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The Shard of The Flame Ice: Thanks for the super long review and very much needed and appreciated advice, Ice! X3 What I have to say to your advice is that I really appreciate it, and I know its a negative prospect from the outset already while I'm typing it... And I'll definitely try my bestest to get over that weak point!

The reason for Nep's training will be revealed in this chapter, just read to find out! ;3 And also thanks for the warning tip, that's the reason why I only planned to put him in the beginning and the end before you reviewed.

Thanks for the rest for the rookie tips! XD Just to assure(?) you, I've already thought up of a real insane yet reasonable and good(I think?) plan! XD Pls note that a teeny bit of whys and hows won't make TOO much sense... and the craziness will only come in future sequels...

...And I realized just only five hours ago that I should've written a tad longer for Nep's 'death' scene, which means adding in a proper set-up as well. I too agree with you on the 'in-media-res' part, one of the only TWO reasons I'm gonna re-upload Chapter One in time(Meaning... One week?)! Plus, I'll also try avoiding dem sound effects and... onomatopoeia, but I cant promise or dare say it'll work out well, I'll probably just make it even worse... ;P

As for Neptune, I realized the mistake the moment I uploaded the story, which is why I've already edited out ALL the motherfucking foul language she said, and lucky for me you reviewed b4 I posted the new Chapter One without foul language from Nep. Else I would've needed to re-upload Chapter One twice :D For the reason of Permanent HDD, read right below to find out! I've already typed in the reason even b4 you reviewed, Ice :3

And for Loh... I can freely and shamelessly say I never thought of him as the BIGGEST, note biggest, weak point in the fic. Just one thing; he would NEVER, At least I won't allow him to since I DID say Nep would be the MC and I plan on letting that happen, the idea of him taking Nep's spotlight never even crossed my mind, take Neptune's spotlight. He's just a reason to make Nep-Nep OP! XD Also be rest assured(?) he has quite an interesting backstory me and my friends invented for him, it'll be revealed only in far away future sequels doe ;D Answer to why he doesn't do everything by himself is becoz its part of his freaking JOB! XD Remember he's the 'God of Balance' and Balance itself(Fake of course); My own personal opinion is that everything with a polar opposite can never ever exist without each other, like there would be no death without life, and there would be no life without death, no good without evil, no evil without good, no chicken without egg & no egg without chicken and etc..And for the 'good reason', it's simply coz of his f*cking job. AGAIN. He doesn't interfere and help rid ALL, note all, worlds across the spaces for ony good. Plus, he's half evil since he also needs to keep himself balanced. He CAN oversee every single thing in existence, but he simply doesn't NEED, not want, to interfere with HALF of the destruction and peace across all of space. So... just for the sake of plot convenience, Gamindustri isn't one of the worlds he needs to interfere with ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Hope you don't mind! ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\з= ( ▀ ͜͞ʖ▀) =ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿

I fully understand I've... stepped on writing landmines right from the get go, but personally, I think its worth the risk! ;) Also...

... I shall show you exactly what I can do with Nep! (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿) BRING IT ON!

Loh Ping: I know that Loh. You'd better appreciate it. And thanks as well for the review!

On3dgeGaming: Thanks for the review! XD and also thanks for sticking around X3

Alrighty then!

Lets begin! B)

Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN THE NEPTUNIA SERIES. My OC belongs to me.

Note: Btw you beautiful people! Update once in every once 1-6 days(Depends on how long the chapter is)! Make sure to tune in! ;D

PS: Hope none of you guys mind if I skip the difficult part, which is the reactions and the talking after Loh revealed his identity...

Ps Plus: I also hope none of you readers mind if I skip the training for the next chapter...


Chapter Two

The God of Balance, Absolution & Infinity, The Goddess of Planeptune


Neptune POV

1 Year After The First Meeting Of Neptune And Loh Ping...

Dear Diary,

It had been a year since I had first met Loh Ping, the God of Balance, Absolution, and Infinity.

As a plus to that, he had also taken me under his tutelage, and he is now officially my sensei(teacher), after quite a... few arguments.

