Sorry for the wait well here is… Jayfeather: I'M A FRECKEN LAZER BLAAAAAA (dies) Flamestar, bramblestar and hollyleaf: JAYFEATHER! Trev12354: back and I have 80 lives but, now 79 :D. star: trev12354 don't have warriors but has flamestar and Trevor and logan… slogan32: hi I'm helping my brother and LOGAN IS MINE!

Trevor's POV

I was on my field trip with Zack, Allan, mom, dad, Logan and me "are we there yet"

"No"

"Now"

"No"

"Now"

"Yes"

":D realy"

"NO Now SHUT the heck up!"

"…"

"Here we are at the star pool"

(everyone but me: "MOON POOL!" Trev12354 and slogan:"they don't know that!")

I looked at the pool and then there was me but, it turn and turn like a wirle pool. "HELP ME!"

(Everyone but me: "What is happening!" Trev12354: "GGRRRR STOP THAT!"

Logan, Mom, Dad, Allan and Zack look at me and pulled on me to help me but…

(Everyone but me and Jayfeather: "What In star.." Me and Jayfeather: "SHUT UP!")

"AAAAAAAHHHHH"

"HELP!"

"GET US OUT!"

"WWWEEEE!"

"SHUT UP LOGAN!"

Everyone blacked out.

*closes book* "ok that was chapter 2 and I got no reviws D*:" *starts running and crying* everyone: "0.0" star: "well trev12354 is gone so plz reviw good readers and make trev. Stop crying and now u can tell me ur cat to put in the story at chapter 4 ok, TREV Will like more clan members in this story *holds book and pencil* I can change the book with this *puts pencil up* magic pencil it is made by starclan that is my clan but now say this

Cat name:

Cat's look:

Cat's gender:

Cat's job:

Cat's live (u can do it if u want):

And the magic will make ur cat but only chapter 4 not 2 or 3 got it but' do it when 3 is done ok well *takes a breath* READ AND REVIW!"

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