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"Don't make a promise you cant keep, Dayton," I cried, " You will go, just like everyone else in my life, You will not be there, your not immortal! And neither am I," I shouted
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"Who says I'm not immortal? And plus, I can still promise I will be around, cant I? There isn't a law to where you cannot say that, Dawn," Dayton protested
"Now your just being stupid, immortal is not real, and I know there is not a law, but I'd rather you just not say it, please?" my eyes flooded, I couldn't make out his perfect image anymore. It was not visible, he looks like a puddle on the cement floor.
"I cant not say it, Dawn, I cannot not promise to never leave, cause I'd be lying, cause I know I wont leave, there aint no way in heck I'm leaving you, not now, not ever, so choose, you leave and I stock you, or you stay and let me promise you, I'm here," Dayton smiled a crooked smile.
"Ok, I'll stay, just promise me one thing, please," I plead.
"Maybe, I may be able to keep it, Dawn, depends what it is," Dayton chuckled.
"Promise me, you wont fall in love with me," I said
"I can try to keep that promise, Dawn," He smiled.
"thank you, and try you absolute best to keep it, I beg you."
"Ok, you're welcome, Dawn."
So we walked into classes, the tears had gone from my face, and my eyes weren't red and puffy anymore, I looked normal, except my makeup was no longer on my face, ugh! I looked horrible. I'm just so glad that Dayton will not fall in love with me.
I walked into my house, to my father asleep on the couch, Thank God, I didn't want to tell him all about my horrible first day at school, I just hope tomorrow is better, I pray tomorrow is better, and I also pray that Dayton will keep his promise and not fall in love with me.
"Goodnight, Dad," I said as I walked up the stairs to my bedroom, knowing he was not awake.
And now lets try and sleep pleasant dreams, no nightmares tonight, Dawn! Please!
"NOOOOOOO!" I woke up in tears, sweating, I opened my eyes and thought I saw Dayton in my room, but then I blinked and he was gone, "What the heck?" I whispered, "You're going crazy, Dawn!" I thought. It was time to great ready for school anyways, so I hopped out of bed and got ready for school.
I got to school, I was so quiet Dayton kept asking me what was wrong, I didn't want to tell him that I was going crazy so my reply every time was, "Nothing, just worried about the test I'm having in a few weeks, its algebra, I'm going to fail," I lied every time, I honestly think he could tell, he wouldn't drop it.
"Dawn, I know your not worried about a test they haven't even announced yet, jus tell me your real problem," He said
"Fine, I'm going crazy, Dayton, I'm going nuts, you need to put me in a pshyco home, please, just take me away from everyone and everything," I was serious, and he just laughed.
"It aint funny, Dayton, I'm serious," I shouted
"You aren't crazy, what made you think this, dawn?" He asked
"Um, My nightmares wont go away," I said lying, I knew it cause I saw him in my room, went he wasn't there, he couldn't have left so fast, that's inhumane.
He rolled his eyes, "Liar," He said matter-of-factly