To tell the truth, I'm now used to being permanently in my HDD Form. The reason as to why is because if you had wanted to live in the Godly Realm or the personal dimension of mid & high-tier Gods, you MUST be in your Godly or true form, which is basically a CPU's HDD. I'm still glad that Loh-sensei had the sense to force me to maintain in HDD Form after 'dying', else I would've been vaporized when coming through to here. At least, my human form. Though I would still live, it wouldn't be a joyful experience.

What I'm NOT used to is the fact that a year over here is barely a minute in Gamindustri, and it was Loh-sensei who slowed down the time that much. Normally it would be one year in here is 14 years in Gamindustri, he'd first told me. And he'd slowed down the time just for the sake of my training, the thing that caused the millions of BILLIONS of arguments and negotiation before Loh-sensei finally caved in to my request of training me and NOT sending me back to Gamindustri until I'm a lot more stronger. Reason why he created a few hundred thousand more clones to replace his fully essence gathered self with a task to take on his job for a while whilst he trains me to get stronger. Oh, I meant few arguments.

But now... I guess I'm sorta used to living next to a more powerful God that could kill me by just looking at me. And then revive me with just a snap of his fingers.

Special Note: Fu fu fu... I finally found Loh-sensei's weakness! Even though he's zillions of years old, he still has that one weak point (: ¬‿¬) Kekeke!

Well...its bedtime for me now. I need to get up early tomorrow for training. I really need to sleep now!

Case closed for today, Diary.

Yours Sincerely,

Your Owner,

Neptune

I clasped my N-Note diary shut and hugged it close to my chest as I completed today's log entry, and let out a small, contented sigh.

So far life here was good. I was provided with anything I needed, and those training sessions with Loh-sensei had worn off. I could tell I was probably strong enough to thrash Arfoire along with CFW Magic around with just my bare hands now. And that's without me needing to transform into my NEXT Gen Form, a newly discovered technique that popped out of nowhere when I was fighting Loh-sensei.

But what I know is that I still stood barely a 0.1% chance when it comes to winning against him. He could still kill me with one hand even if I went NEXT Form on his ass.

I stopped in mid-thought as I stared down at my empty pudding cup, before grumbling.

Now that I'd the power to summon whatever delicacy I wanted outta nowhere, I often find myself summoning pudding cups and eating them without even realizing it when I'm deep in thought.

Guess old habits die hard, huh? I thought, then laughed bitterly.

Loh-sensei said I could only go back after 3 years plus had passed in Gamindustri. Which means I still have about 5 million, 80 thousand, and 320 years of training left in here before I can get back to Nepgear and the others...

...Well, I could very well deal with that. As long as I get what I WANT, which is to get stronger than ever so I could defeat any threat that befalls Gamindustri again. That's half of the reason why I wanted to train to get so much more stronger.

The second half of the reason is because I'll never, ever, let any of my friends, family and people feel sad like this again! I won't allow that to happen again. Especially them...

Images and memories of the happy times and moments I had with everyone before I 'died' ran through my mind as I smiled softly, yet painfully.

I shook my head, trying to clear my thoughts, I can continue thinking about this tomorrow... right now I have to get a good night's rest.

"...Hey, Author-sama, You know you can cut it with the rest of the extras you were about to input right?"

Yes, I know Nep. Ive already changed my mind about typing the extras in, so I was just about to get you to sleep. So I beg you to don't break the fourth wall even when you're Permanently HDD, meaning you're mature and elegant.

"Then why don't y-"

I stood up from the chair and changed into my nightwear, before turning off the lights and flopping down onto my fluffy cloud bed.

"...Mhm... I REALLY need to take one of these clouds back to Gamindustri with me when I get ba- Ahhh...!" I yawned, stretching one last time before finally going to sleep, hugging my cloud-made hug pillow tightly...


Loh POV

2:35AM The Next Morning...

"Glad to know you arrived on time, Nep," I announced as I stood up, brushing the dust off my pants before snuffing out the cigarette I was smoking.

I was an ordinary man with typical 178cm height, a weight of 69 kg, plus quite a normal lean and muscular build, not like the over-exaggerated ones. I did NOT like taking on that appearance. I'd rather stay in my true form which is this.

