Oh yeah, I probably should add this:
MAJOR SPOILERS FOR CHOBITS!!
If you haven't read the whole series, this story is practically word - for - word (Yes Alyana (Tsubasa344) I'm that uncreative :p lol) I'm also thinking of bumping this up to an M rating...because of later chapters... depends if I'm actually going to include the part or not...
Also, Karin will be super Out of Character! She doesn't get her personality... yet, but, uh, yeah. A LOT of the characters are OOC.
XxMisha01xX - Well, I've already replied to you... Glad you like it, though.
ToastBandits - Yeah right! Yours was awesome!
sweetie sakura - I will. I'm actually into this whole writing thing (ignore this...)
Alyana(Tsubasa344) - Muahaha, since you're calling me Ali-chan I shall call you by your second name... Which, coincidentally, also starts with Aly/i. I already punched you so... :p Yes, Ami as a teacher. She's... uh... never mind. Hey, I stopped having a dirty mind, like, 2 weeks ago! :p lol
mangamaniac101 - This is practically word for word, with minor changes so don't expect anything super creative :p lol, and I'm NOT kidding! This will, as I've mentioned, include major spoilers, so if you don't want to spoil the rest of the story don't read on.
euca1995 - Yup, me too.
I made a mistake on the characters:
Chitose Hibiya - Suzuka Hibiya (she can't be related to Kazune)
Ichiro Mihara - Kazuto Mihara (can't be related to Kazune either)
"Man, that's bright..." Kazune moaned as he rolled over in his bed. "Gotta get some blinds... or something to cover those windows up!" As he slowly opened his eyes, a pair of emerald green orbs greeted him. Of course, his reaction was to freak out and move to the other side of the room.
Karin tilted her head, staring curiously at Kazune. The night before, Kazune put a large, baggy shirt on Karin. He noticed her ears, and relaxed. He almost forgot about what happened the last night.
"Karin?" Karin said. Kazune sighed and walked up to her.
"So, persocom. Can't you say anything else?" Kazune asked.
"Karin," was her only reply. Kazune put his hand on Karin's head, thinking.
"I wonder if you're broken or something. Maybe you do belong in the trash after all," Kazune pondered. At these words, Karin suddenly gripped Kazune's shirt, making an incredibly lonely and sad face at Kazune. Something about her made Kazune reconsider.
"Don't look at me like that. Fine, then. I won't throw you away," Kazune decided as Karin beamed at him. "There must be some way I can fix you or something." Karin threw her arms around Kazune. A tint of pink crossed Kazune's face as he gently pulled her away.
"Er, well, I can't keep on calling you persocom."
"Karin?"
"...Karin? Well, I guess I can call you that. Do you mind if I call you Karin?" Kazune asked.
"Karin!" Karin squealed and pounced on Kazune again. He laughed softly.
"How can I make you do...computer things?" Kazune said to himself. "Right, I have that book. Now where did I put it...?" He began rummaging through his things as Karin repeated her name occasionally. "...Finally!" Kazune said triumphantly.
"Okay. Checking your persocom's system settings... "Press the button on the unit's ear (electronic audio/visual relay) system to access the component video cables. Connect the cables to the your television input." Kazune did as the book said and connected it to his t.v. Karin waited and watched him read on. "Once connected, your persocom's programmed specs will appear on the screen." As Kazune turned, his excitement died down as the screen flashed a big NO DATA. "Oh, come on! "If no data appears, all data has been lost or no data has been installed. If this is the case, you must go out and buy a program before operating your persocom." Great. How am I supposed to afford that?!"
Kazune stared at the screen, then started to bang his head against the hard-cover book. Karin, watching him, started to do the same.
At the Sakurakaoka cram school, Kazune was slumped in his chair. A brown-haired teenager walked up to him, putting his bag down. "Hey, Kazune-kun! What's up? You like your pet just died."
"Shut up, Nishikiori," Kazune said. He had been down since that morning, knowing he would have to buy a super expensive program just for Karin to work properly.
"Have a rough night?" The man known as Michiru Nishikiori said. He did not get an answer, for the door swung open and their teacher appeared. She was tall, with light brown curly hair and black eyes. Her name was Ami Shimizu, and had a terrible sense of direction. She loved hearing about gossip, or in her case, 'scandals', but other than that she was fairly serious about her work.
"Everyone, take your seats!" Ami said as she started walking towards the back of the classroom.
