Well here chapter 2. Enjoy and theres a hint of who I pair Jack with...
CHAPTER 2: Vengeance part 1
IRON's Mansion--outside
The explosion caught the neighbourhood's attention. Everyone rush towards the scene to check it out. Flames from the destroyed lab increases the heat on their surroundings. Smokes from the flames covered the once blue sky,blocking hte sunlight. From far away, the sounds of police cars can be heard. As they arrived, hey ordered the people to back off as they investigate. "Man that is one nasty explosion." One of the policeman commented. His partner just nodds in agreement. While they continue investigating, a large figure comes out from the house. "Oh my! What happened here?" the figure said surprisingly. "Where is...Master Jack!" the figure gasps as it went to the bush where Jack laid. Jack open his eyes, only to see a large mechanical figure stood in front of him. "Carl? Is that you?" he said as he tries to stand up. The robot helped him up and realises the boy was bleeding.
"It looks like your injured, sir." The robot said. "Nah, its...ok" Jack replied but blood oozes from his mouth,making him difficult to talk. One of the policeman heard the voices from the back of the house and arm himself with a gun. "FREEZE!" he shouted as his about to fire. Both Jack and Carl were surprise but felt relieved after the policeman put away his gun. "Jack? What happen to you man?" the policeman asked. "Caught in...ex..." Jack fainted. "Oh my! We better call the ambulans Mr Fred!" Carl said. The policeman nodds and took a phone to make a call. "Hello hospital? I'm Fred Johnson from the police force. Send an ambulance to Iron's Mansion. We got a serious patient here".
Malibu's General Hospital
Every doctor and nurse rush to the operation room, bringing along their patient who's lying on the trolly. "We have to hurry!" One of the doctors said. Luckily,they manage to reach the operating room on time. After setting up the equipments,they ready to operate him. "Status?" asked the surgeon. "Critical! Left artery is bleeding and the heart is at critical condition!" the surgeon's asisstant answered. Taking the scalpel,the surgeon cuts the patients chest and saw the bleeding artery as weel as the heart. During the surgery,he manage to knit the artery but soon he stopped. "It can't be...his heart rate...his going to die...unless..." He thought with surprise face and ordered his one of his asisstants to get a few items. "Are you sure do-.." he was cut off by the surgeon, "Shut up and get those equipments NOW!! We don't have much time..." he said monotonously.
A few hours later...
Jack open his eyes,only to see the white ceiling of his wardroom. "Where...am I?" he thought as he tries to get up. "Looks like your awake" said Carl, his robot friend who was beside him sitting on a chair. "What happen? What...what is this?!" he said outloud as he looks at his chest is covered by somekind of metal material. "That is a container for cadmium batteries that power up your artificial valves. It keeps your heart in one piece so that you can live." said the surgeon as he enters the wardroom. "What do you mean?" Jack asked with a surprise look. "It means that your heart was in a critical condition that you will die. But the surgeon manage to 'fix' your heart with this equipment." Carl said with his robotic voice. He looked back at his chest and shook down his head,feeling depress. "Its ok sir. Afterall,your still alive now." Carl said,tries to cheer him up. "Yeah...but those guys will pay! For what they did to me and my parents!" he thought outloud. His face changes from sad to anger,clinching his fist.
The Spies' Penthouse
Its 6.30 in the evening,the girls just got back from their shopping. Feeling tired,they lounge themselves on the sofa "I'm beat..." Sam said,feeling tired. "Yeah...I'm gonna hit the showers." Alex said. Clover turn on the tv,revealing the news channel. "Today we got some big news. First of all, Professor Irons lab blew up!" said the newswoman. The girls gasp, "Oh my gosh!" Clover said outloud. "Not only that but we also received a news that his son, Jack Irons was caught in the explosion. He is in the hospital right now and he said he...does not want any visitors especially from fangirls..." the newsman said. "OH MY GOSH! Jack is in the hospital!" Clover said with a shock. "Maybe we should go and visit!" she added, having thoughts of Jack happy to see her visit."Uh hello? Earth to Clover! He said he doe..." before Sam could finish her sentence,three trap doors opens under their feet. "Why we have to be wooph now!!" Clover shouted with her voice echoed.
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Well heres the 2nd chapter. Hope you enjoy it even though its shorter then the 1st one. I'm gonna tweak 'this' Iron Man a bit so that it doesn't considered a carbon copy from the movie.
R&R
