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JPOV

"Hey! Jake!" Gail yelled on top of her lungs.
We both turned to look at the direction where Gail was coming from. Gail is a new member to the pack. Since more vampires have inhabited forks, more of our young ones have sadly developed into this monster form, she is so young and still incredibly brave. Just fourteen and she's absolutely comfortable with her new life, well...except when the transformation takes place and we all share her disturbing thoughts...girls...I never really understood them.
"Hey Gail, what's up," I said annoyed she was disturbing me and Nessie, "This better be good."
"Oh, uh Sam was looking for you, but I see your busy" She took a quick dirty glare at Nessie, she doesn't relate to any other girls. See, Gail has a crush on almost every male that is around her. "But I guess there's some new vampire with the Cullen's; I just hope it's a good looking one..." She thought to herself out loud.
I rolled my eyes at her. Another leech lover, perfect. She grew fond of the parasites after meeting them, especially Edward. She never looked away from him, such a stalker. All she talks about is vampires, great kill me now, end of story.
"Get to the point Gail," I said frustrated.
"Ugh, well Sam wants to go check on the hottie, I bet you it's a guy! I am more then willing to date him,"
"And he wants me to go with him, great, just another stupid stalking day," I stood up disappointed. Where's the fun at? I wanted to rip apart some random parasite looking for some action, but no, no idiotic leech around here was interested in sucking some human blood. They all were vegetarians, how silly.
I immediately took it all back knowing that it wasn't right to think that. "All right then, thanks Gail, Tell him I'll go by myself to check on the parasite. I have to drop of Renesmee either way,"
"Wait, no why?" Nessie objected.
"Honey it's late, do you want Edward to prohibit you from seeing me?" She pouted and crossed her hands roughly.
"Fine then, take me home..." She said with a disappointed voice.
We raced back to the Cullen's house, and got there in no time. I could smell them already, I had become used to the smell being so close to them every darn day, but still I noticed the disgusting difference.
Just my luck, "Nessie! Oh my, so late!" Great, here comes Rosalie to stink up Nessie, "Oh, Nessie you're late! We were supposed to go out and go shopping with Alice! your growing so..."
"Yeah, save it for the humans, why don't you blondie" I cut her out, hoping she would just disappear into thin air.
"Tell your dog to take a hike," She demanded back giving me a dirty look.
"Aunty stop picking on Jakey," Nessie said, as she dragged me inside the Cullen's house. "Are my parents home?" she asked Rosalie.
"Bella is with the guests, you'll see in just a moment, but Edward's still hunting, must be a first he goes without Bella, he's so protective" she said a she rolled her eyes.
I had to chuckle at that, Bella could take anyone with her vampire self. Although, I was relieved to know that Edward wasn't home to read my thoughts about me and Nessie's night.
"So, who are the visitors?" I asked blondie as I could already make out two unfamiliar voices inside the living room, a female voice I've never heard before as well as a male's voice I was pretty sure I have heard once before.
She did not answer back and we walked through the door to the room where the two guests were. And there he was, Nauhel the other half vampire-half human guy that was present the day of the volturi attack. But I couldn't believe what my ears where hearing, it was not just Nessie', Nauhel's and my heart beat present. A fourth heart beat coming from the female vampire next to Nauhel, not just a vampire, another half-half human. I stared at this pretty girl, golden skin and chocolate eyes, perfect black wavy hair down to her shoulders. To my surprisement she was also staring back at me with great intensity, this whatsoever was not what caught my attention. Nauhel did not take his eyes off of Nessie ever since the first second she walked through the door.
"Hi, my name is Nauhel and this is Cindy here, I believe we've met before" he said talking only to Nessie as he stood up to greet us. I moved closer to Nessie and took her by the waist, pushing her closer to me. "You've grown to be a beautiful woman," the piece of dirt said with a grin smile on his face. "It is a great pleasure to see you once again.." he took her hand and kissed the back of it, never losing eye contact, "...Renesmee."