks aren't from anything normal…" Carlisle said stroking one of the larger scrapes across her arm, "This may sound weird, but I believe that these marks were caused by…" he hesitated, regretting that he haven't started telling me this. "Cause by what!?!" I nearly screamed, "What happened to her?" "…Caused by a werewolf." he said looking at me. I could feel the shock on my face. I stood there looking at him still in shock. He looked back at the girl examining. "What!!!" I finally screamed, collapsing on my knees. They couldn't support my weight anymore, "There aren't any other werewolves except for the two Quileute packs." "They might have had a newcomer who couldn't control himself," he said trying to comfort me, "It looks like it was angry with her, because she has a bite mark on her side." I couldn't speak. I sat there on the floor, barring my head. "I will change her, but you should go outside with Edward," he said kindly. I got up, and walk wearily to the back door. As I stepped out I saw Edward and the rest of his family, and ran to him. His eyes could see that I was upset. "Bella, love, what is wrong?" he sounded concerned. I couldn't speak. My throat was clogged with sadness, so instead of telling him, I stretched my shield around him. I told him through my mind what had had happened. "It will be ok. She will be ok." he whispered in my ear and tucked me into his chest
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