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The next day came around everyone was in class when Shirou asks" Naruto can you please move to sit next to you.?"

Naruto "yea Shirou it's nice to have someone who respects me sit can by me."

Naruto then sees Sasuke sitting at the far end thinks dam it why does it have to be him who seat at this table here the cool guy whom I hate.

Sasuke sees anger Naruto asks" you need something?"

Naruto "no just saw something I didn't like".

Before Shirou could say something to cool down the situation.

Sakura comes rushing in" Naruto move I want to sit at Sasuke's table."

Naruto " no I was here first, go find other seats sit at".

It's around this time that Iruka sensei came into class say 'everyone please take a seat class starting'. Sakura was forced to sit away from Sasuke.

Naruto " ha ah loser can't take my spot now".

Sakura with rage inside wanting to beat up Naruto for his back talk.

Iruka states" the assignment official duties on behalf of the village you will be selected into three-person teams but one team will have four members given a new student join our class. You guys be mentored by Jonin who will give out advice and help throat your various assignments that are given."

Sasuke " three-man teams seems to many."

Shirou " hopefully we can all get along."

Naruto states " I take Sakura over Sasuke".

Iruka " these selections will be base on one's abilities equality team's effectiveness".

Iruka continues to states "next team seven will be Shirou Emiya, Naruto Uzumaki, Sasuke Uchiha".

Naruto stands up points at Sasuke say "why were you thinking of putting him in the same team as Shirou and I".

Iruka "out the three of you Sasuke has the best scores in the class and Naruto you had the worst scores to balance out two of you out of thirteen students it decided you were chosen help each other strengthens on missions".

Sasuke " just don't get in my way loser".

Naruto with an angry face thinks why you.

Iruka "all right everyone dismisses until your instructors come this afternoon".


_ As Shirou and Naruto were eating at Ichiraku ramen.

Naruto looks at Shirou "Sasuke suck dick and the way he acts all cool he the complete opposite of you Shirou".

Shirou thinks about it that thought never came to my mind.

Naruto state" Shirou were you come off as kind hearted and helpful, Sasuke is cold hearted wants to be left alone all the time".

Naruto touches his stomach it starts to make a noise.

Shirou ask "are you all right?"

Naruto says "yea I need use the bathroom that all be I'll be right back."

He runs off to find a bathroom leaving Shirou at Ichiraku ramen.

Shirou thinks looking back it now Naruto kind of right to a certain extent.


A man in the mask with a headband that covering his left eye ask the third Hokage" is this Naruto place?"

The third " yes".

The man the mask thinks to himself this mike is expired. When he picks it up.

The third "he ungainly but you're the best choice to keep an eye on him you have a talent for finding things out two more people watch over is Sasuke and Naruto best of luck".

The man states" I' ll do my best". _


Naruto peaks out the classroom see if their new sensei is coming nobody there.

Naruto " why we the only ones in the classroom where everyone left with their teachers we only ones who have been waiting for ours to show up."

Naruto gets a racer off the board puts it where the door little bit open

. Shirou " do you think it's not the right time to pranks?"

Naruto "no Shirou its little paid back for making us wait".

Sasuke " do you think a simple trap going to work on higher level shinobi".

Then a hand opens the classroom where the man in a mask peak his head in where the racer drops down on him.

Naruto points his finger at him "gotch you."

Shirou stands up puts his arm behind his head say" sorry sensei for Naruto behavior".

Sasuke thinks to himself so this is our jonin leader he looks like a joke.

The man in the mask " for the first impression on meeting you I hate you".

Shirou thinks he looks interesting. _


On top of the roof of the academy building where the man in the mask sits on edge of the rail. Three them sit on steps where some tree is in the back around.

Mask Man ask" since these first meeting each other explain a little bit about yourselves".

Naruto asks" like what".

The mask man " the usual stuff your favorite thing what you hate the most dreams ambitions hobbies things like that."

. Naruto "help us out here sensei you go first to show us how it's done because of your complete stranger to us".

The mask man says" my name is Kakashi Hatake I'm the kind of person who doesn't like talking about his likes and dislikes my dreams for the future are none of your business I have a lot of hobbies."

Shirou "well he's still a mystery but we got his name now".

Kakashi " who will like to go first. "

Naruto "I will go my name is Naruto Uzumaki I like an instant cup of ramen what I like even better is Shirou cooking of ramen what I hate is to wait for the ramen to cool down".

Kakashi though the only thing is ramen on his mind.

Naruto states "to be a better shinobi than all Hokage and then all the villagers will have to acknowledge my existence at last".

Kakashi thought well he turns interesting.

Naruto "my hobbies are doing stupid pranks."

Kakashi states "next!"

Shirou " my is Shirou Emiya what I like is to live in a world where everyone is safe and share their happiness with others I dislike when those who try so hard died anyway my dream is to be a Hero of Justice try to save everyone my hobbies are cooking archery training".