"Ms. Shimizu, your desk is over here!" One of the students yelled. Ami smiled at him.
"Ah, thank you very much," she said.
"Did everyone finish their book reports?" Ami asked. The students groaned.
"They're not book reports, Ms. Shimizu - they're essays!"
"This is cram school!"
"Aw! C'mon, it's been my dream to become an elementary teacher!" Ami said happily as the students shouted out other things.
As Kazune glanced at Michiru, he noticed that he had a faraway look on his face. Michiru suddenly turned to him, and then grinned, the look disappearing from his face. "So, you going to tell me about your fall from heaven to hell?" Kazune smirked, but then the Ami called on them.
"Kazune, Michiru! Do I have to send you two to the principal's office?" Ami demanded.
"Come over after class," Kazune whispered.
"Sure," Michiru whispered back.
"You found a persocom in the trash?! That's awesome!" Michiru exclaimed. Kazune sighed.
"That's the thing - it's not awesome! Come see for yourself," Kazune said. As they entered, the persocom - Karin - was in the middle of learning how to take off her shirt.
"Whoa! You didn't tell me you got a girlfriend!" Michiru said. Kazune walked quickly over to Karin and pulled her shirt down, whilst yelling,
"You idiot! That's the freaking persocom!"
"Oh. I see," Michiru said, chuckling nervously. He looked at her. "She sure is a cute model. What are so freaked out about?" As Michiru reached out to touch Karin, she backed away shyly.
"Karin," she quietly said.
"Huh?" Michiru stared at her in confusion. Kazune sighed.
"I think she's broken. 'Karin' is the only thing she says! I tried plugging her in, but it said there was no data," he explained. "I still need to buy an operating system." Michiru's eyes narrowed in suspicion.
"No OS? No way," Michiru said. It was the first time he'd heard of something like this.
"Look, I don't get it either, but I know it said no data," Kazune said, scratching the back of his head. He noticed the weird look on Michiru's face as Michiru stared at Karin. "...What's wrong?"
"That's really, really weird. She shouldn't be able to even move without an OS!" Michiru said. Meanwhile, Karin stared at the two like a little puppy.
"Really? It's that important?" Kazune asked. Michiru looked at him.
"You really don't know anything about technology," Michiru said with a smirk.
"Shut up!" Kazune snapped. "Look, you know a lot about computers, right? So can you figure out how to work her?"
"I guess. Was there any marking on her?" Michiru asked while looking around. Kazune thought for a moment.
"No. I'm pretty sure there wasn't," Kazune replied.
"Hm... I can't find the manufacturer. Hold on, let me get my laptop," Michiru said, opening up his bag. "Hey, girl! Come out, Plum!" A little robot about the size of a hand crawled out, and she was in the shape of a small child.
"Wow. That's tiny," Kazune commented.
"But they're portable, and downright adorable," Michiru said. Kazune rolled his eyes. "The dataport is in her ear, right? Open it up for me," he said.
" 'Kay," Kazune said as he opened up Karin's metallic ear. "It'll just take a second, okay Karin?"
"Karin..." She said, smiling happily. Michiru smirked, which he seemed to be doing a lot of lately.
"So, you named her Karin?" Michiru asked. A faint blush spread across Kazune's cheeks.
"Well, uh, I had to call her something!" Kazune stammered.
"Naming her and treating her with respect...you're on the way to being a heavy user, my friend!" Michiru said cheerfully, patting Kazune's shoulder.
"Take your hand off my shoulder," Kazune growled. Michiru laughed and put Plum up on Karin's shoulder. He connected her cable into Karin's ear as Plum began to examine Karin.
"Class one diagnostic, Plum. I need her manufacturer, model number and processer power," Michiru ordered.
"Okey-dokey!" Plum replied cheerfully. Her eyes drooped slightly. Suddenly, her eyes blanked, then she turned white. Plum started going out of control as Kazune backed away. Finally, Plum collapsed like a ragdoll.
"Plum!" Michiru exclaimed. Fake tears were running down his cheeks. "Aww, Kazune-kun, your persocom just KILLED Plum!" He wailed.
"Uh...sorry?" Kazune said uncertainly.
"And I just finished upgrading her! Her processer was more powerful than most PC's! How could this happen?!"
"Uh--"
"That's no ordinary persocom. It's unregistered! It shouldn't even exist!" At Michiru's sudden outburst, Kazune's eyes widened. Karin just stared at them in confusion.
"WHAT?!"
