Sorry for the errors…but I m Portuguese! P

The room was dark... a little light entered in that house of white walls in the fifth floor of a street in New York that normally was illuminated. Suddenly the door of the front confided and a brown woman entered there, owner of a pretty and sparkling brown eyes! Her face was pink and she has a tired smile, maybe because she has one day of bad work perhaps afflicted, that in the other days, where all only know to say: "It makes this... makes that...already you finished what i ordered you to make?", and I do not know, you have that to be always with a smile in the face to receive best or until the worse customers whom to find for the front. Somebody that you only have that to say: "Thank you... you are welcome". In that Lindsay Monroe is a lucky girl, she did not work in the clothes house that always go with Stella, in a shopping in front of her house (where it says: "Opened of 8:00 until 00:00"). She was csi and worked in the police laboratory of New York, where she works in equip of Mac Taylor, together with Stella, Hawkes, Peyton, Sid, Flack and Angel (P) too and... Danny... Danny Messer...Why? He was behind her for Montana, to help her, and with that she did not have doubts about his true feelings about her, well...in some month ago he said her he liked her, but she practically ran away from him. They almost kissed in tribunal room...but... that could happen again...he don't know her...who she was really...he don't know... god...shit...again! "Damn the telephone... ring again.", she thought looking at the telephone on of the table of the entrance. She took off her coat and sit down in her sofa with her telephone in her left hand.

"Monroe! ", she said, now binding the TV, she wanted to see the game of baseball, that Danny said day all.

"Yes… someone! ", it only could be a trick, nobody answered it…maybe its Danny … or Flack… but the trick already was not funny!

"Someone answer ….I do not have patience for these tricks…", said already definitive in disconnect the telephone and already without giving to attention the damn game in TV.

"Wait…", said a feminine and very cold voice in the other side. This voice paralyzed Lindsay, she hears that voice so many times … but never it seemed to be so….so… I do not know… different!

"Mom! …."

So…what you think? I know…this have errors…i think…sorry for that! Its a bit descriptive... but its only happen in the first chapter, I promise.

Please, say something… R&R