Kakashi thought it seems we got an idealistic one here.

Sasuke thought Shirou Emiya is just foolishness idealist who thinks becoming a hero of justice by putting his own life on the line to try to save everyone but doesn't understand the reality of his ideals, he doesn't care about his own life because how selfless and a goody two shoes boy he is.

Kakashi " next, is you"?

Sasuke " my name is Sasuke Uchiha there are plenty of things I hate, but I don't see that it matters considering there is almost nothing I do like it seems pointless to talk about dreams that's just word but what I do have is determination I plan to restore my clan there's someone I have sworn to kill".

Shirou thought Sasuke your person who's goal I cannot agree with because your willing to do selfish things get revenge ever willing sacrifice the lives around you to gain some personal victory. It seems its true what Naruto said a little bit more true than I thought.

Naruto thought hopefully it not me.

Kakashi thought as I suspected much these two are by-products of the shinobi world we live in Shirou is too idealistic on helping others and Sasuke too of obsessed with getting revenge they need understand the meaning of teamwork.

Kakashi "our first assignment involve this team by doing a training exercise".

Sasuke thought for what purpose by doing this.

Does Naruto " training exercise?"

Shirou " Kakashi sensei is it review what we all learned from the academy."

Kakashi " in a way Shirou where you three against me in non-typical practice."

Naruto "what kind of training session will it be?"

Kakashi started laughing under his mask, Shirou thought this looks bad just by him laughing.

Kakashi states" of twenty-eight of your graduating class only nine were to be accepted by a jonin the other nineteen will go be going back for more training, this test we are about to take has 66% rate of failure."

Naruto face expression filled with shock while Sasuke expression still doesn't change, Shirou has face expression of determination.

Shirou "this test won't stop me from reaching my goal of becoming a hero of justice."

Naruto taken back from Shirou determination thought even when you have the odds against you still are moving forward with a smile.

Sasuke thought idiot.

Kakashi thought it seems I found a person like you Obito but more idealistic.

Kakashi says" in an event we will be meeting tomorrow on the practice field for I can evaluate each of your skills and weaknesses bring all of the ninja tools and weapons and most importantly don't eat breakfast".

Kakashi hands out a piece of paper to the square members.

Kakashi says" memorizes the details your assignment don't be late". _


Later that afternoon Naruto at Shirou house he sitting where Kiritsugu seat at seeing the dojo and the shed.

Shirou had his bow out shooting arrows at the targets he set up a day ago.

Naruto " how do you feel determined that you're going to pass?"

Shirou "just for one simple reason by working together also fight as your life depends on it."

Naruto " by working together what do you mean by that Shirou?"

Shirou " it means not taking him on individually because it's pretty clear he the advanced on us I learned that from training with Kiritsugu."

Naruto "now I understand what about Sasuke, he doesn't look like type wanting work with us."

As Naruto continues to watch his friend shoot arrows very fast.

Shirou " I explain the situation to him and ask why we need his help".

Naruto says" what if Sasuke doesn't want to help us?"

Shirou states "then it will be me and you working together but let's ask him first and gets some items for this to work."

Naruto "all right I'm following." _


They walk down to shopping part of the village people still didn't like Naruto only give him this dirty look. As looking at Shirou a little bit of hatred in their eyes.

Shirou stop at building with a shrunken as a billboard on top of it.

Naruto asks "A ninja shop there's many like it around the village why this one important."

Shirou ask "because I help the owner of this shop so he gives discounts on weapons I buy also this only weapons shop in the village that imports items and weapons that are not traditionally used by the five great nations during a conflict".

Naruto ask "I understand now".

When they walk into the store their met by an owner that looks be his mid-30s.

Owner asks" how may I help you today" .

Shirou pulls out a piece of paper with a list of items on it showing the owner.

As that was going Naruto was looking around the shop there were weapons he never has seen before and they in a glass box with a red sign saying firearms.

Naruto asks "Shirou what does firearms mean?"

Shirou states" weapons that fire small mental kinetic projectiles".

Naruto keeps on looking at them curious interest they were far different from ninja weapons.

Naruto ask "why doesn't the village used these weapons during wars?"

Shirou was about to answer that question. When the owner "because they are banned being used nationally, places like land of earth banned them altogether."

Naruto says, "sir, if that's the case why do you have a shop carrying these weapons."

Owner says" that's simply because of the nine tailed fox attacked the village. In response the village need weapons that took a different approach on defending village so around that time I started a business selling these weapons in heavy regulation manner."

Naruto asks "Shirou why you loud buy things from him."

Shirou "Naruto because since I helped a lot of people the third allowed as a gift to me buy things from this shop."

Naruto " if these weapons are heavy regulations then whom can you sell to."

