Alright guys, how we doing some review that made me feel good!
said good start
Jasper-not-Jiper said a lot of stuff that I don't feel like typing, it was nice though.
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The Warrior
Lotus Hotel and Casino
Bright pulsing lights, of neon green, pink, and every other color imaginable. Apart from the lights nothing else was really special about the place, besides the cocktail girls dressed up in their tight dresses of course. That was when the boy walked in, all eyes exerted to him, looking to be only twelve, but the boy radiated confidence, courage, and the most surprising loyalty. His eyes black with specks of silver and gold and every other color imaginable, they were a sight to see honestly. The most surprising thing beyond the loyalty, which with loyalty, came every other good trait, was his age, he could not have been more old than 12, but with his age great maturity stood with his posture. As he walked up to the booth where he was going to eat, three people walked in, two of them radiated a weird type of power, you could just feel, as if a brush from the wind. The third, well he looked like a geek, but the feeling that came from him was something that people could argue is better than power, kindness. Suddenly a new person popped up, so suddenly that it made Percy jump a bit, this boy had jet black hair, and sea green eyes, and he was bathed in Nike gear, showing that he might be from some mortal background, as demigods were more worried about survival than clothes. This person too radiated a strange power but not as great as the first too.
Time skip two days later
Percy was impressed honestly, those four people had managed to lose their minds, eating Lotus cookie after Lotus cookie. He was more impressed by the satyr, he was kicking himself now for not seeing it sooner, he had a pack of twelve girls, all swarming him and asking for his hand in marriage. It brought memories back, of days when they would swarm him and he would have to decline girl after girl, until they finally got the gist and left him alone, that was a day of great happiness, as they finally left him alone. But with all the thinking he had started to get a headache, it was nagging at the back of his mind, he soon realized that the nagging was actually persistent whispering, get them out,
get them out it said. What? Was the only thing that entered Percy's mind, who? This finally clicked for him... Well guys hope you enjoyed, I got more words this time so yep...
