Right I know I said I'd make a bigger chapter. Well I guess I kind off lied, it is longer just… I swear the next one will be longer and I'll try to get it posted soon.
Wow Ok I really wasn't expecting anyone to like this so I'm going to finish this for those of which who like it. Um… I hope you enjoy and please I really don't like flame but I need constructive criticism so plz feel free to… ya, ok I'll just start the chapter.
Hope the spelling is better
It started out as a normal day, so… what changed?
My special seat! Luffy basked in his own thoughts his smile covering his face. He looked out over the ocean. Its kind of funny something so pretty could be a threat. "Wait, is that land?" Luffy squinted and sure enough there was land on the horizon. I'm sure Nami said it would be days until we reached land, and last time I thought I saw land it was just a whale. But…
"Luffy its time to eat, are you just going to sit there?"
Luffy turned to see Usopp peering curiously out from the kitchen, and turned back to the island in the distance. It hasn't moved yet so that must mean, "Yosh, land!"
"Luffy there's no land didn't Nami tell you that last time?"
"There is, there is! I'm not lying Usopp-"
"After all, that's your job isn't it?" Zoro said as he emerged from below deck.
Usopp glared at Zoro who had a satisfactory look upon his face, "It wasn't that good" Usopp muttered.
"Come on you guys I really see land" Luffy was moaning by now.
"Luffy just come inside and eat then you can continue looking at your imaginary island." Sanji could be heard from inside the kitchen.
"I believe captain-san." Robin mentioned "The island seems rather close."
The crew piled out the door to see the cliffs of the island ahead.
"See land." He announced happily. One by one the crew turned to face Nami.
"Well- uh.." Nami struggled for a few moments before running off to recheck her sea charts.
After a few hours of discussion, the Merry was just reaching the mysterious island.
"Yosh, adventure!"
"Luffy we aren't stopping on this island; it's not even on the map!" Nami pleaded
"There probably aren't even any towns, we need more supplies." Sanji added
"But the adventure,"
"I once landed on an island like this when I was a boy…" Usopp began.
"Really!" Chopper said looking up, with a smirk Usopp continued his story while the rest if the crew bickered.
"We all realize that unless we make a decision soon the ship will run onto the shore or worse into the cliffs." Robin said quite casually.
"Shore, so were landing? Yosh!" Luffy began jumping.
"No we aren't landing, oh its no use fine we'll land but not for long?" Please anything just calm down! Nami thought, "but first we need to put down anchor, before we end up on the shores!"
"And then, I dueled with the dragon to save the-"
"Story's over now get you but on deck and get to work!"
Ok good? Bad? Please review I don't think anyone of you realized how happy your reviews made me.
I made last minute adjustments to this chapter to make it longer and cut a bit of the story off because… because I wanted to and I have Home work I haven't finished yet.
I already had this chapter made and the next one is in progress. So understand that as I go on it might take a bit longer for me to right these chapters but I'll make them longer
Hope you enjoyed.