Owner states "well spec ops group like aubo black ops but you to understand these weapons are not used by the average jonin ninja. Two reasons one, is chakra has many transform abilities that can be more effective on a battlefield compare that to firearms needs to be clean but also manufacture the right ammo for gun. Second reason that the five great nations traditionally don't like weapons that doesn't center around use of chakra that's why guns aren't at front lines of conflicts around the shinobi world."

Naruto says" all this complicated stuff makes my head hurt."

The owner gets all the things on Shirou list and puts in a small bag Shirou give him some money.

Shirou " take care of this place because I'm going be coming here lot more."

Owner says "I will Shirou just be careful out don't want to my best customer to die."


_ As they walking on to the main street Naruto asks "Shirou why are we going this way it leads to the Hokage mansion".

Shirou " because the Hokage know where Sasuke lives at."

Naruto "still want to do that why do we need Sasuke his asshole?"

Shirou " Naruto you need put your personal feelings behind got to look the bigger picture we are in I like say before he has advanced over us".

Naruto asks "fine what's in the bag you got that blacksmith dude?"

Shirou "oh you didn't see what he give me. Naruto says no because I got distracted by all the weird weapons he had."

Shirou pulls out something from the bag.

Naruto " wait all you got was paper bombs."

Shirou "no more like a flashbang and smoke paper bombs."

Naruto " how that going be useful for tomorrow's test"?

Shirou "you will see". It's around this time they finally reach Hokage place."


_ At the desk third, was doing paperwork when he looks up to find Naruto and Shirou in front of him.

Shirou asks lord third" I there something important, I need to ask".

The third "what is it you need answering."

Shirou "it's our teammate Sasuke do you know where he lives?"

Third "Sasuke live far east on outskirts of the village he will be living Uchiha clan section where be at building".

Shirou "thank you for the information lord third."

Naruto and Shirou leave the Hokage office.


When Naruto and Shirou get to the Uchiha clan area pasting the first gated doors.

Naruto ask " Shirou it's too quiet for someone like Sasuke to be living here?"

Shirou " no kidding not lively at all."

Naruto yells out loud" HELLO WHERE ARE YOU HIDING SASUKE"?!

There was echo throughout the Uchiha clan building. Shirou thought to himself typical Naruto always doing things out loud but this place is quiet there's this odd feeling I'm getting from this place and it reminds me of that fire fives years ago. A blazing fire that killed everyone who was touch by it and me walking through it all and seeing their crisp black bodies unable to do anything about the ones who try survival that fire. That sense of death is all around this place.

Naruto asks " Shirou are you there, hello".

Shirou coming to his senses "yea need something Naruto".

Naruto "yea I ask which building should we knock on first before you space out and had this look of pain in your eyes".

Shirou "just remembering some old memories nothing to worry about".

Naruto whose body language give off skepticism "ok Shirou I'm always here if you want to talk about it".

Shirou putting a hand behind his head say "thank you for the offer let's not focus on me right now and find Sasuke".

With that Shirou rings the doorbell on second story building and also has Uchiha symbol in the top center.

Sasuke who opens the sliding door asks" Why you two losers doing here you're interrupting my training?" in an annoying voice.

Shirou " Naruto and I are here to ask you for your help going up against Kakashi sensei tomorrow ".

Sasuke who had a dissatisfied look " teaming up with you losers will only holding be carrying dead weight on me so no".

Naruto who had a blaze of anger ready to punch Sasuke cross his arms closed eyes head pointed right say "Me dead weight no way the only person who dead weight is you Sasuke!"

Sasuke "all right loser now get lost I have to prepare for tomorrow".

Shirou "so that's your answer Sasuke."

Sasuke "yea just as I told annoying loser get lost".

Naruto who still angry " just as I told you Sasuke not the type to help".

Shirou "I guess you're right Naruto but it was worth a try at very least".

Sasuke closes sliding door walks back inside. _


Later on into the Naruto who was sleep, on the other hand, Shirou who can't seem to sleep goes out the shed where all his training junk is storage. He sat down on the floor pick up a steel pipe which is always used when training strengthening magic.

Shirou closes his eyes once more say to himself "Structural Grasp", magical energy moves into the pipe with green lines going cross it.

He "Structural analysis complete strengthen now".

Shirou body temperature begins to rise to do the fact of his magic circuits generator so much energy threw out his body that heat is a natural effect. Compare that to chakra as far Shirou knowns doesn't have the same effect on his body. The best way to put it in Shirou eyes is chakra like a river flowing threw out the body and his magical energy act like a car engine. A with that out the way Shirou opens his eyes and there's not much change in the pipe.

Shirou says out loud "dam it nothing change the structure"! He continues tries threw out the night. _


That's the end of chapter 2 Im working on chapter 3 just going take some time to finish

There are few ideas in this chapter . I will expend on during the chunin exams look forward to that

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