(Kaos comes in wearing his usual espada uniform and falls directly in front of the camera into a chair) What… You expected a wardrobe change? Who do you think I am? Freak? But hopefully you en… (Kokuzoku comes in from the opposite side of the screen)
Kokuzoku: Hello my minions!
Kaos: … That's my line…
Kokuzoku: Not anymore… I own this show now!
Kaos: I created you! I can get rid of you too!
(Kaos reaches for the backspace key, but it disappears)
Kokuzoku: Told you.
Kaos: WHAT THE!!!
Kokuzoku: Now on with MY show!
Kaos: I hate you so much…
Well I decided that since I already have the second chapter well in my head and since I have a whole weekend to throw it up that before I forgot it I would just throw it on. Now I have just woken up so give me a bit of mercy on this one and as well if you people wanted more violence well then you're going to get it! And as usual I do not own any of Bleach in any way and I am merely using the idea. Please enjoy. And I don't think I will have to re explain the way I do my writing like what is actions and what is words since it is on the first page… And also it is pretty much like a book until we get to a later part where I will need the bolded quotes and such.
Bleach- The Dark Cero
Chapter 2- Revenge
The captain only smirked as the vizard had released his full power. "Well I guess there is no harm in having fun with your kill… Bankai…" The captain's spiritual pressure knocked every vizard, arrancar, and shinigami in the area, except for Kokuzoku, unconcious. The captain's bankai was a large scimitar with energy flowing around it and samurai armor that covered his entire body made of pure spiritual pressure. "You cannot win… Animal…" The captain said mockingly at the vizard.
My sanity was gone… My brother was gone… Everything was gone… I had nothing left… Because of… HIM!
The vizard screamed as he charged towards the man his cero covered arms and legs turning into claws. He threw the first attack which was a giant cero followed by his fist. In return to this the captain jumped back hitting the cero away and blocking the gauntlets with his scimitar. Before Kokuzoku could even think of his next move the man knocked his gauntlets away and created a huge gash through the vizard's back.
I had underestimated my enemy… I was a fool and even though I thought I was invincible… I was far from it…
He didn't even feel the cut and ignored the blood that poured from it. He turned around even angrier, but the man was gone with his sword in the ground. The vizard looked around confused and when he turned back to where he was facing before, there the captain was standing with a huge smirk on his face.
I never knew that he was so powerful. I thought that we were equal because of our numbers… And little did I know I had lost just as the battle had started.
He looked at him and his eyes went wide, all he had time to do was scream. "RrrAaaaaaaaah!" As 15 blades were protruding out his back and through his chest, blood shot out all around him like a fountain. "B….Brother…" He whispered as his mask shattered, vision faded, and body went limp. The vizard laid on the ground covered in his own blood. "You are such a fool… You will never beat me…"The captain said to him as all of the blades dissipated.
I was never told what he was able to do. But we lost the fight… The captain killed all of our men and then brought the surviving shinigami back to the Seretei… But I wasn't dead… He let me live… Just so I would have to live with my failure…
Kokuzoku lay on a mat like bed on the wooden floor of a Japanese style house. Still unconscious covered from head to toe with bandages which were changed daily. Two people seemed to be talking in the room as if he was not there, a man and a woman. "Are you sure he is not dead?" The woman said looking down at the man whom had been unconscious for so long now. "You need to be patient… He is not dead, but more is hurt than his body…" The man said sadly also now looking at the butchered up unconscious vizard.
They did not know, but by this time I could hear what they were saying, although I still was unable to move any part of my body at all.
"What if he tries to kill us?" The girl said staring at his zanpakuto on the ground next to him, this being one of the first times his gauntlets had ever reverted back to their original zanpakuto state. The man and woman were arrancar whom had found him when searching for anyone who had survived the battle. His espada uniform was so ripped up and covered with blood they couldn't tell what it was so they had discarded it. "He doesn't seem to be that kind of person…" The male whom was obviously the older of the two had said. "There is only one way to tell…" The girl said and at that Kokuzoku lost the ability to hear yet again and slipped back into his coma like state.
They bandaged me every day till my wounds were only scars… I was still in what seemed to be a coma though… I was like this for ten years and they had never given up on me.
To Be Continued In Chapter 3
So how was it? I kind of rushed this one a little bit and I probably will change it a little bit, but it is better than nothing since it seems people review more when you have multiple chapters.
Kokuzoku: …
Kaos: Why so quiet mister all powerful?
Kokuzoku: You put me into a coma…
Kaos: Told you not to mess with me.
Kokuzoku: You better not add a romance part into this…
Kaos: Hmmm… Good idea!
Kokuzoku: I would kill you… But I guess that would be suicide…
Kaos: Exactly! I own you!
Kokuzoku: Don't push it….
(Kokuzoku puts his zanpakuto to Kaos' throat)
Kaos: Shutting up now…
Okay just like before no flaming bla bla bla… Suggestions are happily accepted though. And as before cut slack since I was pretty much asleep when I wrote this and also I rushed it. But instead of Mr. Sqidgy and Freak joining us today… It will be my other close friend Blacking 345 and… Rose…
Black: No flaming… Or you will die…
Rose: Yay murder!
Black: Okay wait are we killing this camera man too?
Camera Man: Wait what!
Kaos: Whatever you want…
Black: Okay Rose… prove yourself to me now…
Rose: Yay!!!
(Camera man drops the camera leaving it staring at Black's feet and you only hear the camera man running then screaming in pain and Rose giggling as she kills him)
(Kaos then walks over and smashes the camera)
