Sorry for the wait well here is… Jayfeather: I'M A FRECKEN LAZER BLAAAAAA (dies) Flamestar, bramblestar and hollyleaf: JAYFEATHER! Trev12354: back and I have 80 lives but, now 79 :D. star: trev12354 don't have warriors but has flamestar and Trevor and logan… slogan32: hi I'm helping my brother and LOGAN IS MINE!
Trevor's POV
I was on my field trip with Zack, Allan, mom, dad, Logan and me "are we there yet"
"No"
"Now"
"No"
"Now"
"Yes"
":D realy"
"NO Now SHUT the heck up!"
"…"
"Here we are at the star pool"
(everyone but me: "MOON POOL!" Trev12354 and slogan:"they don't know that!")
I looked at the pool and then there was me but, it turn and turn like a wirle pool. "HELP ME!"
(Everyone but me: "What is happening!" Trev12354: "GGRRRR STOP THAT!"
Logan, Mom, Dad, Allan and Zack look at me and pulled on me to help me but…
(Everyone but me and Jayfeather: "What In star.." Me and Jayfeather: "SHUT UP!")
"AAAAAAAHHHHH"
"HELP!"
"GET US OUT!"
"WWWEEEE!"
"SHUT UP LOGAN!"
Everyone blacked out.
*closes book* "ok that was chapter 2 and I got no reviws D*:" *starts running and crying* everyone: "0.0" star: "well trev12354 is gone so plz reviw good readers and make trev. Stop crying and now u can tell me ur cat to put in the story at chapter 4 ok, TREV Will like more clan members in this story *holds book and pencil* I can change the book with this *puts pencil up* magic pencil it is made by starclan that is my clan but now say this
Cat name:
Cat's look:
Cat's gender:
Cat's job:
Cat's live (u can do it if u want):
And the magic will make ur cat but only chapter 4 not 2 or 3 got it but' do it when 3 is done ok well *takes a breath* READ AND REVIW!"
This chapter is longer.