I'd say my true form's appearance was one with a sort of forced smile every time, along a really sad look in my eyes as if I've lost everything, which I had, a long long time ago. Looks and personality are like this; I can swear that I'm extremely loyal and is willing to sacrifice just about everything for my friends among friends, and I have a scar over my left eye which forced my left pupil to become white, with a normal/typical mustache I'm proud of, and a mix of black & white hair, bangs covering half of my left eye, hair length reaching down to the base of my neck. Have a knack for killing AND saving things, basically keeping things in balance which my clones can handle right now.

Normal attire is wearing a midnight dark with shining white flame designs at the edges of my hoodie cloak that reaches down to my ankle, plus the hood always covers most of my head. A wicked-looking armor can be seen underneath my cloak. The weapons I mostly use are the Infinity Gauntlet and my Yin-Yang Greave & Gauntlet, along with the Celestial Duo Void Beasts Boot. (Pls take note that the Infinity Gauntlet will not work the same as Thanos's Infinity Gauntlet, but the picture and design is generally the same. As for other weapons, imagine Yin-Yang Greave & Gauntlet as one black Gauntlet and one white Greave with Yin-Yang signs in their middle. Celestial Duo Void Beasts Boot, just imagine whatever! XD I really really really really REALLY hope I didn't offend any of you readers... I just thought it'd make sense Loh would have the Infinity Gauntlet since he's also the God of Infinity...? (• ε •) btw, Yin-Yang is symbol for Balance, Celestial Duo Void Best Boot symbol for Absolution... )

"...I think we should get back to the writing, Sera..." I said aloud.

I know that Loh. Just HAD to describe your appearances and weapons lest the readers get confused.

"That makes sense I guess,"

Please just STOP breaking the motherf*cking fourth wall Loh. Even Neptune doesn't does that anymore.

"*Sigh* That's 'cause Nep's a whole ton more mature when she's Purple Heart-"

I'm gonna cut you off right here and continue with the writing, though technically I'm writing/creating your every move and what you say.

"-!"

I could see Nep casually walking towards me as she summoned her usual purple techno katana.

"So... the usual fight routine with you in the morning, Loh-sensei?" Neptune asked, smiling mischievously.

What was the woman thinking now? I really shouldn't have taught her the ability to block me from reading her mind...

"...Yes. Gimme a sec first..." I stowed away my usual weaponry into my pocket dimension and instead fished out leather punching gloves with normal combat boots so as to avoid accidentally 'killing' Nep again. Don't want a repeat of last time...

I then closed my eyes as I got into an upright position with my arms crossed, as Nep readied into her battle stance after equipping her second purple katana to dual wield. Yep, I taught the girl to dual wield a lot more skillfully over the first 2 months. Have I forgotten to mention her maximum potential is still increasing tremendously by the day?

I dare to even bet on my life that she's going to become SO powerful wen she goes back to Gamindustri that she can no longer transform back into any form weaker than her Godly Form...

...Whether that's good or bad, I don't know...


And that's it guys, I think this is a good place to end this chapter here! XD

Really really really REALLY hope I didn't offend anyone of you beautiful ppl with my choice of weapons for Loh! X3

...You see, I just HAD to put in the Infinity Gauntlet as his symbol for Infinity God... I'm a fan of Thanos and the Infinity Gauntlet. My reasoning is a symbol of power, since I prefer it that way and it makes more sense. Also, just to avoid offending you guys even more if I did offend you(Again, I'm REALLY sorry, just HAD to put it in...), The Infinity Gauntlet won't be used like how Thanos uses it...

And I hope it isn't TOO cheesy with that 'second half of the reason', but I think that's how Neptune would feel if this story really happened in the series.

...One last thing...

...I hope I didn't put a ton more(I know I already put one or two more) writing landmines on the part where I mentioned Loh could kill Neptune with a hand even if she went NEXT Gen Form on his ass.

I don't have any hidden scenes to put down in this chapter, so that's all I have to say! XD

Bye Bye, everyone!

Cya all tomorrow or the day after!

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R & R!

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